Date: 07/30/11 01:58 am Title: Chapter 18
So now we meet the infamous Charlie who helps them out. I'd love to get some answers, and I can't wait to see the next chapter. Nick is always the one with issues, we're all so mean to him LOL.
Author's Response:
Yup, now Charlie is here to do some splainin' lol maybe? Not sure if Nick is next but he probably is, Poor Nick,
Date: 07/30/11 01:44 am Title: Chapter 18
Ohhh damn, people almost recognized Nick. At least they found some help for now. I love how you're jumping from the past to the future without explaining much, it is very suspenseful and creative. Really enjoying the story so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you Tracy! I'm really happy to hear you're liking it so far! :O)
Date: 07/28/11 06:52 am Title: Chapter 17
So close .... yet so far. Love the reunion but now I'm worried about Nick and Howie, as well as Clara and Randy.
Wow....I'm loving these quick updates.
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
Thanks again Pammy, i'm hoping I can keep it going!
Date: 07/28/11 06:35 am Title: Chapter 16
Very emotional. I'm a little like Brian in that I don't like people to see me crying. It's not that I'm really embarass; it's just that my grief is private.
Thanks for the update, Mare.
Pammy Whammy
Author's Response:
I am the same exact5 way as well. Although i do get embarassed and I also don't like to make people feel uncomfortable. Thanks Pammy! :O)
Date: 07/27/11 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 16
This is my first review on this story. I have to say that I love it, the plot is so unique and the alternating between "past present" and "future" is what keeps high the attention. =)
I have the feeling the Brian might have hurt himself. So we have, for now, Nick sick and Brian may hurt... Frick&Frack, always together even in sickness and hurt? lol
Good work, I love your writing and how you write suspense and drama!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review. It's always nice to know that there are more than 4 people reading this story lol I'm also very happy to hear that you like the past present and future jumping. It's something I was kind of nervous about. :O)
Date: 07/27/11 07:55 am Title: Chapter 16
LOL no worries I will always read the whole chapter, and most of the chapters now are full of very vital things that we need to know for the story. Hey 100, 100, that's pretty cool, I tell you what, I'll have a cookie here at home in honor of that.
Author's Response:
Excellent, have one for me too! I do not have anything sweet in the house :O( lol
Date: 07/27/11 07:46 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh my God, I hate you so much right now. You and your evil twists, we were so close to them all being together too!! Grrrr. I can't hate you too much though, back to back updates is pretty awesome.lol Do it again! haha
Author's Response:
Hey! At least I got three of them together, you didn't expect me to make things THAT easy, did you? LMAO :O) Taking a writing break today but i'm hoping to have another chapter up by the weekend! Thanks Sam!
Date: 07/27/11 02:17 am Title: Chapter 17
Awwww yay for AJ finding Kevin and Brian. That has to be so hard, hearing someone who you have to trust, talking about how it's okay to blame celebrities just because Trump fucked up. *hugs the Boys*. I love this writing streak of yours, keep it up. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, leave it to stupid Trump to bring on the apocolpse. Sadly, I can see that happening for real with him! LOL Thanks Rose!
Date: 07/27/11 01:43 am Title: Chapter 17
Well at least AJ got some answers and had a chance to clean up a little. Glad he found Brian and Kevin too...I want to know what is happening with Howie and Nick since Nick is getting sick...great update mare!
Author's Response:
Well, just a quick reminder for you that Nick and Howie were staying with Clara and Randy so we'll have to see what happens. Thanks Tracy!
Date: 07/26/11 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
Go you! I'm happy to see fast updates. Good to see that Brian was alright, shame about the others though. Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Steph! I actually just updated again if you can believe that! lol
Date: 07/26/11 08:26 am Title: Chapter 16
Is it bad that I could care less about future AJ? lol I'm just sitting here going, "WHEN ARE THEY GOING TO MEET AGAIN!!!" lol You're killing me with that, seriously. I'm loving that we're back in the present again too, or the future or whatever, but it still feels like there's so much to catch up on at the same time. Can't wait for more...hopefully soon again. lol
Author's Response:
Aww, that's okay Sam. Honestly, i'd probably fee the same way if I was reading it. LOL I have to move forward before I go backward again though, if that makes any sense? To fully understand what happened the Museum of Art, AJ needs to start telling that story as a memory in the future. We are going back to the present after AJ's, I promise! And AJ's won't really be that long so feel free to do what I probably would do. Skim through but don't skip the dialogue! lmao I suck as a writer telling my readers to skim! Thanks for being my 100th review on my 100th page of the story! You should get a cookie for that or something.
Date: 07/26/11 01:04 am Title: Chapter 16
Brian, you realize how lucky you are? Mare could've maimed or crippled you! LOL. But seriously, I like how you took us through Brian's wave of emotions. I can easily see why he'd want to just give up now. But when Kevin finds him, it brings back his will to live instantly.
Poor Scott, I liked the Home Sweet Home gravestone LOL. It's wrong that I laugh, but I'm that twisted too! :). Great chapter, look at us updating regularly.. :)
Author's Response:
LOL I know, I laughed at my own warped sense of humor as well. Thanks Rose! I hope we can keep it up as well. Usually all the regular updates eventually equals an epic fail!
Date: 07/26/11 01:01 am Title: Chapter 16
Poor Brian....I'm glad he and Kevin weren't hurt. I can't imagine how scared they must be...still in the dark and unaware of how all of this happened. Loving the updates!!!
Author's Response:
I know! Scary times for the guys! Thanks Tracy! :O)
Date: 07/24/11 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh god, I felt a chill when they found those leaflets on how to hunt down and kill celebrities. And the gallows too, I bet crowds of blood thirsty savages gather for the public executions. What a place!
Can't wait to see how they'll talk their way out of this. Hopefully no one recognises them.
Author's Response:
We're jumping ahead agian so you'll have to wait a few chapters to find out! Thanks Steph! :O)
Date: 07/24/11 03:59 am Title: Chapter 15
Hmm, that was weird. For some reason, I totally skipped reading chapters 13 and 14 when I was speeding through the story the other day. For sure, I'm all caught up now!
So I figure they're going to get out of this *mostly* alive because of those flash-forward chapters...but how? I hope Kevin's kick-butt mojo powers come out and jedi mind trick these people.
Ahahahahah I don't think Philly is beautiful at all, so it was funny to hear Brian's thoughts about it. Also, the other night, my mom wondered when there would ever be a day when I-76 to Philly wouldn't be packed with traffic...I guess that would be when the celebrity-killing, nuclear (IDK if it's nuclear lol) apocalypse happens.
Go you for awesome updates, and I can't wait for the next one :)
Author's Response:
That is weird considering you left your review on chapter 14. LOL hrmm... Yeah, the whole Philly is beautiful thing is completely ficticious but I can see Brian thinking that. I bet even if a celebrity killing apocolypse tyoe thing ever did happen I -76 would still be jammed with traffic and construction. Thanks for reading Sarah! :O)
