Date: 08/09/10 11:21 am Title: Chapter Seventy-Four
Loving this story! Missing the updates though. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I was gone for a week, and now that I'm back I realized I'm gonna have to break this story into two parts and make a sequel.. so I'm trying to decide where I want to split it and how I want to go about doing so... Storyline editing tends to hold me up in the updates area, but I'm working on it. I have the next chapter half written, and as soon as I get the storyline fixed it's gonna roll fast. :)
Date: 08/04/10 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Seventy-Four
Oh shit. He tries to do the right thing and they accuse him of murder. I really hope he gets out of jail and cleared of all charges. Keep up the awesome work.
MArguerite
Date: 08/03/10 10:24 pm Title: Prologue
Great! Please let me know when it will be published. Or if you're going to do on your own, you could always let Lulu.com help you. I will buy it from there for sure!
Author's Response: It'll be awhile I'm only in the extreme rough draft portions of it, but I am working. :) Thank you!!
Date: 08/03/10 10:15 pm Title: Prologue
And yet another amazing chapter! I really want to see a novel of you standing on my bookshelves!!!!
Author's Response: Aww thank you.. I'm actually working on one... :)
Date: 08/03/10 02:20 pm Title: Chapter Seventy-Two
Thanks for the update!
Nick is a real gentleman ;)
Date: 08/03/10 01:22 am Title: Chapter Seventy-Two
Good he is going to tell the police (hopefully with a lawyer present) what happened. I so hope they believe him. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Date: 08/03/10 01:13 am Title: Chapter Seventy-One
Now that really sucks. He was defending her from a rapist and he gets arrested. Gota love the law. I hope things turn out ok for him.
Marguerite
Date: 08/03/10 01:00 am Title: Chapter Seventy
Oh shit he tried to save her but she wanted to die. That is one nasty mind fuck. I hope the cops believe him. Excellent update.
Marguerite
Date: 08/03/10 12:48 am Title: Chapter Sixty-Nine
Oh yes Leon got his ass handed to him. Fucker deserved it. Now for the police to finally lock him up for good and find out that Nick didn't have anything to do with Krystal'e death. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Date: 08/03/10 12:35 am Title: Chapter Sixty-Eight
Oh man would I like to see him in that suit. YUMMY!!!! And the flowers were so sweet. He deserves some real love in his life like what he has found with Zoe and Kayla. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 08/03/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter Sixty-Seven
Personally I think he should go talk to his attorney about what he remembers before the police match his Camero's tires. Awesome updates keep them coming.
Marguerite
Date: 08/03/10 12:22 am Title: Chapter Sixty-Six
Oh shit he was trying to get her to pull over and maybe ran her off of the road. While being high. This is not good. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 08/03/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter Sixty-Five
Oh yes Nick has found real people and real love so it has changed him for the better. I really like this story. It has me hooked.
Marguerite
Date: 08/03/10 12:14 am Title: Chapter Sixty-Four
Lauren is a skanky ho. She wants Nick even though he is with Kayla. She might be feeding stuff to the media. And Leon is out on bail??? WTF!! I hope Kayla has security with her at all times. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 08/03/10 12:06 am Title: Chapter Sixty-Three
That was really sweet of Nick to do that fore Heather. Not many artists would. Now I REALLY hope he didn't kill Krystal. He should contact his lawyer. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
