Date: 11/01/11 05:14 pm Title: Pandora's Box
ooooh how do they need them, what's the plan? what's going t happen next? How is AJ and the others going to get away from Albert and Tristan!! okay caught up now we can chat plot if that's where you are stuck ;)
Date: 11/01/11 05:07 pm Title: Shape shifter down, one angel to go….
Nick did a good job of holding his desire for Brian back. LOL And of course how would Brian react to that news being all Bible boy and such.
I feel there are a few incosistencies and possible holes in the story but it is not something that keeps you from understanding the story as a whole. :)
Date: 11/01/11 05:00 pm Title: Reveal...
so Brian is the shape shifter huh? I thought Nick knew one of them was an angel and a shape shifter that he and AJ were discussing which would be which? hrm...
Date: 11/01/11 04:49 pm Title: Farce...
hrm so Albert was the traitor.. interesting that Steph couldn't pick up on that. talented at hiding his thoughts.
Date: 11/01/11 04:36 pm Title: oh momma....
holy crap!! what an unsual group that they all are special! is the fallen angel attracted to the real angel.. LOL fantastic!!! heeheee
and Kevin is human *sigh*
Date: 11/01/11 04:23 pm Title: The plan.
ah it was a ruse, I looked it up, rouse is a word too but means something else and is pronounced differently. I hope Stephen doesn't get caught, he is taking an awful risk. But if he can see the future wouldn't he be able to see the outcome of the war? HEH.
Nick's attracted to Brian!! well that explains A LOT ;) LOL
Date: 11/01/11 04:14 pm Title: Surprise!
oh poor Rochelle.. is she really pregnant or is it a rouse to keep her alive? must read to find out. So since Kevin knows about AJ they decided he could know about Nick? lol
synonyms seem to be where you have the most mistakes and it's understandable because they are words so spell check won't pick them up :)
Date: 11/01/11 03:38 pm Title: Pinky swear?
That's cool that Nick is going to help him now. And now I wonder what Alicia is up to, what a complex story.
So from the helping you out stand point, I found a few things that made me go "What? I don't remember anything about that." In this chapter. I wasn't sure if I missed something, was reading it wrong or what sooo...
Date: 11/01/11 03:22 pm Title: Choices...
I wonder if they will still get to Rochelle and turn her against AJ? That would be sad but it would add so much tortue to AJ. lol.
Hrm, duh AJ fallen angels and vampires.. not friends...
Date: 10/31/11 10:49 pm Title: Alicia...
okay so Nick is part angel and he knows it and chooses to be human, usually fallen angels do not like vamps but Alicia made a deal with them or all of them did to keep werewolves away from them.
Interesting and I like Kevin want to know if the others are special too. LOL
Date: 10/31/11 10:39 pm Title: Fallen Angel
Nick's a fallen angel and he can easily kill vampires... hrm so many interesting things can be done with that. :)
Date: 10/31/11 10:20 pm Title: Red...
ooh he was too late. Oh sure she was fighting and couldn't make it. I doubt it... pshaw she's evil.
oh noes for Rochelle!!!
Date: 10/31/11 09:31 pm Title: Love tested...
make an AJ comment make an AJ comment. LOL.. Okay so Steph seems like she could be working the angles and be bad after all. funny that she wasn't around, what is her limit of hearing thoughts exactly? He said wait outside not one town over!!
oh and Kevin *sigh* he's back with his family! yay!
Date: 10/31/11 05:24 pm Title: Backfired....
oh good his family is safe! I feel bad for Cindy though... :( Kevin has that connection though that will have to come back to bite them somehow.
I saw a few style and grammar errors, nothing major that it can't be looked over in the long run... and one that made that caused a bit of confusion. Each person speaking should be on their own line. :)
Date: 10/31/11 05:10 pm Title: Hello Canada....
Yah no kidding Brian, that is what I'd be asking too. On and off with Kristin so long and now poof she's gone and another chick is in her place already? Brian is going to be hard to convince. this is totally and AJ story yet I always comment on Kevin's stuff.... don't know why....
I wonder if he will break up with Rochelle or if maybe she'll agree to become one... or be his blood bank... lol... probably not though.
