Date: 12/22/10 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oye vey in a half shell. Tal kabout everything falling apart at once.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Well...the story's living up to its genre designation! :)
Date: 12/22/10 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
okay so sad! what a mess! poor ally!
Date: 12/22/10 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
WEll CRAP....I really wanted Joe to be lying about where he got the stuff! Damnit!
Dorough Divorce.....that way a shocker!
Can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: You and EVERYONE else wanted Joe to be lying! He's a sneaky a-hole, but I guess he's not a total liar. :p
And...da-da-dun SURPRISE! You don't get anymore until I start Stefie's story. Mwhahahaha
Date: 12/22/10 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
I think the "family time out" is a good idea, it will be good for them to spend time apart and work on themself.. And Molly is so right, Ally is putting too much pressure on herself wanting to make sure everyone is okay and worrying about everyone but herself, she sure has a heart of gold.. And you're breaking Howie and Leigh up?? Not liking it =p But I do like that you put teasers like this in your storys making us exited about future storys :)
Author's Response: Family time out is TOTALLY needed. I just want to give Ally a huge hug. Ms. Sensitivity DEFINED right there.
And I was SO excited about the Howie/Leigh teaser. :) There's always WAY more involved than what I can put in a single line. haha
Date: 12/22/10 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Ally. She deserves to have a fun, care-free summer, but because her twin is being an ass, he's sucked all the fun out of summer for her. Jonah'S A SELFISH LITTLE BASTARD WHO NEEDS A SWIFT KICK IN THE PANTS!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 12/22/10 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
I LOVE THIS! GREAT JOB!
Date: 12/22/10 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Ally.......Poor Molly.......
What a fabulous story Jen!!!
Date: 12/22/10 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Ally!! :( :( This really is terrible. I can tell that this is tearing her apart inside, all of this. I've had a feeling that "you're not my mom." would come out. I hope that Joe will be okay and I wonder what happened with him narcing on AJ. Great update.
Author's Response: Ally's always taken everyone's probably's personally. Shelby's, Joe's...now her dad's...
Date: 12/22/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh yeah Jonah is defiantly AJ's son. Stubborn to the core. I just hope he is talking out of his ass when he is talking about AJ using again. This is getting really good. Keep up the excellent as always work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: You're right, they're both stubborn. They probablly both need a swift KICK in the ass too...
Date: 12/20/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
I feel Ally's pain, I understand that she's frustrated watching her brother making the wrong decisions and not being able to do anything about it.. You can lead a horse to water, but you can't make him drink it (thank you Nicky :) ) As for pot not being bad, it may not be addictive (I still believe it is) but it messes with your mind and memory and is often a gateway to more heavy drug use!
Date: 12/20/10 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
''My list of places to look for my brother was ridiculously short. Truthfully, Joe wasn't all that smart. He got in trouble so much because he didn't use the brains the good lord gave him.''
---Good Lord gave hi life... he's trying to do what? Let me kick his tiny balls!
"It's not stupid. Dad has how many tattoos?"
"And how many has he had to get fixed or lasered off because of age?" I asked. Joe snorted.''
---OUCH that was evil, but funny.. shhh
DON'T YOU DARE DO THIS TO MY MCLEAN!
OOOHHHH YOU ARE EVIL, JEN!!! YOU ARE EVIL!
''Joe's face curved into a cruel smile. "Where do you think I stole this joint from? Dad's not cured. He's so far in denial it's not even funny. He might not drink, but he's still got his vices. Stop putting him up on a pedestal."
----Stupid J is such a Mclean that isn't even funny! the women, the alcohol, the drugs, the stupid mind.... I knew he was using something too.... but say that he found it out at Alex's things??? LORD! I know 'dad' isn't perfect, but ... WOW! Molls will kill both!
Oh JEN! You will kill us... LORD, MY MCLEANS!
Date: 12/20/10 09:10 am Title: Chapter 3
Ok I hope Joe only said that about AJ to hurt Ally. Joe needs a good smack, poor Ally. I hope she realizes there's only so much she can do. I can't for another update... I love the McLean's. Even if they are Trouble. hehe.
Date: 12/20/10 08:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Pot isn't addictive.
Author's Response: Yes and no (sorry, I just had a class not to long ago, lol) "They might not be physically hooked on the drug but they are using it as a crutch, as a coping mechanism for their life." ::steps off soapbox::
Date: 12/20/10 04:42 am Title: Chapter 3
cant wait for more
Date: 12/20/10 02:00 am Title: Chapter 3
Poor Al. Jonah is gonna be DEAD soon as A.J. finds out & gets ahold of him. I mean, does he not realize, just because his Dad did shit, doesn't mean he's the right to do the same shit & throw it back in his face. God, grow up Jonah!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LoL Jonah is stubborn, reckless, and hormonal. It's a dangerous cocktail. To think, he was the little babe fighting for his life...
