Date: 08/15/10 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 18
I think Anna needs to make up her mind about who she wants. She loves Nick but kissed Jesse so she might have feelings for him. They all deserve honesty. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 08/15/10 05:00 am Title: Chapter 18
WOW Jesse.. you ask for it! Poor Carter, he is so in love that hurts. Please, Anna, you have to grow up and make your mind, girl!
Date: 08/10/10 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMG Nick could have had a heart attack there! I WOULD!
P.S.: my man is so lovable... *sighs* Mclean.... I teach you good!
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Thank you very much!!!! :)
Date: 08/10/10 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 17
Uh oh. Nick saw her kiss Jesse. Now I bet she will feel what Nick feels if he starts seeing someone else. Maybe they will work it out. I hope so. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
THANKKKKKKKKKKK YOUUUUUUUUU :D
Date: 08/06/10 12:09 am Title: Chapter 16
Hello, hello! I read the entire story and let me tell you.. it's cute, crazy, funny and HOT! Carter.. you found someone to catch up with your craziness... she just isn't aware yet. Well, she is becoming aware.
It wasn't cool to allow that whore do that, but, he told Anna the true, was a real man to do it, and he is always into a 'hard' situation *grins*. Anna, no man is 100% faithful, nor woman! Give him a break, he might surprise you!
In so many good ways!
NEXT and Congrats!
Sincerely,
Gabs =)
P.S.: her friends are cool, but they have some issues.... just saying.
Author's Response:
:D THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! AND Yes Ash and Chelle have issues that's the point lol. But the others are normal well as normal as teenagers can be. lol. ;) Thanks for the reivew!
Date: 08/06/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 16
This was very good. I knew she loved him as he loves her. At least he told her the truth. And she forgave him. Good. Now for them to admit to each other that they are in love. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thank You Thank You!!! :D
Date: 08/04/10 07:51 am Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
This is a good story but kind of hard to follow. The sentances seem to run together quite a bit and there are some punctuation errors, but I like the concept of the story and it is well written. With some editing this could be easier to read. Nice job however on the storyline, I like the concept and the interactions with the characters. Very nice.
Date: 08/03/10 01:34 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh she really does like him. I think she should get over her trust issues and move on with her life and be with Nick. Give him a chance. Keep up the great work.
MArguerite
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! :)
Date: 08/02/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 15
Great Chapter,love this story. I hope Anna can trust nick soon and see if it will be as hot as her dreams when they get together.haha
Author's Response:
Hmmmm Soon enough. When she's ready...Remember tho he needs to prove it sooo it could take a while but no worries NOT too long! :D
Date: 07/26/10 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh yeah she is in love with him too. Who wouldn't be. I can see her being cautious but she should trust him a little. Keep up the excellent work and please update soon.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
:D Thank You!!! :)
Date: 07/26/10 01:40 am Title: Chapter 14
great job xD poor carter hope he doesn't have to wait that long for her. They would make such a cute couple:D cannot wait for more please update asap :)
Author's Response:
lol. Well time files when you're having fun right? expect if you Carter then it passes so slowly...but thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!! :D
Date: 07/26/10 01:13 am Title: Chapter 14
Great Chapter,the Dream was Hot! I hope she can learn to trust him more and they can be together because it's Killing Carter.haha
Author's Response:
SWEEET!!!!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! :D
Date: 07/24/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
I really liked this one because it is getting harder fro her to deny her feelings for him. And that dream yowza!! She really does want him as much as he wants her. She just needs to trust him. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
P.S. Can you double space when you write. It is hard to read when the words are so close together.
Author's Response: Thank you!! and No I can't I'm sorry :( I've tried and failed lol.
Date: 07/24/10 08:45 am Title: Chapter 13
:) love it :) poor carter :)
Author's Response: Thanks!!! :D
Date: 07/18/10 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
She really is falling in love with him. I can see being cautious if you have been hurt in the past but not everyone will hurt you. And Nick was honest about his past. She should trust him a bit more than she does. He really seems to care for her. Great update keep them coming.
Marguerite
P.S. Just one suggestion. Could you double space when you type because it is hard to read when the words are so close together.
