Date: 11/19/14 03:40 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
WTF!?!?!?!? Kristin needs to get a GRIP. Yes he left on a tour, but he tried to help you and you RESENTED him for it! You should have gone to a damn DOCTOR you dumb bitch! How DARE you keep his children from him and him from his children! You have NO fucking right to put them in the middle of your stupid pettiness! I was rooting for you up until now Kristin....do NOT make me get my damn pointy sticks out 'cause I'm in no mood today! (Half my BSB CDs have gone missing somewhere in the house! Someone moved my huge cd case full of cds!)
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: There's the pointy sticks! I was wondering when those were gonna come out. I had a feeling this chapter might do the trick, lol. I hope you find your BSB CDs. I'd be going nuts...
Date: 11/19/14 03:28 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Caroline needs to get over herself. I'm glad Kevin is welcome back home - it better work out between him and Kristin.
I loved Nick and Lauren's phone conversation - it was super cute and hilarious.
~Lenni~
Date: 11/18/14 08:20 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Can Kevin and Kristen work things out or will he be heading back to Irvine I wonder.....
Date: 11/18/14 11:43 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Hmm I really thought Nick is going to hook up with this Caroline but Kevin ends up with her...but now they are going home? interesting!
Author's Response: You know me, I'm queen of the twists in storyline. ;)
Date: 11/17/14 08:24 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I'm glad Nick talked to Lauren and Kevin to Kristen, but can't help but wonder about Caroline and how she fits in.....
Author's Response: Caroline won't be forgotten! ;)
Date: 11/17/14 05:33 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
About time you admitted to deleting his messages there Kevin!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 11/17/14 05:22 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Kevin was arrested!?!?!?! And he didn't call Nick to come bail them out! Roflmao!
Author's Response: Calling Nick would be accompanied by just way too much teasing for Kevin... lol
Date: 11/17/14 05:16 pm Title: Chapter Nine
You have Kristin remember now Kevin. And two little boys who I bet miss you plenty.
~Lenni~
Date: 11/17/14 05:09 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Wonder what he's gonna hear by eaves dropping. And Kevin didn't have to delete all the Lauren messages - there is a way to delete just one or two messages sent to that person.
~Lenni~
Author's Response: lol Yeah but he panicked and deleted everything. Silly Kevin.
Date: 11/16/14 10:48 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Just started reading this today and really enjoying it. Looking forward to more and seeing where you take it :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying it! I think everyone will be surprised by the places it goes to next.
Date: 11/16/14 07:11 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Loved this chapter and Nicks outburst....and lol at them getting arrested hihi
Author's Response: Nick's outburst was a lot of fun to write. Nick's outbursts are the best because he can say so much in so little a time in them! The scene where Kevin and Caroline get arrested is actually the one that originally started the whole idea for this story. It sort of morphed out of the image of Kev and an ex-girlfriend in a jail cell talking about the last time they did this, lol. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, thanks for the review!
Date: 11/12/14 04:36 am Title: Chapter Seven
Kevin! You should have left what had been said and explained to Nick you grabbed the wrong phone! You're going to screw his relationship up further now, because she thinks he wants to come home and he has no idea!
And where the Hell is Kristin and why is she NOT answering him!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Kevin you had better NOT sleep with Caroline! Same goes for you Carter!
Author's Response: haha Well this is a first, someone NOT rooting for the main girl character to get down and dirty with the guys!....Missed you and your pointy sticks Lenni!
Date: 11/12/14 02:01 am Title: Chapter Seven
I knew as soon as Kevin started texting he had Nick's phone..lol Man, it feels like these two have kinda switched places in this story. Nick is the more responsible one and Kevin is the one fucking up..lol And, Kevin is realizing it! And the line "She mucked me" STILL has me giggling like a fool!
Its always amazed me how it feels like you've crawled in these guys' heads cuz I can always see/hear them doing exactly what you write them doing/saying. Its a gift!
Author's Response: It really does kind of feel like they've switched roles a little bit. Who knew THAT was possible without making them fabulously unrealistic, huh? ...I'm having a lot of fun messing around with them (mucking around with them?)... This story has been simmering for awhile and I'm really glad to finally be getting it posted for everyone to read. That clip of the movie on cruise really helped with a lot of the details of the rewrite. I had no idea Kevin was this fun to write, by the way. I should probably write him more often. lol
Date: 11/12/14 01:24 am Title: Chapter Seven
Thank god Uncle D made it through the cut lol Also, that last line about fossilized things? Brilliant. Made me laugh and I try pretty hard to not feel "emotions" about things so kudos to you. :D
Author's Response: hahaha... It just felt like a very "Nick" thing to say at that point. And Uncle Devon HAD to make it, he was like a shining star in the pinnacle of the "how ghetto fab is Kentucky?" tree. And now I've even been to Kentucky to base these observations on like actual fact, LOL. I'm glad I made you get the feels, and I'll take my Kudos. ;)
Date: 11/11/14 07:35 pm Title: Chapter Six
Lmao. Would have liked to have seen a photo of Nick getting shit on him - haha. Great fic so far. Kristin really needs to answer Kevin. And Nick needs o give Lauren an explanation.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I would seriously like a video of this chapter and the next one, too. ;)