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Reviewer: Smoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/11 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 9

wow you've got my attention here! Please update again soon!

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/11 06:09 am Title: Chapter 9

what a good fit for Ally.....loving this story!

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/11 03:49 am Title: Chapter 9

I hope it goes well in this job! Can't wait for more <3

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/11 02:55 am Title: Chapter 9

Wow. I'm glad people are finally treating Ally normal. She is normal. Jeez.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: Of course she's normal. But you know how people are. Anybody different gets treated like a newfound species. :S I HATE that.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 9

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 9

A very good chapter. Something tells me that Ally will really be useful in helping these kids. I totally relate to Ally feeling self-conscious, I'm disabled too and it is nervy meeting new people or explaining what's "wrong". Great update.

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/11 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Ok finally I can review. I can't wait to see how she adapts to her new job. Cute how she has a crush on Mason... I also can't wait to see how joe is doing at Kevin's. Update soon... love this.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/11 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great chap! I love how she has a little crush on Mason. And Brenna is too cute. Can't wait to see how Joe's doing. Lol

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/11 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 8

Yeah Joe already looks good enough if he looks like his dad. I bet he is cursing more than AJ ever did now. Is there anyway you could post a picture of Mason. I really want to see what he looks like. Keep up the amazing work and I hope your dad is ok.
Marguerite

Reviewer: yorkielover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/11 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 8

Lol at the Joe stuff! Keep it up!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/11 08:27 am Title: Chapter 8

awww a cute chapter

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/11 07:06 am Title: Chapter 8

Lmao. I figured Ally would be crushing on Mason - haha.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~



Author's Response: haha well Mason lived with them for awhile after Brenna was born. I'm sure poor Ally's been crushing on him awhile now!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/11 05:08 am Title: Chapter 8

Great update. Brenna is too adorable. As much as I didn't like the name at first, it totally suits her. :) lol at Mason "flirting" with Ally.

Question: A lot of speaking deaf people have speech impediments due to delayed speech. Does Ally have one? Just trying to "get into" the character. I can't believe I didn't ask this before.

Author's Response: I can't imagine her NOT being called Brenna now. :) You'll find out about the speech impediment in the next few chapters. I haven't made it a big deal right now because as family, you don't point it out - you get used to it. But people that don't know you...that's a different story.

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/11 05:03 am Title: Chapter 8

Mason seems cute <3 Can't wait to see what happens in Ally's day, update soon <3

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/11 04:29 am Title: Chapter 8

I want a Mason clone too!!!!! Please add me to the list!

And I don't think she's got a little crush, it sounds huge!