Date: 09/10/10 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
Aw, poor Ally. :( Maybe Jen didn't intend for things to end like that, but who knows? I feel bad for both of them. And I'm sure Nick's gonna find out that Ally lied to him about French Club. Can't wait for more.
Date: 09/10/10 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 18
Aww the ending was sad,I hoped Jen would introduce her as her daughter,Hopefully Nick doesn't get mad her for lying. She seems to be doing alot of that.
Date: 09/10/10 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh I had high hopes that her so called mother would be there for her but she is a conniving skeezoid. Ally is much better off without her. Excellent update.
Marguerite
Date: 09/10/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh I had high hopes that her so called mother would be there for her but she is a conniving skeezoid. Ally is much better off without her. Excellent update.
Marguerite
Date: 09/10/10 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 17
Maybe this is what she needs to do to mend the hole in her heart. I hope it doesn't backfire on her. Keep up the wonderful work.
Marguerite
Date: 09/10/10 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 18
Ouch! That even hurt MY bones!
Author's Response: Mine too. Poor Ally.
Date: 09/10/10 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 18
wow Jen was really rude to her at the end. that is really hurtful. i hope this makes her realize how lucky she is to have nick and alex. great work!
Date: 09/10/10 10:31 am Title: Chapter 17
I knew this was going to happen!
Date: 09/10/10 07:45 am Title: Chapter 17
Aw crap. I don't want to read this anymore is Jen is going to be heavily involved. lol
Date: 09/10/10 05:38 am Title: Chapter 17
So I just finished reading all 17 chapters so far and I am loving this. I'll admit that it took me a few chapters to get into it but I'm glad that I gave this a chance.
That's so sad about Ally's mom leaving her and Nick, I can't wait to read what's going happen with that.
I love AJ being Ally's godfather. :) I have such a huge soft spot for him and I love his character in this. His advice to Ally is great, I love the "smile" comment.
I'm also curious as to how Ally will deal with her attack in Germany, I figure that's why she didn't "go all the way" with Brandon.
I do like Chelsea's character, her and Ally are opposites but I like how they're best friends.
Anyway, I really do like this so far and I love picturing Nick as a dad as I do AJ in my only fic so far. They need to have kids already. lol Great job, can't wait for more. :D
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'll admit, the first few chapters were written well over two years ago, when I had no idea where I wanted the story to go. I understand why it took you a few chapters to get into it. But I'm glad you gave it a chance! And I agree, they both need to start having kids, they're going to be beautiful, just like they are!
Date: 09/10/10 04:51 am Title: Chapter 17
I really love this story! keep up the great work, can't wait to see why Ally calls Jen...
Date: 09/09/10 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh shit I hope Brandon didn't rape her. I wonder if she is telling the truth? And I can see Nick being such a hardass she is his baby. I hope everything is ok with her. Personally I think she should drop Chelsea as a friend. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 09/09/10 11:32 am Title: Chapter 16
Uh oh.. I love this story. It seems so realistic! :D
Author's Response: Thanks :) It's been a little while since I've been Ally's age but I'm glad you think I'm getting it right!
Date: 09/09/10 04:39 am Title: Chapter 16
poor ally.... Nick really blew up at her. They both have a right to bed mad. Cant wait to see how the resolve it. great work!
Date: 09/08/10 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
ow owh...is she going to do it or not?
Thanks for the updates, I really enjoy reading this story (although I must confess, I thought that the person in your banner was a guy when I first started to read this storty haha but now I know it's Ally ;) )*sorry*
Author's Response: Haha that's ok! I sort of wanted it to be a little ambiguous aside from the Blue eye, it signifies both Nick and Ally.
I'm glad you're liking the story - I had never intended to publish it but Ally's voice in my head told me I should.
