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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/11 02:08 am Title: Chapter 22

Omg. At least Nick came back....but the description of his eyes being like that gave me chills. Really loving this, Mare. I can't wait for more of this story!

Author's Response: Aww thanks Tracy! :O)

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/11 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 21

Dammit!! Don't you ever get tired of writing mean cliffies? lol j/k. I can't tell which time period I like reading about more, they're both so intense and because of your cliffies both side leave me wanting more. This chapter managed to kind of answer questions from the last chapter too though, so that's good.

As scary as it is not knowing what these people are going to do to Nick when they come up on him, I kind of really want that to happen just so we can know where these evil canadians are taking all of the young people and what's going on with that part of the story. Thanks for the updates Mare and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Now that we're further into it, both past and present will kind of start intermingling like this last chapter did. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Sam! :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/11 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 21

Another mean cliffy!  But what could Howie do, it's either sink or swim and he couldn't force Nick to move.  Poor Nick :(

So sad about Laura, those people who killed her really tortured her :(  



Author's Response: Exactly, Howie was in a no win situation :O( Thanks for reading, Steph! :O)

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/11 04:29 am Title: Chapter 21

I can't imagine how hard it must have been for Howie and Nick to leave Randy and Clara and not turn back when they heard those shots. Nick and Laura - extremely sad. 

But with all the things happening in this chapter, the most shocking was Howie leaving Nick.  Howie left Nick?!

Emotional update, Mare.  I hope we have a quick update next!

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response: Howie was in a really bad position. It's hard to tell what any of us would do in this situation. Poor Howie, believe me he didn't want to do that. Thanks for the feedback Pammy! Hope to have another update out this week! :O)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/11 02:35 am Title: Chapter 21

Shit....you made me so sad when Nick told Howie to leave him :( I am really loving this story and I love the bond the guys have. Its a scary place where they are. Can't wait for more Mare!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tracy! That part made me sad too! LOL

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/11 02:12 am Title: Chapter 21

Previous chapter, yay for answers finally! At least Charlie is helping them out (till he ends up dying anyway).

As for this chapter, Nick, don't try and be a hero! Gah! Howie I would've dragged him along. But yeah...that was a very evil cliffy! :P

Author's Response:

Aww Howie tried but he'd too elf-ish to do anything. Poor elf-ish Howie :O( Thanks Rose! And yay! You were the one and a half reviews! Anything else is an added bonus now. LOL

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 20

Yay, some answers at last!  I knew they had to have either time travelled or maybe come from a parellel universe to end up where they were.  That was kind of freaky with the photos of them dead.  Good to see Charlie has some answers.  But what's happened to Nick?  Mean cliffy!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks Steph! Yes, I know that was a mean one lol I'm hoping to write sometimes this week so you odn't have to wait too long for an answer. Thanks for the review. I am beginning to get a complex about this chapter.

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 04:48 am Title: Chapter 20

"Star Troopers".......clever name.  And making Nick watch as his "brothers" were murdered....I guess the Geneva Convention is not in effect in this universe.

And what a cliffie!  Kevin's reaction was definitely unexpected.

Great update, Mare.

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the "Star Troopers." I was afriad it was going to be  too corny. Yeah, I think it's safe to say that this is a very different place they landed themselves in. Thanks for reading, Pammy. I was starting to get sad no one had reviewed this yet. LOL

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 11:37 am Title: Chapter 19

I don't know how I missed this chapter!  Maybe because there have been so many of my favourites being updated so often.  Anyway...great chapter, so the date is still the same, weird!  And the thing with the kids, that's just terrible, I wonder what they do to the kids?  I could never give mine up!  Don seems like an asshole and I don't trust him.

Can't wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

No worries Steph, I posted this chapter Sunday night and I swear that within 30 minutes I was already off the first page of the most recent updates list. LOL Sunday seemed to be a busy update day! :O) I'll probably be updating in a day or so again! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 01:37 am Title: Chapter 19

Wow, what a position to be put in: fight for your children and die; or, give up your kids and fight for survival. 

Thanks for answering my question in this update, Mare.  I can't wait for more!

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response:

You're welcome! Your other question will be answered in the next chapter! Thanks Pammy! :O)

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 01:10 am Title: Chapter 19

LOL damn that Howie! It's so true about him being good at playing silent observer. he goes unnoticed so easily. OMG at what happened to everyone under the age of 15 and then under 21. WTF! That would've been horrible (I also would've been doomed back then at 13 haha). Love the last line and this updating streak. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Yes, but then you could've reported back and let everyone know what happened. LOL Thanks, Rose! :O)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 12:47 am Title: Chapter 19

:( wow that is scary. All the teenagers/kids died or got taken away. I got a feeling that Kevin made a bad choice going back to where the plane crashed. This story feels like a real book to me, I love how spooky it is. Great chapter mare!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tracy! That's really a nice compliment. :O)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 18

Really enjoyed it, it's good to see that the people outside the museum turned out to be friendly after all.  So they've somehow ended up a year in the future, this is intriguing and I'm looking forward to getting to the bottom of it.

Poor Nick, I hope no one recognises him!



Author's Response:

Nope about them being ahead by a year lol they actually touch on that in the next chapter. :O) thanks again Steph!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 17

So glad AJ found Kevin and Brian.  I'm also glad no one has realised they are celebrities!



Author's Response:

Yes, three out of five have found each other! :O) And so far so good with the celebirty thing. Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: balance Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 10:15 am Title: Chapter 18

Okay....I've gotta know.....where are all the kids and teenagers?  And if this is an "alternate universe," where are the BSB of this universe?

And finally we get to meet Charlie.

Great job, Mare.  The more I learn, the more I want to know!

Pammy Whammy



Author's Response:

That shall be explained fairly soon :O) Thanks for reading Pammy! Hope you continue to enjoy this one!