Date: 09/28/10 02:11 am Title: Chapter 27
Poor poor Chelsea! Any parent who hits their child like that is WRONG. I don't care what the reason is. I'm glad that she has Ally and Nick to be there for her though. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I agree, they're a poor excuse for a human being. I'm glad she has a great support system like Nick and Ally though. They'll take care of her.
Date: 09/23/10 02:02 am Title: Chapter 26
HA! Bob wishes he did Nick well...I mean Bob Carter a model father? Puh-lease. I guess that's why they call it fiction. lmao Sorry, I think of all the members of Nick's family (in the real world) Bob is right up with Jane as my least favorite.
Author's Response: Ha, I tried to never pay attention to that, it gave me a headache ;) but yet, it's fiction, and a little back story, everyone (except BJ I guess) sucked it up and became "normal" when Ally was born. ;) What do you think?
Date: 09/22/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for another chapter, poor Chelsea. :(
Author's Response: I agree, poor Chels :(
Date: 09/22/10 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 26
nick is so aware of what is going on. he really is a great dad to both of them! i love it! fabulous work!
Author's Response: Thanks :) and I agree, he's VERY aware of what goes on around him!
Date: 09/22/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 26
I love this story, honestly. As a matter of fact, I want Nick to be my dad.
Author's Response: I wouldn't mind having a father as great as Nick either!
Date: 09/22/10 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 26
Too bad Chelsea is a little to young for Nick, they would make a cute couple but no, not going there haha.
Cute chapter..seems like everything turns out ok, (or not, who knows right?).
Author's Response: Ha, if Chelsea was 20 years older, I agree, she'd be great for Nick, but alas she's not :) She'll have to settle on having a crush, although I can't blame her ;)
Date: 09/22/10 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 26
Very sweet chap. Poor Chelsea for having parents like that...loved the moment where Nick reaches out to hug her. He is such a great dad. Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: He's giving Chelsea exactly what she needs right now, someone to lean on. That's mighty awesome of him :)
Date: 09/22/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 26
Yeah Nick is an awesome dad. He knew what they needed to relax. Plus including Chelsea made me love him even more. Now he needs to find love. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Nick seems to know when Ally needs a friend and when she needs a father :) this weekend she needed a friend
Date: 09/22/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 26
Aww Love the two little stories about Ally as a child they were cute And the moment with Chelsea telling Ally her mom filed for divorce was touching and loved that Nick took her in for the weekend and wanted them all to have fun. Keep up they great work. More please
Author's Response: Yeah, those stories were pretty cute! ;) Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're liking it so far!
Date: 09/21/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 25
Another great chapter, things seem to be looking up for everyone but you never know. I hope that Nina can help AJ out, if they can fix their marriage it's a bonus. Can't wait for more.
Date: 09/21/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 25
Aww this chapter was sweet,love the last part of it. Nick's a great dad in this story and the relationships of the characters are very well written. it made me almost teary. More Please
Date: 09/21/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 25
Awww that was sweet of Nick to invite Chelsea over to dinner and to the beach with them. She needs positive people around her. I smiled when she said she set everyone straight about Ally and slimewad and when she said she was staying away from boys for awhile. I think it was nice of BJ to make the dinner. She seems to want back into the family. Maybe she can change. Keep up the great work.
MArguerite
Date: 09/21/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 25
ugh this is to cute! nick is the best and even if he does get his smarts from brian at least he knows what to do with it. excellent work!
Date: 09/19/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 24
Well that was nice of BJ to apologize although I'm still mad at her. LOL. Love the twist with Nina being AJ's sponsor. Not sure how that's gonna go, but can't wait to read about it. I hope he can find other ways to cope.
Date: 09/19/10 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 24
Damn Ally is growing up. I'm not sure I could forgive Bj like she did. I tend to hold a grudge. Nick should be very proud of her. AS for Jen she is a manipulative bitch. I think Ally & Nick should go to her restaurant and find her husband and tell him she has a daughter. But they probably won't. Keep up the wonderful updates.
Marguerite
