Date: 09/14/10 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 21
Good. Helping Alex is what she needs to get over her problems. That and kicking Brandon in the balls for being a lying asshole. Keep up the amazing work.
Marguerite
Date: 09/14/10 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 20
Yeah now she has her whole support system with her. Poor thing needs it. Please keep up the amazing work.
Marguerite
Date: 09/14/10 09:35 am Title: Chapter 20
I just love their relationship and somehow I can imagine Nick just like that as a father.
Date: 09/14/10 01:54 am Title: Chapter 20
oh my goodness, i nearly cried. this was so cute and touching. excellent work!
Date: 09/14/10 01:50 am Title: Chapter 20
Aw, a sweet chapter. :) Good for Ally to tell Nick all of those things, it seems like she's learned from what has gone on with Jen. Poor AJ staying with Nick and Ally for awhile, I hope his divorce can go as smoothly as possible. But at least he's staying with two people who love him. Great job.
Date: 09/14/10 01:03 am Title: Chapter 20
I absolutely adore the relationship between Ally and Nick. If only all children could have relationships like that with their parents....
Author's Response: I know. I sure as hell don't haha.
Date: 09/12/10 09:27 am Title: Chapter 19
This was really a touching chapter, again so realistic!
Date: 09/12/10 03:47 am Title: Chapter 19
i think ally is best best and nick really did a great job raising her. i love the relationship she has with alex as well. wonderful work!
Date: 09/11/10 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
Great Chapter,aww this chapter broke my heart. You write Ally's feelings beautifully and love the way Nick and AJ always make her feel better,the relationships in this are great. keep up the great work and hopefully now that Ally knows what Jen thinks of her she won't go see her anymore.
Date: 09/11/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 19
Another great chap. I think you're writing Ally's feelings beautifully. She knows she shouldn't care and doesn't want to, but at the same time...of course she wants to be loved by her mom! I love to see both AJ and Nick comfort her. It's very sweet.
Date: 09/11/10 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 19
See Ally you have a wonderful family. Forget about that nasty bitch. You don't need her. Keep up the wonderful writing.
Marguerite
Date: 09/11/10 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
Aw, poor Ally. :( My heart hurts for her too. I love her and AJ's relationship, I know he would be that caring in real life. :)
Date: 09/11/10 04:25 am Title: Chapter 18
WOW! Whaaaat a bitch. Holy crap, dishwasher too, shows you how much she thinks of her 'daughter'. Go home to Daddy girl, he'll take care of this mess.
Date: 09/10/10 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 18
That was so hurtful and mean. She's a bitch and don't deserve Ally. So she get what's coming to her.
Date: 09/10/10 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm so glad she didn't sleep with him! I cant believe she decided to go meet her mom. The ending was really sad...I wonder if she's done with her mom now. She really needs to appreciate the family she does have :)
