Date: 07/23/10 04:51 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh so that's what is bothering him no one came to see him. I can understand why he wouldn't want his so called family to visit. Now for his to meet Zoe and her niece. I have a feeling they will change his life.keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/23/10 08:23 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
WOW.. just wow. just don't make Leslie the bad girl here, I like her.
Author's Response: She was the only one that gave a damn lol..I like her, too.
Date: 07/23/10 05:57 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Wow, I loved how you wrote the beginning. Seemed extremely awkward the way everyone was quiet and just looking around. And the ending was so sad with him begging them to stop. I hope that the doc can do some family therapy to help them get their shit together.
Date: 07/23/10 05:54 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Aw. Loved the fish mention...about them being free. And I feel for him about missing the guys. Wonder why they haven't visited?
Date: 07/23/10 05:34 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
What a family!!!! I feel bad for Nick.
Date: 07/23/10 05:32 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Oh god, the way you wrote the Carter clan seems so dead on, it's funny and sad at the same time. Poor Nick; now Dr. Haseltine will know exactly why he didn't want his family there LOL.
Author's Response: lmao... I was worried they wouldn't sound right. The only one I was confident about was Aaron.
Date: 07/22/10 09:21 pm Title: Journal - Week 1
Like it or nit Nick you are telling them about you with everything you write. However I do think he should get some personal time. You can see him coming out of his shell with every entry. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/22/10 09:19 pm Title: Journal - Week 1
Yet again, very realistic chapter! As if you don't update enough, but I really wanna know what role Zoe has in this story!
Date: 07/22/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
I really like where this is going... You are way too talented to write on here *No offense btw* When can I buy your own book of fiction???
Author's Response: lol oh gosh. *RED* well hopefully one day i'll have a not-fan-fiction story written and i'll be able to tell ya the answer to that question! lol thanks.
Date: 07/22/10 08:46 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I so laughed and cried because this chapter shows that no matter what happens Nick & Brian will always be best friends. Gotta love Bri! :D
Date: 07/22/10 08:38 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
I like the lesson she is trying to teach them. They could be killed by a drunk driver anytime they get onto a car. Maybe Nick can talk to her class. That would be good for them. Keep the updates coming.
Marguerite
Date: 07/22/10 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Oh lord Nick's sense of humor is very different. Hopefully in time he will realize that the doctor is trying to help him. I can't wait till he meets the ladies. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 07/22/10 08:02 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
is there going to be a girl that helps nick and thay fall in love is her name kayla i hope it is
Date: 07/22/10 08:01 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I'm glad Nick is "okay," and I'm glad he's going to the rehab floor... hopefully that will make a difference.
Date: 07/22/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Scary stuff... you described Brian and Leighanne's reaction at getting that 4:30 a.m. phone call perfectly. Poor Brian, and poor Nick!
