Date: 11/30/10 01:07 am Title: Chapter 35
Cary is quick thinker telling AJ she is diabetic. Now to keep it up. I really think she is falling for Nick. Hell I would. She is way stronger than I am. I wouldn't have been able to resist thar long. Keep up the amazing work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Thanks, Marguerite! LOL I'm right there with you. I think she realized it at the end of this chapter. :)
Date: 11/30/10 12:57 am Title: Chapter 35
As I still sit here giggling my ASS off, I'll write this review..if I can.
That was pretty quick thinking on Cary's part..tho I do hate she has to lie for him. In Nick's pants? Who WOULD'NT wanna be there! So glad I'm not Cary..I could NOT do that.
And yes..that famous video...I remember listening to that the first time and crackin the hell UP and then saying "wait..OMFG! Nickactually sounds pretty damn good singin like that!" Shocked the hell outta me. They all did actually, but Nick..just..wow. Like Cary, he continues to amaze me what he can do vocally lately.
Again, great chapter..loving this roll your on and still lovin how real this story feels.
Author's Response: Thanks Jen!! I had fun writing this chapter LOL. I dunno how many times I watched/listened to that Shattered video, and I still cracked up every time, especially at Nick's verse, "What am I still here for?" That's my favorite part. He actually sounds amazing singing like that LMAO; who knew he had that much soul? His range is just low enough that it actually kinda suits him. I love that they got Howie in on it too... and Brian's facial expressions are hilarious LOL. Thanks, as always, for the great review!!!
Date: 11/30/10 12:52 am Title: Chapter 35
Loving this chapter but I would like to point out that its West Long Branch not Beach. Sorry! Its just that I was at that show! Loved the video too, glad you used it. It was cute of Cary to lie for Nick about being diabetic. I wouldn't mind being Carter's nurse LOL ;) great update yet again!
Author's Response: Oops, sorry, I'll fix it! I probably just read it wrong and typed Beach - thanks for pointing that out! Glad you liked the chapter, Tracy! :)
Date: 11/29/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 34
Great chapter Julie! I just noticed that I hadn't left a review for the last one, sorry about that, I wasn't logged in when I read it.
I love that AJ was still considering shopping, even though it was supposedly for underwear, lol. Glad Nick's got his prescription, I hope it clears it up soon :)
Author's Response: No worries - thanks, Steph!! :) Glad you liked the chapter!
Date: 11/29/10 05:15 am Title: Chapter 34
I understand that he freaked when she said his name outside the hospital, but it's not like he's the ONLY Nick Carter in the world. HEH!
Man it'd be interesting to see if he does make it through the tour.
Author's Response: LOL c'mon, you know if you heard someone say "Nick Carter" in public, you'd turn and look too! ;) Thanks for the review, Lore!
Date: 11/29/10 05:11 am Title: Chapter 34
Awww. Poor Nicky. I feel so bad for him. He's trying so hard to keep things normal.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Aww, thanks Lenni!!!
Date: 11/29/10 04:07 am Title: Chapter 34
LMFAO I love you, once again for Woo, MD. Epic and lovely lol. Also, Nick is a serious ass for the underwear lie LMAO, but that was also hilarious.
Good chapter, what is it going to take to convince Nick to tell the others? lol
Author's Response: LOL I figured I totally could get a Dr. Woo in my story too. Did you catch his whole name? Reid Woo M.D.... say it out loud... took me awhile, but it's perfect. ;) We'll see if anyone else picks up on the subliminal hint; lemme know if you get any new readers! LOL. Nick's such a douchebag sometimes, but a loveable one. Thanks, DR!!
Date: 11/29/10 03:07 am Title: Chapter 34
I'm glad Nick agreed to go to the hospital. Hopefully the medication he got will help him feel better. The part where Nick told AJ they were shopping for lingere was very funny. As always Nick's personality comes off as very real and I feel like I am really inside his head when reading this. Great job on this chapter, I am happy to be all caught up now :)
Author's Response: Woot, you're caught up! Thanks for all the great reviews!!! :)
Date: 11/29/10 02:59 am Title: Chapter 33
Yes Nick, you will have to come clean at some point! Jeez.. I hope they start to figure it out. I mean I suppose it is a pretty out there thing for the other guys to guess, but still. I really hope that day comes soon. Though I do think Nick and Cary are really cute and would totally make a very cute couple once he is feeling better, it sucks how Brian thinks of her. Hopefully that gets cleared up. Another great chapter, Julie! (That soundcheck video you linked/used in the story was funny, I liked it a lot :)
Author's Response: Yeah, still... totally know what you mean. It's coming... And yeah, when it's finally all revealed, that will be nice for Cary too, so Brian doesn't go on thinking she's another golddigger using Nick to get a music career LOL. Thanks again, Steph, glad you liked it! :)
Date: 11/29/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 32
First of all, I laughed really hard at the part where that girl showed up and ended up with Nick's rose. Very funny. The second part was so sad, when Cary was telling Nick about her mom. I really like the relationship between Cary and Nick, and it really shines through in scenes like that one. Excellent job as always on this one Julie, you make Nick and Cary seem so real.
Author's Response: LOL thanks! I'm glad you're liking the relationship they've developed. I enjoy writing those scenes. Thank you so much for the compliments on the two characters; I really appreciate that!! :)
Date: 11/29/10 02:35 am Title: Chapter 31
Poor Nick, those sores sound painful. Nick and Cary are totally cute together. And what was up with that crazy chick licking him?! Cause you know, he doesn't have enough to worry about. LOL... some of Nick's crazy fans. Wow. I'm glad the trip to the theme park was able to take their mind off of his illness for a little while. Great chapter!
Author's Response: LOL I know, all he needs is cooties from some crazy fan. =P Thanks, Steph, glad you liked the chapter!
Date: 11/28/10 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 34
I have a strange feeling that the paparazzi recognized Cary outside the Boston hospital and snapped a picture of her with her "mystery companion"...well, at least Nick didn't have to be hospitalized. And poor him feeling all sorry for himself. I guess you can only keep a positive attitude for so long while you're feeling so crappy. Man, when people start finding out he's sick, it's NOT going to be pretty. The Boys and everyone will be so pissed at him for keeping it a secret and putting himself in more danger with his health.
Anyway, another great update. :)
Author's Response: Aw damn, this is why I shouldn't write ahead of myself; that would have been a good idea LOL. Yeah, when it happens, it definitely isn't going to be pretty. Oh Nick... Thanks for the review!! :)
Date: 11/28/10 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 34
Aw poor Nick. Hopefully he feels better with the antibiotics. That was a jerk thing to say about Cary to AJ but at least he told her he was kidding. I hope nothing else goes wrong just yet. Loving the story, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks Tracy! I enjoy writing the comic relief parts, since the rest of the story is such a downer LOL. It will pick up here for a few chapters, at least. Glad you're still loving it; thanks for the review! :)
Date: 11/28/10 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 34
Lots of funny stuff in this chapter! I love how the doctor is still Dr. Submarine when it's from Nick's POV. The part where he makes up the story to AJ is freakin hilarious! I would have died if I were Cary! And love the part about how that was guaranteed that he wouldn't ask to go...and "latching on" to the Dorough family. LOL! So, glad that Nick didn't have to be hospitalized. Hopefully the antibiotics work on whatever infection he has. Great job! Love all the medical stuff. :)
Author's Response: Thanks Sel! LOL I had fun with the whole shopping story he made up. Glad you liked it! Thank you! :)
Date: 11/28/10 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 34
Are you ready to be a doctor yet? You sure the hell should be! lmao!! Most of this chapter had me sitting here scratching my head goin whaaaaa?? lmao!! The lobster bit had me picturing the pic he tweeted, "I look like Freddy Kruger"...and he did! But aweful happy to be eating that lobster..lol!!
I'm glad he didn't fight her and just went. I'm hoping this stuff works but then again, not. I want him to tell the fellas! Someone needs to save him...from himself! As much as I understand WHY he wants to do this so badly, I also know, he is probably just gonna make himself sicker with this. UGH!! So frustrating!! Great chapter, once again!!!
Author's Response: LMAO I think this is my way of compensating for being a teacher instead of a doctor... I was always torn between the two, so I just teach for my day job and play doctor through my writing. =P LOL that tweet was from this day; that's why I had him go out for lobster! :) Yeah, you're right... silly, stubborn Nick, when will he learn? In time, he will... Thanks, Jen!!!
