Date: 08/30/10 01:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Very Good Start,they have a good relationship. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 08/29/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Seems like they have a very special relationship with each other, especially with her mom gone. The ending was sad. Great job so far...you're a great writer!
Date: 08/29/10 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is great so far! Can't wait to read more :)
Date: 08/29/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very interesting. I'm intrigued. I can't wait for more.
Date: 08/29/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
What a great story. Can't wait see more from this story.
Date: 08/29/10 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like your story. Keep up the great work.
Date: 08/29/10 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Really great start. I think this story is going to get every interesting. Not sure were you are going to take it but cant wait for more to find out.
Date: 08/29/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I cannot wait to see how this story continues!