[Report This]Date: 11/07/04 09:04 pm Title: 17
I can't wait for what's in store next. I'm feel like I'm in the guys' shoes. I gotta know Nicky's POV too. Great job keeping us on the edge of our seats. I'll be waiting for Wednesday
Author's Response: That is such a big compliment saying you feel like you are in the guys shoes because that's what I wanted the whole time I was writing this :D
[Report This]Date: 11/07/04 06:46 pm Title: 17
Finally we're gonna get a taste of Nick's memories. Bout time too, because Brian's are getting old. Nah, totally kidding. But I've been waiting for Nick to actually start "talking". Curious to know what the kid actually remembers. The flashback of Brian on the verge of dying was pretty darn dramatic. Seemed like something you would see on a crime show. I was on the edge of my seat. Good job and keep up the good work. [Alex]
Author's Response: Thanks Alex :D
[Report This]Date: 11/07/04 05:30 pm Title: 17
Congratulations you got your 100th review .... ;)
Author's Response: THank you for giving it to me :D
[Report This]Date: 11/07/04 05:27 pm Title: 17
wow this story is getting better each chapter, it's good to see Nick up and talking, I cant wait to hear his side of the story and hey now I can relax knowing that there is actually a real criminal.
Author's Response: LOL YAY yes I would never make Brian a meanie no worries ;)
[Report This]Date: 11/05/04 05:19 pm Title: 16
great job with the chapter i loved it tons
Author's Response: Thanks Anita! I loved your Christmas story :D
[Report This]Date: 11/05/04 09:00 am Title: 16
ok its not that doctor but who is he gonna be??!!! ahhhhh I cant wait till the net update,,,
Author's Response: lol aww thanks
[Report This]Date: 11/05/04 04:15 am Title: 16
SUNDAY!?!?!?! We HAFTA wait THREE whole DAYS for that!?!?! Ahhh!
Well, okay, it's NOT like you're making us wait three WEEKS or sumthin' here. Lol.
UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LOL yes thankfully i've been good with updatiung this one so far *knocks on wood*
[Report This]Date: 11/04/04 11:59 am Title: 16
I think I'm getting to be just as confused as Brian. I just can't get enough of this story! It's so great. Very addicting. Great work, can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: YAY I love being addictive lol but I don't like being confusing :(
sorry guys lol
[Report This]Date: 11/04/04 03:48 am Title: 16
*deadpanned* Derek Jones isn't Mr. Gold Teeth? Well crap, that DOES take us back to square one. Geez Mare, you really sent us in a twist there, but I liked that. Awesome update! Keep up the great work! [Alex]
Author's Response: heeheehee thanks :D
[Report This]Date: 11/04/04 02:59 am Title: 15
I just realized that I had even read this chap yet, nor reviewed it. Probably because I was out getting candy on Halloween. Brian completely spazzed on that doctor...ya know, "Dr. Gold Teeth". Pretty trippy he thinks it's the pyscho dude. Good update and keep up the great work! [Alex]
Author's Response: Thanks lol Halloween candy gotta love that :D
[Report This]Date: 11/03/04 11:50 am Title: 15
I'm loving reading your story. It's a great story line. I'm remembering a Monk episode when the killers tried to confuse Sherona and make her think she was going crazy so that she wouldn't notice the crime going on behind her. I don't know though, I'm still kinda confused as to where you're going with this story. Can't wait for today's episode. You're a very gifted writer.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! :D
I'm sorry you're confused :(
[Report This]Date: 11/03/04 02:58 am Title: 15
Dude, let's just get this over with. Take Mr. Derek Jones, pull up the pant-leg, check for the leg wound and call it a day. Sheesh! What is wrong with these people? Does logic not exist?
Author's Response: LOL maybe Brian never vocalized that part of it. ;)
[Report This]Date: 11/03/04 02:48 am Title: 14
Beautiful way to tie things together. Nick calling out for Brian because he wanted to find him in Heaven was especially sweet. It makes perfect sense now. Too much sense for the type of story you're doing... But then you throw in Dr. Derek Jones. I can't help but feel that Mr. Deadly Derek from the hotel is a figment of Brian's imagination created to make Brian feel better about whatever really happened in the hotel room. You can make pseudo-memories based on what you want... Just another trick to Psychology...
Author's Response: aww i'm making too much sense? lol dang I hate when that happens :P
I loved writing this chapter so thank you for calling it beautiful :D
[Report This]Date: 11/03/04 02:40 am Title: 13
Sorry it's been so long since I've read, had quite of bit of an issue with college... Okay, so it was a monster bash of tests, but oh well. It's so interesting to see Brian battle forth between trying to heal and then slipping back into terror... You feel for the boy. And the references to 'My Frack' were quite interesting. Wanting Nick to be a puppy? Dude, I could totally see that. You have a winner.
Author's Response: aww you never have to apologize for not responding. It's not mandatory and extremely nice of you to offer your comments. :D Tests are icky! Poor you :(
[Report This]Date: 11/02/04 02:28 am Title: 15
oh my god!!!!!!!!!!! i really hope that there is a bay guy because i don't think that i could handle brian doing that to nick i will be waiting for the update keep up the great work
Author's Response: aww you'll find out a bit more tomorrow :D thanks Linda!
