Date: 07/26/10 06:30 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Aw this was sweet. I like Zoe but she comes off as...harsh. She softened up up about Nick in this chap :)
Date: 07/26/10 06:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Six
What does slutzilla want now? Oh let me guess she was more popular with Nick and now she wants more of it. Skanky ho. Zoe made me laugh. Nick really should set her straight. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/26/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five
Oh poor Nick being with a 16 year old version of himself. Must have been hell. They do seem to be getting along better though. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/26/10 06:17 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Six
LOOOOOOOOOL
Date: 07/26/10 05:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four
She sounds like a sweet kid. I can't wait until she meets Nick. Maybe they can help each other heal. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/26/10 02:37 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
I loved the use of the frogs as a way to describe how he feels about the way people treat him.
Date: 07/25/10 11:15 pm Title: Journal Entry
Very insightful of Nick. I cannot believe everyone for yelling at him because he wants to save a living creature. Screw them. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/25/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Oh I do agree with Kayla. Zoe needs to see herself as worthy and I don't think she does. Funny thing is which one of them would be better for Nick. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/25/10 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
WOW... I really liked this Chapter... It was very deep. Cant wait for more.
Date: 07/25/10 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Altho that chapter maded me lol..A LOT!...it was a very sweet and insightful chapter. Nick is deff gonna have better therapy from this woman and hell, Zoe may learn a thing or two from him as well.
Date: 07/25/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
lol I love this chapter!! and how Nicks word effected her on his frog theory.
Date: 07/25/10 07:17 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
This really made me cry, I so can relate to what Nick said about the frogs and why he wanted to save them, I have disabilities myself, so.. good job Hannah!
Date: 07/25/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Aw, I loved this chapter! He's such a little kid and the ending to the chap was sweet and perfect. Lol
Date: 07/25/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Ok soI'm not from the US but do you really need to place your hands at eight and four or......?
Because in my country it is still 10 and two haha sorry probably a stupid question.
Thanks for the updates! It's a really original story.
Author's Response: Yeah, and for exactly the reason Zoe said... It's called push-pull steering method lol
Date: 07/25/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Well look at that they are both learning from each other. Shocking. This is getting better every time I read it. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
