Date: 10/31/11 05:02 pm Title: It begins...
ahh that is so super sad for Kevin. You should introduce a hot red head to make him want to live for something ;) okay okay .. not really but yah that is sad.
I really hate Steph... are you sure she's not working for Tristan already? LOL Oh wait MY Steph is bad! LOL
Date: 10/31/11 04:53 pm Title: No Choice
Well geez.. so he helps and then still doesn't ever get to be with her again! what horse poopie!!! If I were Kevin well no that wouldn't work because the connection to the guy would betray him if he secretly helped Alex. hrm...
And AJ has to give up Rochelle? Aw shucks but I guess it's inevitable since there surely is a new love interest for Alex in the works. :)
Date: 10/30/11 07:11 am Title: What a Joke
woot! it was Kevin but he's going to be bad and hunt down AJ? damn... I like the complexity of it. If he doesn't kill his friend/brother then his family will be killed.
Author's Response: that's the goal to get to AJ! but he has no choice eek
Date: 10/30/11 07:07 am Title: Good bye AJ McLean
oh what is her back story I wonder... and goodbye AJ Mclean? How will they explain that to the BSB fans? and another character... score (is it Kevin?) LOL
Author's Response: well not that he really stopped being AJ he just isn't mortal anymore.... well I plan to bring stephania's story out later in this story for sure it's actuallying linked.
Date: 10/26/11 11:50 pm Title: Resign…
oooh so he accepted it and drank the blood... I love the comment about why couldn't it have been sooner before he was balding. :)
Author's Response: I know right he would still have his hair! lol yes he resigned lol
Date: 10/25/11 11:26 pm Title: The Truth...
okay a couple of things confused me about this chapter. I made note of them so we could discuss. I do like the history of the vampires and how Alex came to be. Interested to read more.
Author's Response: ok yeah uhm I tried looking you up on aim but could not find you. I'll email you. there's more to come. :)
Date: 10/25/11 10:52 pm Title: Identity revealed…
so he's some kind of king! wow! very interesting. I want to know why his memory was erased, what he needed protection from and who is this queen? is she a former lover of his or his mother. LOL.
I see every now and then you use YOUR instead of YOU'RE but nothing major grammar wise.
Author's Response: gulp yeah you might find more errors as you go. I will fix them. yes he is a king! thanks for doing this. :)
Date: 10/25/11 10:37 pm Title: Introduction
Interesting beginning. I found a few awkward sentences but other than that I'm definitely looking forward to more. I wanna know abuot the woman and the light and what the heck happened to him.
Author's Response: yeah I warned you about the awkwardness lol yay I'm glad you're reading wohoo
Date: 11/26/10 12:08 am Title: Reveal...
Ok you did not go with my prediction....good thing i didn't write it! ;-) good chapter though, i just thought it made more sense for Brian to be the other angel, but i do like that you changed it up....can't wait to read brian's and howie's reactions....keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Awe well I might surprise you... hehe. I would still love to know your prediction please do tell! :)
Date: 10/28/10 02:47 pm Title: Introduction
could you read Love Thirst and tell me what you think. and then tell your friends, thx ^>^
Author's Response: reading it... my email is summer03.bsb@gmail.com
Date: 10/27/10 03:07 pm Title: Introduction
could you read my story amnd tell me what you think? plz and thx. im still kinda working on it tho.
Author's Response: sure which one though? let me know.
Date: 10/26/10 06:50 am Title: Farce...
I hope Alex is Ok
Author's Response: you'll see... hehe.
Date: 10/23/10 06:42 am Title: oh momma....
No I like the title, you should keep it, it might get confusing to people if you change the title. Wow so two angels, vampire, a human and shape shifter, I'm guessing Brian is the shape shifter. Can't wait to read more, update soon. I've been busy and I figured you were too, so I didn't want to bug you about our story.
Author's Response: I will keep the title then... You'll find out soon enough who is who. hehe. I have been busy but as soon as I have time to think clearly I will send you my chapters we are in no hurry right? thanks again for your review.
Date: 10/21/10 03:22 am Title: oh momma....
AJ's mommy is a fan? Of course she would be....however, HOWIE IS A SHAPE SHIFTER????? That is fricking awesome!!!! I have prediction for this story....but im gonna wait for at least two more chapters to see if that is where you are going....till the next chapter ;-)
Author's Response: Yes raquel is a fan... hehe. Ooh a prediction? I would love see what your prediction is? Thanks for R&R
Date: 10/20/10 03:36 pm Title: Introduction
I like your story so far. but is it a dream?
Author's Response: Thank you... You'll have to wait and she if its a dream.... hehe
