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Reviewer: bsbfan4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 02:12 am Title: Chapter 35

I hope Ally can figure out where Krista would take Joe and get her back safe without getting Joe into trouble!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 01:51 am Title: Chapter 35

Oye vey in a half shell. How is it kidnapping if she's, what? Sixteen? She's a right to a life too. Jeez.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I was thinking they'd been abducted. Too much Criminal Minds for me this week-haha.



Author's Response: She's a ward of the state so the head of the rehab center (Blanche) called the police when she didn't report back. Of course, the police don't REALLY start doing anything until twenty-four hours, soooo...we'll see what happens :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 35

Go Ally! And Cole! Oh Joe...can't wait for more.

Reviewer: tiggerc128 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 35

Great chapter!! Love it!

Reviewer: riotgurl3278 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 35

I really hope that they find them before the cops do and Joe and Krista are ok and not running away together lol.i know from experience that when you are young and out with a boy who makes your heart beat faster you kinda forget about time lol.This was so not what i expected but it was great or it will be once they find Joe and Krista. Anyway Great Job!Cant wait for more!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 35

Amazing job

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

And the plot thickens........can't wait to see what happens!!!!

Reviewer: bebybsb Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 35

But why didn't she kiss him, if she wanted to!!! LOL!!! it's part of her new self to do those kinds of things!!!

It made me kinda sad that AJ is so in denial of what Joe might be feeling. He can understand the bad behavior and think it's because he's spoiled, but he can't understand Joe's feeling what he once felt and might still feel. I think they need to sit down and really talk and get to know each other, with Ally as referee (lol!), and without blaming each other for how they are!!!
Wow!, that was kinda deep!!! LMAO!!! That shows how real those characters feel to me!!!

Author's Response: AJ IS in denial. He doesn't want to acknowledge that his own son is so much like him isn't a bad thing, it just needs cultivated. :)

Reviewer: No_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 35

First of all: Brenna rocks!

Second: Cole rocks too!

Third: just tell me that they aren't running to Vegas to get married....

Reviewer: kaiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 34

Oh no.. wonder what happend.. Maybe something with Joe? or Shelby and Mason? Little Brenna is just so cute. We had two four year olds at our daycare announce that they are boyfriend and girlfriend today, they could hold hands, but they are never getting married :)

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 05:24 am Title: Chapter 34

Oye vey in a half shell. Now what kinda problem? Did Joe & Krista not come home??? Were they in some sort of accident? Is it Mason & Shelby??? WHAT!?!?!?!?!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 05:20 am Title: Chapter 33

Roflmao. Ah, I love little Breanna. I absolutely love Mason too. *swoons*

~Lenni~

Reviewer: aprilw121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 04:23 am Title: Chapter 34

uhhhhh ohhhhh....update please!!!!

Reviewer: colorguard_diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 03:40 am Title: Chapter 34

You are the Queen of Cliffhangers. You always leaving me wanting more. I wonder what the problem is. I hope it's nothing major.

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 03:21 am Title: Chapter 34

Uh oh. What kind of problem? MORE!