Date: 11/14/10 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 41
Aww No I hope it's not Chelsea and that she's ok. Ally has been through so much and I guess her having such a good life at the moment,everything can change in an instant. Looking to see the interaction with her and Nick,it will break his heart to see his daughter like that. I would love to see how he got the call and what he said. His point of view is a must read.
Author's Response: You're right, everything can change in an instant, whether you want it to ort not, whether your prepared for it or not, or whether you deserve it or not...
Date: 11/14/10 02:27 am Title: Chapter 41
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :( :( :( :(
Author's Response: I know :( This was a really sad chapter!
Date: 11/14/10 12:01 am Title: Chapter 41
Oh No Chelsea!
Author's Response: :(
Date: 11/13/10 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 41
Great job with this chap! Love how you described her in her unconscious state. I bet poor Nick is freaking out on that plane. I'm glad that Ally has Alex there with her. And omg at the end...I'm guessing Chelsea is dead. Poor Ally. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! There's a discussion on the boards right now that actually deals with first person narration if the character can't tell the whole story herself, and I hope I didn't fall into that trap! And I think Nick freaking out would be an understatement lol
Date: 11/13/10 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 41
Oh God No!!!!! Not Chelsea!!!! Nooo...oh God, I'm on the verge of tears here!
Author's Response: I hope it's not Chelsea either :(
Date: 11/13/10 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1
okay, seriously, I started reading this story and totally got sucked in! Great story!!!! Can't wait to see what is going to happen!
Black>? Holy Crap! Can't wait for an update
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading! :) Glad you like it!
Date: 11/12/10 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 40
'Everything went black'? o-my-god...what happend? Are they okay? We need to know!
Author's Response: I hope they are okay! Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 11/12/10 01:04 am Title: Chapter 40
ummm....... BLACK?! black in a "the music is totally putting me in the zone?" or black like, bad? ..... UMM...UPDATES NEEDED!? ahh!
Author's Response: What kind of black do you think it is?! ;)
Date: 11/11/10 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 40
UGH!! Noooooooooo!!! I HATE cliffies!!!! Another chapter!! NOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I picked a bad time not to be able to update for a few days huh? ;)
Date: 11/11/10 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 40
Oh shit...a car accident. OH NO!!!!!!!!!! And Nick's all far away! Oh man! UPDATE!
Author's Response: Eek. Nick is probably going to go berserk huh?
Date: 11/11/10 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 40
Omg! Talk about some irony! They're talking about how perfect life is and then this happens...can't wait to see what'll happen next. Hope they're ok!
Author's Response: Yeah, irony does that to you sometimes :( I know firsthand.
Date: 11/11/10 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 40
Oh shit. I hope they are ok. Nick will freak out so bad. Alex will too. Please update soon.
Marguerite
Author's Response: You're right, Nick and Alex will freak out.
Date: 11/11/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 39
Yeah I think Ally will have a jealousy problem if Nick brings w woman home. Although I hope he does. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: How could she not have a jealousy problem? He has been her's entirely for 17 years. She knows she has to get over it though, that's the biggest thing.
Date: 11/11/10 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 38
Oh lord Nick you don't stand a chance. When two teenage girls plot against you you are done for. Awesome update.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Haha, no he doesn't!
Date: 11/11/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 37
I think Ally will be just fine. She has a solid family base to help her. Even Chelsea seems to be doing better. However I think Nick should give her a little of her money. Keep up the wonderful work.
Marguerite
