Date: 01/02/11 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ok either Brian is Shane's father or Nick is. Either way I think she should have told the father. And whoever it is deserves to know. I can't wait to read more of this.'
Marguerite
Author's Response: I think she is afraid to tell the father. I agree that the guy needs to know. It will happen. I promise.
Date: 01/02/11 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
this is really great, they need to get back together and start being a family!
Author's Response: Brian and Josie are both very stubborn. Hopefully they get it togehter. Maybe, Jackie will help push them together.
Date: 12/29/10 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Shane is so cute! I so think they must talk about what happened, but maybe they need time! Update soon! <3
Author's Response: Shane is adorable. He's shy but once he gets to know you, you're a friend for life. Josie and Brian will eventually talk about the fateful night.
Date: 12/29/10 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww Brian playing with Shane was adorable. He would make such a great daddy. Personally I hope Shane is his. Now for them to just talk and settle the past. Hard to do though when people are as stubborn as those two. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Brian and Shane are so cute together. Josie and Brian are so stubborn. Brian seems to slowly be admitting to himself that he cares about her more than he thought he did. Only time will tell.
Date: 12/27/10 02:49 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm soooo into this story, I check as much as I remember to see if you updated but so far nothing, hope you update soon! (I know it's holiday week though)
Look forward to reading what happens next! :)
Author's Response: I promise there will be an update in the next day or so.
Date: 12/19/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
I think the relationship they have is like hate-love. I'm wondering if someday it will change to love... I'm thinking a lot if Shane is his son! Update soon :D
Author's Response: Right now it's certainly love hate. As for the future...you'll have to wait and see. I am trying to keep everyone in suspense. The revealing of Shane's daddy will happen soon.
Date: 12/19/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
So it's hard to tell if Brian is Shane's father. I had an odd feeling it might be Nick & that's why she is scared to talk to Brian. Either way this story is addicting keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: You will find out who Shane's father is soon. I'm trying to keep it a mystery. LOL.
Date: 12/14/10 05:17 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh yeah Brian was a big asshole. Major jerkwad. Slept with her then dumped her. And I bet Shane is his son. Asshole man. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: I have to admit that it is kind of fun to make Brian be the asshole. He's such a sweet guy. Yes, he was a jerk. You will find out about Shane's father very soon. Yeah, he shouldn't have slept with her especially since he was engaged. For once Nick was acting more mature than he was.
Date: 12/14/10 02:35 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow… Josie really seems to hate him… I can see now a little of what had happened, and Brian seems like he didn’t care at all for what they did! Update soon <3
Author's Response: The flashback gives a little insight into what happened in the past. Josie really takes things to heart and is holding a grudge when it comes to Brian. Brian had his own issues at the time, also. You will see more flashbacks that will help to understand the past. Hopefully Josie and Brian can work through the issues to make a better future.
Date: 12/12/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG, they finally met! I'm glad that Brian is back, because maybe Josie and him can work things out. Update soon!
Author's Response: Hopefully, they will work things out. I am sure it will take a while.
Date: 12/12/10 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Uh oh Brian surprise. I personally think Shane is his. What I want to know is what happened 2 years ago to make her run away? Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: You will find out more about Shane and why she ran away. There will probably be some flashbacks dealing with Josie and Brian.
Date: 12/12/10 04:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start! I like Josie... But I'm wondering what happened between Brian and her... It seems to be complicated... Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: It is complicated....in time it will all be revealed...i promise.
Date: 12/11/10 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
great chapter for first, can't wait to see how the story progresses soon! There hasn't been a Brian story update in a while...
Author's Response: I had an idea for a story and Brian was the guy I pictured for it. There will be more very soon. Thanks!
Date: 12/11/10 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is a wonderful story. She isn't some perfect Mary Sue. She has issues like a normal person. And I bet Shane is Brian's. I really want to know what happened between them. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Perfect is so overrated. Josie is the real deal...with a lot of issues. Brian is the main one. He also has a lot of issues. You will find out what went on between the two of them.
Date: 12/11/10 04:32 am Title: Chapter 1
whooooaaa this is really interesting......cant wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks....I'm glad you liked it.
