Date: 10/12/12 05:40 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm hooked!! I like the direction that this story is going...25 more chapters to go :))) yay!!!
Date: 07/24/11 09:34 pm Title: Epilogue
Oops, didn't realize there was an epilogue LOL. Okay, NOW that I'm to the end, I'll say again, yay for happily ever after endings. Very cute, and very fitting final paragraph. :)
Date: 07/24/11 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 25
Aww! Yay for happily ever after endings. I'm glad they worked it out after all the drama, and hopefully they'll stay together as a family. This was a sweet story. Both of the characters were flawed, and their relationship, at times, was downright dysfunctional, but I believe in their love and think once they settle down and quit with all the drama, they'll make a good married couple and parents to Shane. You did a great job with this story, Rachel! It's not something I probably would have read all the way through on my own, but it was a quick, easy read, and I did enjoy it.
Date: 07/24/11 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 24
LMFAO! “I bom-cheeky- whaa-whaa mommy, too.” *dead* This chapter was great!
Date: 07/24/11 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 23
Aww... looks like everyone is making up. Hopefully we're in for a happy ending!
Date: 07/24/11 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 22
I'm surprised Shane took it so hard. Being only three, I didn't expect him to understand enough to feel abandoned or threatened by Brian trying to take his momma away from him. He and Brian got along so well, I figured he'd be thrilled. I'm sure he'll come around.
Date: 07/24/11 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 21
Loved the fight between Brian and Nick, both of them acting like little kids LOL. Harold and Jackie are both right; Brian and Josie need to stop worrying about sex and just focus on their kid for now. I'm curious to see how the birthday party will play out after all this drama!
Date: 07/24/11 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 20
Wow, Josie really is a screw-up! LOL She shouldn't have let Nick kiss her, not right there where Brian and his mom could see, anyway. She needs to figure out what she wants... either she wants a relationship or not, and if she does, is it gonna be with Brian or with Nick? She's all over the place! Get it together, girl!
Date: 07/24/11 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 19
Nick Carter, unlikely voice of reason, strikes again! For some reason, I love the conversations between Nick and Brian and Nick and Josie. The scenes with Shane are always cute, too; you do a good job of writing him.
Date: 07/24/11 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 18
Aww... I think they both have a point. They need to slow down and take their time getting to know each other better and working on their communication before they move forward with a serious relationship. That said, I think they do have feelings for each other that are real, and if they would just stop being so dramatic and blowing up at each other, they would probably make a good couple. I'm glad they are putting Shane first, though; he is the most important factor.
Date: 07/24/11 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 17
I knew they'd have to hit a roadblock somewhere in there; they were moving pretty fast. Jackie might be a little forward in talking to Josie like that, but I think she's got good advice. Hopefully Josie listens to her.
Date: 07/24/11 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 16
Aww... they are cute together now that they're getting along. I love them getting busted by the cop who knew Brian LOL. Small town!
Date: 07/23/11 12:32 am Title: Chapter 15
Aww, I loved this chapter! It was hilarious when Nick walked in. I loved the dialogue there... "I smell sex" and all the Goldilocks stuff. Cute! Finally, you're bringing out my Brian crush, now that he's being a sex god and not an asshole. ;) Woot!
Date: 07/23/11 12:27 am Title: Chapter 14
I enjoyed the conversations where Josie and Brian got advice from Nick and Jackie. I can understand Nick's frustration!! I'm glad Josie let Brian in to talk. Those two play hot and cold like crazy! I laughed at the fact that Nick said no hanky-panky in his bed and then Brian's all, "Let me make love to you, Josie." Nick's not gonna be happy! LOL
Date: 07/23/11 12:21 am Title: Chapter 13
Drama!!! I enjoyed Brian and Josie's conversation, until he finally was honest with her, told her why he treated her the way he did, admitted that he's in love with her, and she flipped out on him! She's in love with him, she wants him to love her, but when he finally says he does, she doesn't believe him? I can see why she wouldn't throw herself into his arms and fall all over his feet the minute he said it, because he's going to have to prove it, but she didn't need to act like such a drama queen and run off to call Nick in tears either. It's like she's choosing to make herself unhappy. Poor Brian can't win LOL.
