Date: 02/01/11 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 54
Thanks so much for another update, I'm glad that Nick went and is having a great time. He needs to have hope that he will walk with the survivors next year. That version of "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" is my favorite, I know it from Dr. Greene's last ER episode "On The Beach". The end makes me cry every time. lol Great job as always.
Author's Response: Thanks, MA! You are my 600th review!!! So fitting, considering you've been reviewing every chapter... you rock!! Thank you!!! :) I adore that song, too, and it always makes me think of that episode of ER!! That's why I think it's such a sad song, even though the lyrics are supposed to be uplifting. I heard it at Kroger the other day while I was grocery shopping, and I was like, "Nooo, you can't play that song here; it makes me cry!" It's such a pretty song, though. I'm glad you liked the chapter - thanks yet again!!
Date: 02/01/11 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 54
Sorry I haven't been reviewing like I used to...i have been loving every chapter that you post, I am really happy Nick is in remission and came to do the walk with Cary. I know she has a lot she's dealing with, but for some reason I don't think the good news with Nick will last too long. Call me a pessimist but that's how I feel. Great update as always and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy! I appreciate the review! :) Glad to know you're still reading and enjoying. LOL it's okay to be pessimistic... or just realistic. The remission is good news, but he does have stage IV cancer, so you never know. Thanks again!!
Date: 02/01/11 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 54
I'm not sure how well this will work since I'm on my phone, but here goes! I really liked this chapter, it gave us a chance to see more of Nick dealing with his disease outside of the tour environment. I liked how in depth you went with the scenery and what it was like at the walk, I could picture it perfectly. I also liked how Cary held Nick's hand during, you're already aware I'm on the Cary/Nick train lol but it was a sweet moment either way and I felt it really showed the closeness and trust between them. Also, I liked the mini Broken reference when the guy with the prosthetic leg walked by. :) anyway, great chapter, Julie!! Yay for snow days!
Author's Response: Thanks, Steph!! I do Relay for Life every year, so it was fun to write about and easy to describe. LOL Yeah, I had to do a little ode to Broken there. ;) Glad you enjoyed! I love writing those little Nick/Cary moments too, so who knows, there may be more to come... Thanks again, Steph!!
Date: 02/01/11 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 54
Aww this was so sweet. He felt like he belonged and he got to see Cary. Now on with the kissing. They are very right for each other. Awesome story.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Thanks, Marguerite! So far, snow day is paying off! ;) I'm gonna try to start on the next chapter in a few minutes, and we shall see...
Date: 02/01/11 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 54
Yay! Last two chaps were great. That was really sweet of him to go to the walk. I'm sure he missed her too :) I was wondering if he was still goin to tell everyone since he's in remission now. I'm sure the Carter clan is acting like a bunch of crazy fools! Lol. I didn't review last chap, so I wanna say how cute she was when she was on the phone with Nick.
Author's Response: Thanks, Sel! :) Yeah, he probably could just keep on hiding it and never tell anyone else LOL... I guess it'll depend on what he decides for treatment. I'm glad you liked the last couple of chapters. I write Cary a lot like how I would probably act around him in that situation, sort of nervous and awkward and really giddy over talking to him but trying not to act that way... LOL. I figure a lot of people can relate to that. Thanks again for the review!!
Date: 01/31/11 04:12 am Title: Chapter 53
I can't wait for him to show up either!!!!!! I love the two of them together!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Aww, thanks, Lenni!!!!
Date: 01/31/11 03:38 am Title: Chapter 53
Cary is such a great character, she is so real. It's cute how she wanted Nick to call her and made his ringtone Evergreen. I'm glad that he finally did call her (even though we already knew he could from the end of the last chapter, but still) and that she was able to help him out a little. And it was so sweet of Nick to agree to come and perform at the walk! I'm exicted these two will be seeing each other again soon. Great chapter, Julie! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Steph! I find Cary really easy to write because as far as her feelings and reactions go, I write her a lot like I think I would feel and react. Even though she's a singer and stuff, I wanted to make her more of an "every fan" than a Mary Sue, so people could relate to her. So it means a lot that you think she seems real. :) I'm excited about the next couple of chapters too; I got pretty far into 54 today, so maybe I'll be able to get another update out before the weekend. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01/31/11 02:58 am Title: Chapter 53
Awww I loved this. Poor Cary, I can totally see her unable to readjust now. I mean how can you after the experience she had? I love that you're having her do the Relay. And I think it's cute she gave Nick a special ringtone cause she wanted so badly to know if he was calling.
Also, I think those two are adorable together, their connection. :)
Loved it DR!
Author's Response: Thanks DR! :) Yeah, I don't think I would handle readjusting to regular life well either. I always wanted to include Relay in Broken/BMS somehow, cause I've been doing it every year since I was a kid, but it never really happened, so I was excited to be able to put it into this one. Thanks; glad you think they're cute together. ;) LOL Thanks again, DR! "I think I'll put my spacesuit on..."
Date: 01/30/11 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 53
Thanks so much for the update. I love this story. Can't tell you this enough.
Author's Response: Thank YOU for the review! :) I so appreciate it, and I'm glad you're loving the story!
Date: 01/30/11 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 53
So excited that they are gonna see each other again.. But when I read this chapter I'm hurting for Nick, he seems so desperate for someone he trusts to tell him what to do. And I can understand that he must feel so scared and confused, english is not my first language and I don't understand all the medical words in this story and I guess that is kinda what it feels like to be in this situation, he gets all this words and suggestions trown at him, but no one that can really tell him what to do.. Still loving this story :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) That is a great point... Poor Nick is clueless; he needs some advice and plenty of support. At least he's not going through this completely alone anymore. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story, and thanks for your insightful review! :)
Date: 01/30/11 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 53
Thanks so much for the update, Julie. I'm glad that Nick and Cary will be together again, the Relay for Life thing is a great idea, nice tie-in with Cary's mom's cancer and his. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, MA! :) I do Relay for Life every year, so I'm excited to write about it; it fits perfectly in this story. Glad you liked the update! Thanks again! :)
Date: 01/30/11 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 53
I'm so happy they are going to see each other! It was time, I miss them being together, haha. I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!! Me too! Hehe. Glad you enjoyed! :)
Date: 01/30/11 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 53
Oh yeah she has it bad. Personally I think he agreed to do it so he could see her too. This is getting really goo to where I look for daily updates.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Yeah, she liiiiikes him. ;) Thanks, Marguerite; I'm glad you're enjoying it so much!! I always love your reviews!
Date: 01/27/11 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 52
Yay he's gonna 'fine'! Thank god....
Now call Cary, can't wait to hear what she has to say to this amazing news.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! Definitely good news for Nick, for now at least. The next chapter is started and should be up sometime this weekend. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: 01/26/11 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 52
Yay!!!!!! So glad he's in remission :) Love how he thought that Kevin and Howie can just make the decision for him. Lol. And I was cracking up about Howie doing a PowerPoint with pros and cons. That's hilarious. What a great chapter! You write each character so well. I can see them reacting/thinking just how you're writing it. I'm glad he's calling Cary...can't wait to see what'll happen next! Wonder which treatment he'll decide on.
Author's Response: Thanks again, Sel!! LOL I must confess, I borrowed the Howie Powerpoint thing from another story i read recently... and for the life of me, I can't remember which one; I've been reading too much. But there was some comment similar to that, about Howie and pie charts or something. Clearly it had an impact on me LOL. Thanks; this whole first person thing has been an experiment for me, since I usually write in third, so it's a huge compliment that you think their reactions and thoughts are realistic. Cary is easy because I write her similar to how I would think or react in that situation, but Nick is tough. Glad you're enjoying it!! :)