Date: 09/06/10 06:59 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Nineteen
nooo that cant be Nick!!! tell me its Desi he killed right??!!!!
Date: 09/06/10 06:45 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Nineteen
I have a feeling he just stabbed some poor, unsuspecting soul. That couldn't have been Nick's room! No security around the room....
I'm at my full on addiction right now.....I'm needing more and more!! ARG!!!!
Date: 09/06/10 06:20 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eighteen
OMG! Who's his target right now!?! Don't leave me hanginggggggggggggg!!! ARGH!!!!
Date: 09/06/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Seventeen
Oh yeah...Mimi and Kiko are GREAT guard dogs! lmaoooo!! They will tear Leon's ankles UP man!!! lmaoooo!!
Wow..as if Nick hasn't been thru enough..the meds wear off. I'm so happy the nurses came to get Zoe to be with him. I'm still loving the connection between the two of them....he needs that more than he needs Kayla right now..
Date: 09/06/10 04:46 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Sixteen
I think it sucks that Zoe didn't tell Nick that Kayla was there. I think he would want o know. I really am on the edge of my seat waiting for more of this. Keep it coming.
Marguerite
Date: 09/06/10 03:45 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen
Good and bad. Leon escaped and I know where he is headed. Either to kill Nick or rape Kayla. I hope someone stops him. And I think Kayla and Zoe should be allowed to see Nick. Leslie was funny with AJ. I just hope he doesn't try to get KAyla. SHe belongs with nick. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 09/06/10 03:38 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen
Oh I agree that things happen for a reason. It was sad that it had to happen to her that way but I believe that she was meant to come into Nick's life. Kayla to. Hopefully as someone he can love and who will love him in return. Please keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Date: 09/06/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Thirteen
Finally they meet. Now for them to make peace. I really want Brian to take Desi and have him tell them everything so Nick can be free and get a break. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Date: 09/06/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen
Holy shit
Author's Response: LOL Is that a good holy shit or a bad one?
Date: 09/06/10 03:05 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen
am on the edge now.... anything can happen in your stories , you amaze me !!!
Date: 09/06/10 05:01 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Fifteen
Wow...can't believe he admitted it to Leslie. I just pray Leon doesn't track Nick down at the hospital! Or better yet..let him..and unleash Zoe on his ass!!!
Author's Response: I feel like he'd tell Leslie because she reminds him so much of Nick. There's a dynamic to AJ and Nick's relationship that I haven't had a chance to develop here yet because AJ was too busy avoiding Nick because of his habits before, but it'll become evident later in the story, and that dynamic's what made him tell Leslie. ;) And haha I'd like to see Zoe kick Leon's freaking ASS.
Date: 09/05/10 09:28 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Fourteen
GOOOOOOOOOO ZOE!!!! I love her to death!! She thinks like I do...but then again, its that motherly protection instinct kickin in. I can't wait till she sets him down and does explain about David and Davey. I truly believe everything happens for a reason. I love how the real Nick believes this as well. He's said several times he wouldn't go back and change anything, because it's made him who he is today.
From your response to my last review, I know what you mean. Seeing the way the real Nick has matured over these last few years has made me so damn proud of him. He's become a strong man, what he's been thru has made him so. He could have stayed on that path to distruction but he chose to change it all and become a better man because of it. I also strongly believe that its a big part of him being so normal is because of the rest of the fellas. They are his true family...its amazing he turned out so normal. But it's because of them, and Kevin, I believe. I also think Kevin leaving the group also forced him to grow up a bit. All I know is, he's made me so proud of him and so impressed with the person he's become. I have so much admiration and love for him, moreso than any other celeb.
Author's Response: Nick and AJ both I feel like deserve a lot of respect from the fans. I mean I respect the other guys too, all of them have gone through shit, but Nick and AJ did it without the support of full families, they both came from broken homes with a lot of history and stuff, and that stuff is hard to overcome. They both were their own enemies, too, and that is also extremely hard to overcome. I just really honestly don't even think of them as "celebrities" as much as I think of them as friends -- the whole group, actually. Going to a BSB show isn't about going to see a concert with pretty lights and costumes and stuff, although that's there, but it's like seeing my buds again. *shrug* Maybe that's weird, but that's how it feels to me!
Zoe's maternal instincts are definitely on overdrive with Nick and Kayla... ;) As for the David/Davey story... it's gonna be a great chapter when it comes out.
Just for the record, the David/Davey story is based partially in truth to stories my mother told me about her high school sweetheart. So there is an element of reality in the story of Zoe's past. I do this a lot with characters, I'll meld complete fiction with reality from many different places, kind of borrowing truth and steeping it in a story. I think that's why seeing interviews and stuff with the BSB actually INSPIRES my fan fiction writing, where as I know theres' a lot of writers that are hindered by seeing interviews... Glad you're enjoying the story!! :)
Date: 09/05/10 06:52 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve
This made me cry... it's so moving
Date: 09/05/10 05:35 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Eleven
I love this story. Poor Nick.
Date: 09/05/10 05:25 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Twelve
At least someone loves him. He needs a real mother and Zoe is perfect for him. Maybe they can help each other heal. Please update soon. This is one of my all time favorite stories.
Marguerite
