[Report This]Date: 06/28/04 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
I love the Kevin/Nick interaction. I am , however, a little concern about AJ. He has a big decision to make.....should he talk with his "father" or just leave? Great job, I look forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06/28/04 12:58 am Title: Chapter 13
heyn there! I know I told you this a long time ago but i'll say it again! I LOVED this chapter lol The whole Nick getting in trouble with KEvin thing :)
[Report This]Date: 06/11/04 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
omg...chapter 12 already??? wow...you're a very fast writer maria, which is a good thing cause i want more where this comes from young lady! and this is an order! hmph! lol...kidding, you know i LOVE you!
[Report This]Date: 06/10/04 03:23 am Title: Chapter 12
I can not believe all that has happened in these past chapters especially with AJ and then with Nick buying that gun, it'll be interesting to see how that goes. Please update soon and keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 06/08/04 12:06 am Title: Chapter 12
Marina, These past three chapters were really emotionally charged. I have a lot of empathy for both, AJ and Kevin. Kevin, because of all the knowledge he has been carrying, and AJ, for all of the discoveries. Howie and Brian, seem to be stuck somewhere in the middle....both knowing some things, and yet, finding new information. And Nick....I still say Kevin should try out that leash! Looking forward to the next installments.
[Report This]Date: 06/05/04 05:03 am Title: Chapter 8
Love the story you have to update it at your most convient time. It's one of the greater stories! Peace out!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/25/04 10:05 am Title: Chapter 9
My, my, my.....how the plot thickens. That Nick.....maybe Kevin should try a leash?! And now with AJ's father in the mix, I predict trouble ahead for our heroes. Great job! I'm looking forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 05/25/04 01:45 am Title: Chapter 9
I love it...I love it! This story is so good, I was so excited when I saw that you had updated, because it has been awhile. Please update soon because I can't wait to find out what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 05/13/04 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hey I didn't even think about it untoil; Mersey mentioned it. Maybe Jeff is a half brother? Your mind is very creative to come up with all of these races etc..but you know that already :)(
[Report This]Date: 05/12/04 01:21 am Title: Chapter 7
i have to review this chapter cause AJ is soooo HILARIOUS in this one! when you think he would finally stop and let Kevin talk, he started with the 'are you planning to tell us sometime in this century' speech, lol. Man, gotta love him like that. I had fun reading this chappy and at the same time, we finally understand who they are. And great work at depicting part of the prophecy with your title. Cool beans!
[Report This]Date: 05/12/04 01:20 am Title: Chapter 7
i have to review this chapter cause AJ is soooo HILARIOUS in this one! when you think he would finally stop and let Kevin talk, he started with the 'are you planning to tell us sometime in this century' speech, lol. Man, gotta love him like that. I had fun reading this chappy and at the same time, we finally understand who they are. And great work at depicting part of the prophecy with your title. Cool beans!
[Report This]Date: 05/12/04 01:18 am Title: Chapter 8
from your email, you made me second guess Jeff's real intentions again, sigh. So is he good or bad??? lol...ick, maybe he's AJ's half brother or something, haha. Okay, so im still trying to remember and separate the different races like tracon (is that the right sp?) and kudos to you, those names sounds difficult to come up with.
[Report This]Date: 05/02/04 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
you hv one of the coolest author name ive come across so far, lol...very cool! and so so glad to find the story here! woohoo! I was going to say update soon but of course your'e waiting for me, lol...sorry abt that...anyways, like i said, one of the coolest sci fi fics ive read, hope to read more from you!
[Report This]Date: 04/29/04 02:40 am Title: Prologue
Okay....I'm hooked! I look forward to your next posting.
[Report This]Date: 04/26/04 01:11 am Title: Chapter 3
This is truly one of the best fanfic stories I've come across in a long time! Great characterizations, interesting AU, awesome potential for a fantastic ride. Keep up the awesome storytelling, I'll be watching for updates!
