Date: 09/03/10 02:03 am Title: Chapter One Hundred-Six
I hope Nick is okay. Leon is a nasty dirty horrible piece of scum.
Date: 09/02/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Five
Damn, AJ. You could have easily just pushed her away, but you didn't. As a friend, you suck ass. As for Kayla, she really doesn't deserve Nick nor is she really in love. Not if she's so easily distracted after JUST MEETING AJ. They both can gtfo. (Can you tell I have no sympathy? LOLs)
Date: 09/02/10 03:54 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Five
Oh Kayla I can see having feelings for someone but this is one of Nick's best friends. I am glad AJ had the sense to get out of there like that. I hope she feels like crap. Please update soon. I have to know what happens.
Marguerite
Date: 09/02/10 03:52 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Four
Oh fucknuts!! I hope they shoot Leon first. Nick has been through too much. Plus I hope he never finds Out about Kayla. That would be the final coffin nail. Please update soon.
Marguerite
Date: 09/02/10 03:48 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Three
Oh shit Kayla what are you doing? AJ can be a sweet guy but you are playing games with him. You have Nick who needs you and who you think you are in love with. PLease update soon.
Marguerite
Date: 09/02/10 03:37 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Two
Oh Leon I so hope you roast in hell after your new cellamate Bubba has a very pornographic honeymoon with you. Please keep up the wonderful work.
Marguerite
Date: 09/02/10 03:35 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-One
I'm glad Zoe is ok however I have a weird feeling about Kayla liking Aj. That could get complicated. Please update soon.
Marguerite
Date: 09/02/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred
Oh Nick you will deserve Hawaii after this. Please tell me he makes it out alive? Keep the updates coming.
Marguerite
Date: 09/02/10 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Ninety-Nine
Oh man this made me cry. They sounded so sweet together. I can see her wanting to stay with him. Poor Zoe she wanted to be a dancer. I wonder how she got hurt like that? Please update soon.
Marguerite
Date: 09/02/10 03:26 pm Title: Chapter Ninety-Eight
Oh Nick I really hope you come out of it ok. Leon needs to roast in hell. And really suffer. I love the constant updates. Keep them coming.
Marguerite
Date: 09/02/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter Ninety-Seven
Uh huh. Watch out Kayla. Aj can be deadly charming when he wants to be. I hope Zoe is ok. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 09/02/10 02:43 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Five
is she for real??? she just met Aj!!! she cant just cheat on Nick this easily!! and Aj you should have pushed her not just stand still !! and poor Nick whats gonna happen to him.
Date: 09/02/10 12:48 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Three
Kayla.....don't go there, stick with Nick even though he's in jail but I have a good feeling he won't be there much longer..Go Brian!
Thanks for the updates!
Date: 09/01/10 08:39 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred-Two
You're amazing, this is like a whole novel already and you're telling us there's going to be a sequel? Wow, keep them coming girl!
Author's Response: Definitely gonna be a sequel. A lot of the newer additions to the story-line that's coming up now are gonna be the main threads of the sequel. :)
Date: 09/01/10 05:27 pm Title: Chapter One Hundred
I'm fully immersed in this story and waiting on pins and needles to figure out what happens. AJ better not fuck things up with Nick and Kayla, Leon better get what's coming to him and Desi better make things right.
You're SO good at making real characters, I love your work :) Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I try to keep character sketches so I don't overstep the bounds of a character's personality. I have this great book Writer's Digest put out called "The Writer's Guide to Character Traits" -- It's an EXCELLENT resource for writing character sketches and I highly recommend the book. It backs up with facts, personality, everything about almost every character type or trait you can think of - from criminal mind to various psychological disorders to age processes, etc. Great book! :)
