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Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 02:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

I loved all the memories you added in this chapter with the poop in the sock and pranks etc.. and I also love that you chose to add humor when it came to how Brian dealt with this situation. Gotta also love the Chipmunk song and all the Nick giggling. This was a great blend of all drama and comedy. YOu took what could have been an over the top angsty scene and instead made it what I consider a very realistic portrayal of how this type of thing might have actually gone down. Great job!



Author's Response: Thanks Mare, when I was sitting at the computer debating on how Brian would handle it. Angsty wouldn't be it. Brian would have tried to joke, for both himself and Nick. At least I think so hehe. So I'm happy it came realistically.

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 01:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

I'm so glad Brian knows and handled it well (as well as can be expected), and he's right, Nick does need to tell AJ and Howie.  I'm sure Brian would be the perfect person to be his guardian when things get tough.

Laughed at the pranks they pulled!



Author's Response: Nick definitely needs to tell. Brian won't let him try and avoid it LOL. Thanks!

Reviewer: Eugenie1505 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 08:32 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Awwww

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 06:31 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

LMAO. This chapter was EPIC. Love Brian singing Chipmunks. I can so see him doing that. I LOL so many times reading this. But its good that Brian knows about his problem, and I love that they still call each other frick and frack. I think that its cute as hell that they use those names even though they're "old" :P but anyway, can't wait to see how AJ and Howie react, and I am looking forward to more story! And Woot for zombie mentions he he.

Author's Response: Thank you! Everyone loves Brian singing chipmunks, good to know lmao. I love the Frick and Frack relationship, and since they still call each other that in real life now, I decided they will then too LOL. And zombie mentions for the win!

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 06:24 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

I honestly don't know how I'm going to make it through this story...'cause I swear I'm probably going to be crying in every chapter from here on out. lol

Author's Response: Awwww I'm flattered that my story might affect you that much. (If it helps, I've already teared up writing a couple of the previous chapters lol). Thank you!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 05:43 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Good greif!!  I had to read that freakin run-on sentence of Brian's 5 times before I could make it stick!! lmao!!! Now my eye are cross!  I could actually HEAR Brian singing the chipmunk song in my head...lol! 

 

Great Chapter!  I love the dynamic you have going between Frick and Frack....nicely done!



Author's Response: LMAO it's okay I had to reread it enough times to make sure it made sense. I'm telling you, Brian would totally do that song, and he'd do it well. That's what's scary lmao. Thank you!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 05:43 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Aw, this was a sort of sweet chapter. I like the ending. I really like the way you portray Brian and Nick's friendship. :) Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I try :). Thanks, I love their friendship. I really do, so I try as hard as I can to really do it justice. Thanks MA :)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 05:28 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Aw, very sweet chap, Rose.Especially the ending Frick & Frack moment. Of course, this is exactly what I expected from Brian right down to the Alvin and the Chipmunks impression...that was AWESOME! Can't wait to see how the other guys will take it.

Author's Response: Thank you! A little shorter than normal for me, but it felt right to go with it as it was :). I love their bromance lol. And can you NOT just picture Brian out there singing all high pitched to The Chipmunks Chirstmas song? LOL So thank you.

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 04:47 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Oh poor Nick that has to be a hard thing to deal with. Brian is only trying to help but Nick is very stubborn but it's his life. Keep up the excellent work. I think the ending of this story will make me cry a lot.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Definitely must be hard, I torture him so much lol. Nick's stubborn, but it's out of fear. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 08:29 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Shit, I had a feeling Brian was gonna find out the hard way. He's gonna flip out. I can't wait to read the next chapter, update soon! :)

Author's Response: Ohhh this was definitely the hard way lol. As for how he'll react...you'll see.... Thanks!

Reviewer: Eugenie1505 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 08:12 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Finally Brian knows, even though not in a way Nick wanted.

Author's Response: Pretty much. Hard way to find out too. Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 07:45 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Well, I'm glad Brian knows now, but what a way to find out!

Great chapter, looking forward to how they'll deal with it now.

Author's Response: I know...poor Brian and poor Nick lol. Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 06:42 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Wow. What a way for Brian to find this out. I really feel for Nick, this is heartbreaking. Can't wait for another update.

Author's Response: Not the best way, but I guess it's good that he knows. Nick needs it. :( Thanks!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 06:31 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Aw, poor Nick. So confused and scared. I like this 12 year-old Baylee. lol On to the next chapter...

Author's Response: I know :( but I would be too if it was me. I'm so mean to him. 12 Year old Baylee (which i wrote before the webchat) was fun and weird to write in a way. Cause just picturing him at that age makes me feel old LOL.

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 06:03 am Title: Chapter Twelve

This chapter is pretty epic, between Nick having to say grace at the Littrell family Christmas, to the ENDING, OMG!!! DOUBLE RAINBOW ALL THE WAY!!!

Author's Response: Awwww thank you! Torturing Nick is totally DRATWATS! Ahhhhhh ahhhhhh omg! And so intense! LOL. Love ya!