Reviewer: Xhex30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

hey julie,

first...i´m absolutely lenni´s opinion, NICK IS NOT ALLOWED TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;o) basta!

i love how they behave with each other. the breakfast and their conversation... it seems to me, that they are quite comfortable with each other.
well the topless hug... i love how embarassed she is because of it!
some little things that i´ve read make me kind of sad, like he wanted to put weight on, before the next chemo starts and how..hmm... i don´t know how to explain... how he act, like this new preparation of the chemo is "business as usual"... don´t know...maybe i interpret to much...
suicide??? f*ck... that sounds SOOO bad... maybe it´s a kind of... but he decides it... maybe it´s easier for him... like, he decides when he had to go...not the cancer...i do it again... i interpret... ;o) but i say it again.... NICK IS NOT ALLOWED TO DIE!!!!!!!!!

he should wear a mask or cancel the tour... *shaking my head* sorry ladies... i think the had no chance, while he is in a shape, like he is!!

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can´t wait for more.... greetings dani
i´m glad you understand and like my reviews... i love your story.... but PLEASE don´t let him die.... only the imagine...

Author's Response: Thanks, Dani! They've been thrown into an awkward situation together, but they are both used to dealing with people in their jobs, so I think that has helped them to be able to make conversation and get to know each other quickly. I know what you mean, about the way he's acting... and of course I can't comment on how this is going to end (and to be honest, I don't know for sure yet anyway LOL). ;) Thanks so much for another great review! :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 14

He sure dropped her in at the deep end! I'm glad she called Dr Subramanien though, maybe between the two of them, they can talk some sense into him. It would be awful if he went on tour and picked up every bug around :(

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, Steph! Yes, he sure did LOL. And you're right.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 07:37 am Title: Chapter 14

Oh boy. Nick is insane. But I thought them having breakfast was cute. Poor Cary, she is getting dragged into something crazy. I had to LOL when she was checking him out. Hopefully things will work out! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy! He is pretty crazy LOL.

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 06:02 am Title: Chapter 14

lmao!! You should have put a hot chick on a car poster up on his wall..hehe...

 

I'm glad she called his Dr so she knew exactly what she's up against here.  I pictured the whole scene of Nick cooking in my mind...I love the great detail you put into your writing..you can just picture it.  And the little details, like Cary sleeps in just a tshirt and undies..lol  

 

I'd kill for my first sight in the morning to be Nick in PJ bottoms and a wifebeater...cooking for me!!! DAYAM!!!  Nice chapter Julie!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I like to make it seem as real as possible, especially when the situation is a little unrealistic. And you know I can't help but describe how hot Nick is every chance I get... he didn't have the hot bod when I wrote Broken and BMS, so I'm enjoying the descriptions way more now! =D

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/10 05:37 am Title: Chapter 14

Oh...man this is going to get interesting. Nick's gotta through chemo on the road AND hide it from everyone AND try to stay healthy with all of the traveling and people that he'll come into contact with? A simple cold could land him in the hospital with pneumonia or worse. This is going to get interesting indeed...

Can't wait to read how Cary deals with giving Nick the chemo and all of that, thanks for another great update.

Author's Response: Yes, yes it is going to be interesting... LOL. You shall see in the next chapter, which I'll probably post tomorrow. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh I would agree with him too. I do not know of anyone that could say no to that face. I can see why he want the pity and sympathy but I think the guys would want to know. Keep up the awesome work and yes I would like some background on Cary.
Marguerite

Author's Response: I know, I would too. LOL Thanks so much! Do you want background info for the songwriting thing, or do you just mean in the story? I will definitely work more of her background into the story as it goes on. :)

Reviewer: Smoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 13

Hey Girl,

Great story. I have to admit that in the first few chapters I thought about your story broken and doubted to stop reading.
But I love your writing style and I figured it would be my loss if I didn't read this story.
So keep up the good work, I'll check in as much as possible.

Hugs Smoon

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you kept reading, although I can totally understand why you thought of Broken and almost didn't go ahead. I'm glad you're enjoying this one so far! :)