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Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/11 03:51 am Title: Chapter 26

Cute chap :) I love the relationship between Ally and Addy. I hope that she can really learn from Addy. And I want her to live a little, but she better not get pregnant or anything!!

Author's Response: NOT going to happen! LoL Ally's not my typical Coaster Girl :) which I guess doesn't say a lot about my typical CG! haha

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/11 02:39 am Title: Chapter 26

There you go Ally! I admit, this wasn't exactly what I had in mind for Ally being "adventurous". I'm sure that Ally can learn something from Addy, considering they're a lot alike. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Trust me...she doesn't need a lake to be adventurous. But it might be a start. :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/11 01:25 am Title: Chapter 26

Roflmao!!!!! Oh, Ally. You ot 2 boys after yah now. Careful girl. Lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: bsbfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 26

I totally understand how Ally feels about the whole brother thing.  All of my friends in school always talked about how hot my brother was...drove me nuts!

Can't wait to see what Ally is going to do about the swimming situation!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 26

Oooooooooo can't wait for more

Reviewer: BiLittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 26

WOAH! totally got Mas and Shel flashbacks LOL! I'm guessing thats the same lake they went skinny dipping in right?

I have a feeling if Ally see's Adam again she'll end up over her head. Or hell over her head already haha



Author's Response: LoL the very same lake, indeed. :) And flashbacks were TOTALLY intended!

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 26

uh oh, I see a certain visually impaired guy getting JEALOUS!!!  GREAT JOB!

Reviewer: bsbfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 03:15 am Title: Chapter 25

This chapter makes me want Stefie's story!!!

It's probably a good thing that Dan and Joe are separated!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: bsbfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 03:13 am Title: Chapter 24

I'm glad Addy's baby is going to be okay!  And I'm super happy that Ally is okay!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 25

I'm sure that moment's coming Ally.

Yay for Addy's baby being Ok!

Dan's a little ass. He's not better than Joe, if you think about it.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oye. Dan had NO right to accuse Joe - no matter what happened. Jeez.

~Lenni~

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for the Ally/Stefie convo, I'm really looking forward to her story. :) Personally, I'm hoping for more angsty Joe/Dan moments, you're good at drama. lol I wanna at least know why Dan hates Joe so much and possibly vice versa.

Ally's right; she carries so much unnecessary weight and stress. She needs to loosen up and have fun and just enjoy her teenage years.

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 24

Nice twist about the baby. That really sucks about Ally's hearing aid and her concussion. LOL at Brenna's tantrum and her last statements, she'll still be spoiled to death, I'm sure. I wonder what's up with Joe and Dan? On to the next chapter...

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 25

I am totally loving this story & am finally able to review.

So glad every thing is going okay with Addy & the baby.

Joe & Dan definiteely have some issues they gotta work out.

Aw, poor Ally, a broken implant, drat.

Just one minor correction-- ""Just a minute!" Stef called back. She sighed loudly into the fun.

Author's Response: LoL, actually I already fixed that probably while you were reviewing. I'm trying to go back an hour or so after posting and catch mistakes. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 25

AWESOME!  Love it!  Had to read it twice though. My dog tried to jump on my laugh half way through and managed to hit the mouse and close the page.  It's beyond me how she did it.  GREAT JOB!!