Date: 06/09/11 02:47 am Title: Chapter 34
Oh no...what is it? How dare you leave us hanging like that!!!
Date: 06/09/11 02:39 am Title: Chapter 34
Omg what???!!! o_o what's wrong!!! Please tell me soon!!!!
Date: 06/09/11 02:07 am Title: Chapter 34
uh oh...I don't like how that sounds. Great chapter!
Date: 06/09/11 01:25 am Title: Chapter 34
omg what could have happened over night amazing job cant wait for more loved it.
Date: 06/09/11 01:19 am Title: Chapter 34
Uh oh,I have a feeling tissues will be needed for the next chapter.I hope we get to know what's wrong tonight.Good chapter and not that I need to tell you but Cant wait for more! lol
Date: 06/08/11 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 33
Ooh, date night for Mason and Shelby! ;) Brenna is too cute, I love her nickname "Beaner". Love the scenes with Ally and Brenna. :) Thanks for the update finally. :p
Date: 06/08/11 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 33
awwww i missed ally and all of the crazyness with that family. amazing job cant wait for more.
Date: 06/08/11 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 33
It's a crack up to read about Brenna at this age, after reading FWB.......I love Ally's story!!!!
Can't wait for more!
Date: 06/08/11 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 33
Great chapter!! Brenna sounds like a handful and then some!!
Date: 05/05/11 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 23
so, i'm just re-reading this story as I wait, ever-so-patiently for updates, and i just wanted to say:
"Don't ever do that again or I will shoot ketchup up your nose until you die!" I said.-- BESTEST. LINE. EVER.
Date: 05/04/11 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 32
Aww, such a sweet moment between Ally and Marquis. Love the family dynamic with the McLeans.
Date: 05/04/11 05:05 am Title: Chapter 32
Lmao. LOVED Shelby & Ally's moment - haha.
Oooh. I'd a feeling she'd kiss Marquis. Aww. She's in love. Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 05/04/11 02:33 am Title: Chapter 32
So much for Cole getting his kiss from Ally! Can't wait to see what she can get herself into the rest of the summer!
Date: 05/04/11 12:51 am Title: Chapter 32
Awwww I loved can't wait for more
Date: 05/03/11 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 32
Great chapter. I don't know how to explain how I feel about the scenes between Ally and Marquis. I liked them, but I can't find the right words...I definitely felt a spark. I wonder how old he is? I've had some similar experiences with my younger sisters at home like in the last scene. :) Excellent work, you always keep me and I'm sure many others wanting more.
