Date: 07/18/10 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh god, that's not a good sign at all. As soon as I read he had a tube in his chest, I immediately thought of cancer (my mother-in-law had the tube too).
Author's Response: Aww, sorry about your mother-in-law. Yeah, not good...
Date: 07/18/10 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well I wasn't expecting that!!!
Author's Response: Heh... nope! ;)
Date: 07/18/10 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aw man this was sad. He should tell someone so he isn't all alone. No one should go through something like that by their selves. Too terrifying. Please keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Thanks, Marguerite! I know; he's not doing himself a favor by keeping it to himself. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/18/10 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think I'd feel like I'd been set up too! Wow, imagine Nick Carter actually calling.
Author's Response: Yeah, it would take a lot for me to believe it too - I'd WANT to, but you know, it seems so unbelievable LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Steph! :)
Date: 07/18/10 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
awwww...poor nick!!!!
man... you almost made me cry.. heīs so lonely...
how you, describe his feelings and the things, which going through his mind...thatīs really awesome...
this little things, like with the doctorīs name and how he denies the possibility, that he could be sick. it feels so real...
i really love it...please update soon... canīt wait for more...
iīm hooked!!!!
greetings from austria!!!!
Author's Response: Aww - thanks!!! I don't usually write in person person this way, but it's not as hard as I would have thought it'd be. I just try to think "What would I be thinking?" and write that in a way that sounds like it could be Nick. Adding those quirks, like the doctor's name, makes it seem more realistic too. Thanks so much for the review; I really appreciate your thoughtful feedback!
Date: 07/18/10 05:53 am Title: Chapter 7
I just would like to tell you again how well this is written. I can really feel myself right there with Nick. You do well with 1st person, making it sound like Nick's telling the story...but giving enough detail to give a picture of everything going on.
So yeah, Julie, once again, wanted to remind you how much I love this new story of yours!
DRATW!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks Rose! You are DRATW!!! I'm enjoying first person and glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for all your help on it!
Date: 07/18/10 05:07 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh man poor Nick. He definately needs someone there with him, he sounds so lonely. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Aww, I know... poor Nick is right. Thanks, Erika! :)
Date: 07/17/10 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aw, poor Nick...I would be scared too. I wonder what cancer he has? This is really good, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 07/17/10 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aw, poor Nick...I would be scared too. I wonder what cancer he has? This is really good, can't wait for more.
Date: 07/17/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aw Julie, great chap. Love the whole "Dr. Submarine" bit. Lol! So sad about feeling so alone. Seems like he considers telling the guys when he does find out. Wonder why he changes his mind...well, I'm assuming he does. Thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Sel! :) LOL I knew I wanted his doctor to be Indian, so I was looking through a list of Indian last names, and some of them were SO long, I didn't have the slightest clue how to pronounce them, so that's when I got that idea. Thought it'd be good a for a bit of comic relief. LOL I know, he's just creating more angst for himself by not telling anyone... silly Nick! Thanks again for the review; glad you enjoyed the update! :)
Date: 07/17/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really loving this already. I thought she would be saved by Simon though, poor Cary!
Author's Response: Thanks Steph! Thanks for checking it out, and I'm glad you liked the beginning!
Date: 07/17/10 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
Hi Julie,
I have been reading your stories for 8 years and I'm very proud of how your writing has improved.
Nick is not easy when it comes to letting someone into his heart, so I think you have written his POV the right way.
Keep up the good work and I am excited to read more of your work and this story!
Love, Pauline.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Pauline! 8 years is a long time, and you're right; my writing has definitely improved since then! It's so cool that you're still reading my stories and enjoying them; I really appreciate that! :) Glad you're liking this new one. And thanks so much for the comment on Nick's POV; that means a lot to me. You know I've written quite a bit of Nick in the last few years, but never first person from his POV like this, so it's a new challenge for me - I'm glad you think it's coming across as believable. Thanks for the great review! :)
Date: 07/17/10 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story. Poor Nick. I like how you are writing this in Nick's POV.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you're liking it so far! I've never written in Nick's POV before, so this is something new for me - glad it's working out! :)
Date: 07/16/10 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great story! i cant wait for more. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're liking it! :)
Date: 07/16/10 02:21 am Title: Chapter 6
Julie great chapter. I like how you are writing this in Nick`s POV. Makes it an easier flow descibing things "as they`re happening." Keep going I can`t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's a fun change writing in Nick's POV... I don't think I've EVER done that before. I'm usually a third person girl, and when I have done 1st person, it hasn't been Nick. So this is new for me, but I'm liking it, and you're right, it does seem to make it flow easier. Thanks again! :)
