[Report This]Date: 01/05/04 06:22 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
great job! please update soon
[Report This]Date: 01/05/04 06:03 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
AWESOME chapter!!! AJ can go home with me for christmas lol update soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/05/04 05:50 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I'm happy that Nick has been able to get Amber to open up to him a little, because she does need someone to talk to at least a little. AJ just needs to chout [It's slang for "Chill Out" for those of you who don't know me well] with his frustration. I can understand he would be jealous that he hasn't been able to get 'close' with Amber like Nick has, but he also needs to understand that it's going to take time for that to ever happen with the rest of them. Like you mentioned in Amber's thoughts, she doesn't even fully trust Nick. What a tough emotional rollercoaster you've got Amber going through. But you're doing a great job playing this out. Keep it up, and AJ, chout already! LoL. [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 01/05/04 01:08 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Man, leave it to Nick to never stay serious. But shame on Kev for not taking a proper shower to get rid of his intoxicating fumes! Tsk Tsk. Dirty Kev! Good chap, I'm glad Nick was able to make some sort of 'progress' with Amber, even if it wasn't much. But I know there is still a long way to go. Keep up the great work! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 01/04/04 09:00 am Title: Chapter Eight
Uhoh, doesn't seem like Amber's off to a very good start, but that was to be expected. And poor Kevin. Hopefully the dumb police will come to their senses soon with the test results. Police really are idiotic sometimes. Great chapter. Keep up the great work! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 01/04/04 08:31 am Title: Chapter Six
Ooh, what a blow. Nick gets released and Kevin gets slammed right in. How crappy. Now let's see how Kevin feels about this. I liked the chap and sorry I haven't been reading and reviewing. I had to go back and see which chap I left off at. But I'm digging this story so keep up the good work! [Alex]
[Report This]Date: 01/03/04 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! AWESOME JOB!
[Report This]Date: 01/03/04 07:54 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
great job with the chapter its one of the best you have written. Gosh damn JC is a complete ass! I can't believe him! to bad nick didn't do more damage. well please update soon
[Report This]Date: 01/03/04 01:47 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
wow oh wow, i'm glad Nick told Amber the truth about Kevin and himself. I agree with you as-well that is one of the best chapters you have written, it really was fantastic. This really is one amazing story, i can't wait to read more. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/03/04 09:20 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
JC deserved that punch, and yay for Nick for giving it to him! Great story, i love it! Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 01/03/04 08:57 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Wow that's an emotional chapter. She was doing so well and then JC the prick god that was just ggrrrr I was amazed AJ didnt take off and hit him. Good for Nick for defending her
[Report This]Date: 01/03/04 07:30 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Good chapter... Damn JC he got what was coming to him! lol.
[Report This]Date: 01/01/04 08:24 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
AJ's definitely getting the raw end of the deal, but oh well. At lesat Nick is connecting with the girl. But that last question is just going to KILL everything. Because, if Nick admits that Kev was in jail for the rape - shouldn't he also admit he was in jail for her rape? Hmmm, ain't that sticky!
[Report This]Date: 01/01/04 03:24 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
u little witch, you can't leave it there like that, i wanna know what nick has to say or will they be interupted??? i really do love your story so far and i really want a happy ending... hint hint
[Report This]Date: 01/01/04 01:49 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
dum dum dum.... lol. Wonder what Nick's going to tell her. Good chapter but poor AJ though!
