Date: 10/30/11 08:49 am Title: Chapter 33
I am so glad they couldn't kill the other Nick. And for his father to be a Judas....that was a surprise. One would think his mother would betray them! Now, what's going to happen to Kevin's Nick?
Great update, Mare.
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
Sadly, I could see his father doing that as much as his mother. Aww to Kevin's Nick lol THanks Pammy :O)
Date: 10/30/11 02:49 am Title: Chapter 33
I figured that Kevin wouldn`t be able to kill the `other Nick`. That he and Howie would see their own Nick in him. But letting him runaway. Interesting I wonder what it mean for their own Nick now.
Can`t wait for another chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Kimberly, hopefully you won't have to wait too long for your answer!
Date: 10/30/11 01:55 am Title: Chapter 33
Wow...that was really sad and powerful. I can't imagine being Nick, not having a clue what's going on. And certainly can't imagine being Kevin. What a conundrum! Wonder what they'll do now.
Author's Response:
Aww I know! poor Nick. :O( Thanks, Sel!
Date: 10/30/11 01:35 am Title: Chapter 33
OMG poor "other Nick", he comes to see the two he's always loved like brothers only to see them try to kill him. I sorta knew you wouldn't kill him, but still! Awesome chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Rose! lol
Date: 10/30/11 01:30 am Title: Chapter 33
My power is all wonky too. So sad about the other Nick's story....he begged to be killed and Kevin couldn't do it. I hope they figure out something soon before the real Nick gets worse! Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
My power went out shortly after I posted this chapter lol Thanks, Tracy! Hopefully you won't lose power!!
Date: 10/24/11 10:39 am Title: Chapter 32
Ahh fuck dude!! So, the "other" Nick comes out, which definitely makes things that much more harder! >__< I love how you sucked us readers right into Kevin's complex situation and thoughts because here I was, hoping I'd just read about the "other" Nick being killed and the actual Nick being saved. Now, here we are, reading about the "other" Nick, which definitely helps us tap even further into the thoughts and feelings of Kevin and Howie, with staring at their youngest brother and knowing they have to supposedly kill this Nick to save their REAL Nick. WTF Mare... WTF?!? Lol.
Can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response:
I know...it is a messed up premise, isn't it? lol It's not like I was going to make this easy on anyone! :OP
Date: 10/24/11 10:31 am Title: Chapter 31
Freaking stupid "Fatal MySQL" made me lose my typed up review! >__< Damnit. Anywho, I think it went along the lines of this...
This was my favorite lines of this chapter:
“Do you expect me to carry his fat ass alone?”
I love how sensitive and caring AJ was. Yes, my eyes rolled.
Charlie and Larry helped this time, giving AJ a break since he was so fragile...
LMAO!! Freaking AJ!! Sucha asshole!! :P But man, poor Nicky!! I feel so bad for him! :( But I'm really glad things are starting to look up for them! :)
Author's Response:
I hate those stupid Fatal MySQL error messages. They have messed up many a thing on this site from time to time. Those were some of my favorite lines in this chapter too lol Thanks, Reb!
Date: 10/23/11 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 32
Oh no!!! You are the queen of evil cliffhangers Mare. I don't know if Kevin will be able to kill him. It's still Nick, even though it's the alternate Nick. But someone will have to do it won't they?
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
LOL The Queen of the Evil Cliffhangers, I like that! We'll hve to see what happens! Poor Kevin! Like I keep saying, if he didn't leave the group I'd be so much nicer to him! Thanks, Steph!
Date: 10/23/11 08:43 am Title: Chapter 32
Wow, moment of truth, what the hell is Kevin going to do. Now granted that was the shortest meeting ever and we didn't get to spend a lot of time with this Nick, but I have a theory. It doesn't seem from this moment, that's he's as sick as their Nick is, and Charile said that he should be...so does that change things for what Kev needs to do?
Eh, just a theory, but I'm excited to read more to see what's going on in both groups! Hate it has to be so long in between though. lol Thanks for the new Chap. Mare!
Author's Response:
That's an interesting theory. We'll have to see if you are correct or not. Like you said, it was a short meeting so we really don't know how sick this Nick is or in which way he is sick. Poor Kevin! If he didn't leave the group I wouldn't be this mean to him! Thanks, Sam!! :O) LOL!
Date: 10/23/11 05:23 am Title: Chapter 32
OMG Mare, don't tell me you're gonna actually force poor Kevin to kill the other Nick. He's still Nick even if he's an alternate reality version! Loved the chapter though :)
Author's Response:
You didn't think i'd actually make this easy on them, did you Rose? I mean come on....Just let some random guy shoot and kill the other Nick out of earshot? Even the other Nick knew I wasn't going to do that! lol Thanks for reading, Rose! :O)
Date: 10/23/11 01:53 am Title: Chapter 32
Good chapter, can`t wait to read the next one! What is Kevin going to do now that he has met the `other Nick`. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I know, it's a new dilemma for Kevin. I wouldn't want to be him, that's for sure lol Thanks for reading! :O)
Date: 10/23/11 01:30 am Title: Chapter 32
Awww jeez!
Mare....you ended this in just the right place to get me coming back for more!
What a tension filled update!
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
Thanks Pammy! That was my goal, to try to keep people reading this thing! We'll see if it actually works so far i'm not really sure. lol
Date: 10/23/11 12:20 am Title: Chapter 32
This kind of reminded me of the holocaust....just like Howie was saying with concentration camps and everything. I was hoping they would see the other Nick....and this is gonna be awkward as he doesn't know they are there to kill him. Great so far, can't wait for the next chapter because it is getting good!
Author's Response:
THanks Tracy! yes, I really wanted to show some small similarities between what's happening and the holacaust but I was kind of afriad to. Glad you are looking forward to what's coming next. :O)
Date: 10/19/11 07:29 am Title: Chapter 31
LMAO awww poor Nick. Don't mean to laugh at him but the fat jokes were amusing. Hopefully he does feel better when the other Nick bites it. Maybe then this will all be worth it. :(
Author's Response: lol I felt like I needed to write something in there to lighten things up. Thanks, Rose!
Date: 10/16/11 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 31
Thank god they got out of that body filled water ok! I love the randomness of Nick wanting a monkey butler, lol. Great chapter Mare, looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Gotta love monkey butlers. I think we'd all have one if they let us!! LOL thanks Steph!
