Date: 04/01/14 03:31 am Title: Epilogue
Just wanted to say that i really really loved and enjoyed reading this story!! I could not get away from it! I'm looking forward to read more of your stories!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's one of my favorites :)
Date: 12/17/10 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely LOVE this story! Every night when I go to bed, I hope of waking up as Cupcake Girl! Brian stories are hard to find, especially GOOD ones. I love his struggle with right and wrong. Great job! :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I myself wish I could get even a tenth of what cupcake girl got. Reckless Brian is TOTALLY hot. :)
Date: 10/17/10 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I never took interest in this story until now...It was the summary and the first couple of chapters that hold me back. I was like, huh is he dreaming? is this real? I'm not really intro that stuff (although I loved the movie Inception haha). But yesterday I was bored and wanted to read a fanfic. So I started reading this story and I really liked it! There aren't many Brian FFs out there. It was pretty funny to read about Nick and Lauren too, cute couple (with a baby lol).
So well done, great fanfic!
Author's Response: Thanks! The first couple chapters will throw people off but the story ends up being almost nomal, haha. :) Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 10/13/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1
What a great story!~! I read the whole thing in two days. Brian has never been a great interest to me, but you have a way with words!
LOVED IT!!!
Author's Response: Well I'm glad I peaked your interest in Mr. Littrell! He's ALWAYS got my interest. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the reviews.
Date: 10/12/10 03:43 am Title: Epilogue
Well, no one can say that Bri doesn't give lucky for his ladies to grow... Two business women! Oh boy.... Leigh haves a man!!!! GREAT!
Beautiful!
''I took a sip of punch. Leighanne and her boyfriend Jesse were talking to her sister. Jesse was a great match for Leigh. More importantly, he was good with Baylee. I watched him put his arm around her waist. She leaned into him comfortably.
It was good to see Leigh happy again.
"Watch out, crawler coming through!"
--OHHHHHH EVAN!!! Carter ready to THE big thing! Oh boy! Another Carter male!
'Leigh was already on her way over with towels. Baylee splashed at her. She tossed the towels down and went to flick some water his way. He grabbed her hand and pulled her in.
I was waiting for the freak out, but it didn't come. When she came up, she started laughing.
It was a moment of pure insanity. It was November. It was freezing. But the four of us didn't care. I looked around at the happy faces around me.
This was my family.
And I wouldn't change a thing.''
---Awwwwww what 13 months doesn't do to ppl! TIME!
Author's Response: Time, look where we are and what we've been through
Time, sharing our dreams :) -- good song
Date: 10/12/10 03:37 am Title: Chapter 59
“We had spent the night making love on the mattress in the bakery. Now it was morning and our sanity was returning.”
--- with the morning comes the light….
“Nick answered on the second ring.
"Hey, I'm surprised you're awake," he said. "You were channeling your inner Spiderman in the alley last night. All you needed to do was hang upside down. Did you have a good makeup session with Mary Jane?"
--I think Carter would say that.. I bet he was eating too.
“Nick made a humming noise. I had a bad feeling.
"You have they key, right?"
"Well, it's a funny story...Silas ate the key."
"What do you mean Silas ate the key?"
---OOHHHH ahahhahaha!!! Picturing Carter saying that….
"I better go with you," he said.
"Yeah, I think you better," I said. I glanced over at Kenzie. She looked extremely amused.
I hoped she still looked that way once I told her where we were going.”
---Oh yes, it`s better!
"We've got a problem, Heather."
---more than one.. but, I`m not the one counting.
"I haven't seen you for awhile. How's Ms. Kitty?"
Nick shoved his hands in his pockets.
"She's knocked up."
Heather clicked his tongue. "Y'know I carry more than toys."
Nick rolled his eyes. "Don't start on me."
---Carter you start by yourself!
"I make my own conditioner. I can bring you a bottle."
Heather paused in the middle of trying another key. "Seriously?"
"Sure, no problem."
"That's so sweet of you. Tell you what. I'll give you a free goodie bag in exchange."
Kenzie smiled. "Okay."
--and Bri there… oh Lord…
"Hey Heather, what's something good for pregnant chicks?" Nick asked. Heather smiled.
"Let me show you." He walked out from behind the counter and headed towards Nick.
--See it! He asks for trouble!
"In your dreams, Littrell," she said. I pulled her closer.
"Only in my dreams?" I insinuated. Kenzie blushed.
"Bad choice of words."
I kissed her softly. Kenz snuggled up against me.
"At least I won't be lying when I call you my dream girl," I whispered. "Because you are."
"In more ways than one."
---Oh dreams…
Date: 10/12/10 03:24 am Title: Chapter 58
“… but I think with the all black ensemble and my hat tucked low over my face, I was still unrecognizable.”
---Nice one Littrell!
"Kenz, it's Bri," I said. "Pleae don't call the cops on me. I don't look good in handcuffs."
---Who said you don`t?
“He looked like he was either meditating or eating something. Even though I was sure the batter incident had caused a commotion, he was oblivious. He wasn't even looking into the building.
Some super spy he was.”
---*shaking head*
"I know it's not."
Kenzie shook her head.
"I appreciate your enthusiasm to break into the shop, but please go."
---Of course you know, Littrell…. *shaking headē*
"I'm sick of the whole idea of right and wrong," I said. "All I care about right now is you and me."
--- I bet you are.
"Hey, Bri is everything okay?" I heard Nick ask from the end of the alley. I didn't stop kissing. Through barely opened eyes I witnessed another amazing lightning display. I waved him away.
"Ohhh," Nick said. "Mission accomplished. My work here is done."
---You are a hard worker Carter.
Author's Response: LoL I love that Nick said his mission was accomplished. :) All he did was sit under an awning out of the rain. Haha.
Date: 10/11/10 10:58 pm Title: Epilogue
Yay! I'm so glad they all get along now. Happy ending. Is there going to be sequal?
When are you going to update Fallen Angel? I'm missing Kay-d bug!!!!!
Author's Response: No sequel. I'm pretty happy with how er, happy everyone is. LoL. I'm working on the next chapter of Fallen Angel right now. I should have it up tonight!
Date: 10/11/10 09:53 pm Title: Epilogue
Aww that was sweet. I'm glad to see it all worked out. Leigh found someone and made peace with Brian & Kenzie. See one big happy family. I weird one but then who in the hell wants normal. Not me. The BSB family has always been unique and I wouldn't have it any other way. Excellent job as always. This will be missed.
Marguerite
P.S. What are you working on next??? Perhaps Nick & Lauren's story?
What ever it is I'm sure it will be as wonderful as all of your work.
Author's Response: I'm working on the Coaster Girls and a possible collaboration. I'm also going to be finishing Murder at Backstreet Mansion. We'll see what else I can cook up! :)
Date: 10/11/10 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 59
Oh you are a comedian at heart. MAn this made me laugh so much. Brian at a place called the Pleasure Chest with "Heather". Only Nick would know someone like that. Or AJ. I'm glad to see they made up. I have to admit when I first started reading this I was skeptical but you quickly won me over with your wonderful characters. Keep up the awesome work in whatever you write.
Marguerite
P.S. Please tell me you are planning on writing Nick & Lauren's story/. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh AJ would so totally know someone like that. I'm glad I won you over! This was a different one for me to write as well, but I love magick. As for your P.S. - no, i'm not going to write Nick and Lauren's story. I think you can tell that they are going to live happily ever after with that little blonde baby boy of theirs :)
Date: 10/11/10 08:45 pm Title: Epilogue
AWESOME ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm SO glad everything worked out in the end!!! Though, I've got to say, my pointy sticks hold another opinion - lol.
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL your pointy sticks are always sad when they can't do their work. :) Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 10/11/10 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 59
Lmao! I wish I were his dream girl - lol.
~Lenni~
Date: 10/11/10 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 58
Whoot! He can handcuff me to him ANY old day!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL I know, who would run from a wet dangerous looking Brian? Not me, that's for sure :)
Date: 10/11/10 08:06 pm Title: Epilogue
Awww that was a great end of the story! And ooooh Brian and Kenzie are getting married! No surprise, of course. Thanks for writing & sharing!
Author's Response: LoL of course they're getting married. :) Kenzie needs a hot hubby! Glad you enjoyed the story. :)
Date: 10/11/10 07:51 pm Title: Epilogue
Absolutely perfect.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
