[Report This]Date: 12/16/03 03:15 am Title: Chapter Eight
Wow nice chapter. that poor gurl. And With kevin in jail I love ur writting keep it coming
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!!! Was so excited to see I actually had one! lol...hoping ya read the chap before this one (might make more since if u did) I might have another chapter up tonight...if not, probably tomorrow. When I get reviews, I update so much more quickly! Anyways, thanks again *smiles* glad ya liked it!
[Report This]Date: 12/15/03 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Eight
awesome chapter! Poor Nicky always the but of jokes. please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, Nick is always the butt of jokes...such an easy target...as adorable as he is! hehe...ah well, who am I to talk...I'm the butt of one of my friends jokes for being blonde! Anyways, thanks for reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: 12/14/03 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Seven
great job with the chapter i feel really bad for Amber she must be so scared and unsure what to do please update soon not just this story but your others also.
Author's Response: The next chapter should start to become more intersting and things should pick up. I have a lot of plans for where things are going...with the Boys and their relationships with Amber (friendship, hateful, fearful, etc) On winter break til January 5th, and then, I only have classes on Monday and Wednesdays, so, i am hoping to get a lot more done now! Thanks again for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/14/03 11:18 pm Title: Chapter Six
oh man i cant believe that poor kevin no no wait kevin was being such an ass he kinda deserves to get some of what nick got oooo im so mad at the boys for not visiting him before. well great chatper and its funny that kevin was mad at nick for touching the clothes when he was stupid enough to touch her!
Author's Response: LOL...yeah, Kevin is in Nicks shoes now...Kev was just checking her pulse and stuff...but guess he still should have kept his hands to himself! lol. Thanks for the review! You're awesome!
[Report This]Date: 12/14/03 06:21 am Title: Chapter Seven
another awesome chapter! poor Kevy! Amber is kinda being bitchy to them when they are only trying to help! can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 12/14/03 03:39 am Title: Chapter Six
oh shit.. poor Kev... those damn dumb ass police. They should just run a semen test. I didn't remember reading anything about the guy using a condom. If he didn't, Kev would be out in a second. Damn Forensic Class lol my common sence is getting the best of me lol
Author's Response: wow...actually, a semen test is mentioned in chapter 7...lol...how did you know that was what I had planned? lol...I am just finishing it up, so it should be up shortly!
[Report This]Date: 12/14/03 03:14 am Title: Chapter Six
Hey girl that was a great chapter I have a feeling now all blame is falling on poor Kev. This doesnt sound good at all for them.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing...means a lot to me! Have a couple of plans where the Kev thing is going...hoping to have the next chapter up tonight (12*13*03)
[Report This]Date: 12/14/03 02:13 am Title: Chapter Six
awesome chapter and a very unexpected ending! can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review....yeah, I was hoping the ending surprised people!
[Report This]Date: 12/08/03 04:35 pm Title: Chapter Five
u are good... :D very nice writing skills...don't stop here yo! Peace! poor nick...haha :D
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and thanks for the compliment! Not planning on stopping...have many many plans for where this is going!
[Report This]Date: 12/08/03 12:42 am Title: Chapter Five
my poor baby ugh and kevin is such an ass whats up with that damn that boy pisses me off. well anyway i loved the chapters and i hope you update very soon.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/03 12:35 am Title: Chapter Four
oh no i was afraid that would happen to nick when he touched her. im so sad how could you do that to my baby?!!!! sniff well great job update soon please
Author's Response: lol...sorry!!! just for excitement and a little suspense(is that the word I am looking for) Thanks for reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: 12/06/03 07:34 pm Title: Chapter Five
I don't think Nicky is going to enjoy jail food.... Kinda like adding insult to injury. In all honesty, yea, he shouldn't have touched her stuff, but Hell, fear has a way of screwing things up. Loving the story!
[Report This]Date: 12/06/03 05:52 am Title: Chapter Five
Heyya, another good chap! I'm happy you updated so soon! Kevin was being unfair by blaming Nick. Anyone of them could have made the same mistake of touching the evidence without even thinking about it because they were caught up in the moment of what was going on. I do feel bad for Nick though. And Amber, I'm still waiting to find out how she's gonna react when she realizes what has happened to her. Keep up the great work and update soon! [Alex]
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing..I try to update as soon as i can, but sometimes, it takes a little while. I just added 2 new chapters last night (12*13*03) and it took a week to get them out! Can't wait to hear what ya think! *smiles*
[Report This]Date: 12/06/03 04:45 am Title: Chapter Five
Wow poor Nick, I feel sorry for him. I cant believe the cops think he did it poor Nicky keep it coming
[Report This]Date: 12/06/03 04:01 am Title: Chapter Five
Very good! Poor Nick though.. I probably would have done the same thing that Kev did.. yell at the cops lol. Good chapter, can't wait for more.
