[Report This]Date: 10/31/04 03:55 pm Title: 15
why I got the feeling that there not gonna be any happy ending any time soon?? and where is the bad guy for real?? it cant be the doctor.. and I dont wanna think that he is just a creation of Brian's imagenation... he just cant :(
Author's Response: aww you never know ;) more of your questions will be answered tomorrow :D
[Report This]Date: 10/31/04 10:52 am Title: 14
I'v been away for a while and I got to read the last 3 chapters in on day hehehehe its great to read 3 chpters in the same day without waitting for an update specily chapter 13 I dont think I could live in suffring waiting for chpter 14, and I love the way you link the events togethr its amazing. and I love the part where Brian calls Nick his pet awww so cute
Author's Response: Thanks so much Reemo! And I loved that pet part too hehehe
[Report This]Date: 10/30/04 02:09 am Title: 14
Best chapter yet. Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks Beth :D
[Report This]Date: 10/29/04 09:15 pm Title: 14
well well that was a great update. I am glad that bri remembered about the promise and i can't wait til the next update on sunday you can really write keep up the great work u rok girl
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment Linda :D
[Report This]Date: 10/29/04 06:53 pm Title: 14
That was definitely an enlightment, revealing the meaning behind Nick continually calling out for Brian. A very sweet touch, comforting towards the situation. But man, how can Mr. Gold Teeth be workin' at the hospital and nobody knows it or even knows he exists when Brian gave the authorities his name? Very twisted... Or is Brian's head so messed up from the experience that he's imagining it? being terrorized by the memory of the guy who did this that he just thinks he keeps seeing him? Sunday won't come quick enough for the next update. Keep up the great work! [Alex]
Author's Response: Aww I hope all your questions get answered ;)
Thanks for always reviewing Alex! :D
[Report This]Date: 10/29/04 06:41 pm Title: 13
It's a good thing that Brian is getting over his nerves of being around Nick, especially being around him alone. It's something that he needs to be able to do in order to keep the bond between them going. This was good. Keep up the great work. [Alex]
Author's Response: Aww thanks Alex :D
[Report This]Date: 10/28/04 02:33 am Title: 13
WHAT!?!?! WHAT DID HE REMEMBER!?!?!!? TELL US!!!! AHHH!!!!
UPDATE!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
pEaCe!
Author's Response: LOL
[Report This]Date: 10/28/04 01:13 am Title: 13
great mare that was truly a great chpater. and i am very happy that u r gonna update on friday. you rok girl keep up the great work and til next time have a great week mauh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you rok
Author's Response: Aww thanks Linda for the reviews! YEs I thought since it was Halloween weekend i'd update three times this week. I'm so glad you guys are enjoying this story muah back!
[Report This]Date: 10/27/04 08:24 pm Title: 13
such an amazing chapter you totally rock mare
Author's Response: You rock more!
[Report This]Date: 10/26/04 03:08 pm Title: 12
Just - wow. Poor Frick n Frack! *hugs 'em both close* I said Brian had NO choice, BUT to hurt Nick. I KNEW he wouldn't hurt Nicky unless he HAD too!
UPDATE!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Yes you did! you should be Nancy Drew ;) thanks for the feedback as always!
[Report This]Date: 10/25/04 03:34 am Title: 12
Forced to take the knife and do the carving himself... whoa man. That's freakin' pyshcotic. But I guess bein' holed up with a psychopathic lunatic like Mr.Gold Teeth will bring about such happenings. Having to deal with the guilt of that reminder of doing such a thing would be enough to tear away anyone's sanity and rip it to shreds. The flashback you had going in this chap was intense. But I totally digged it! Keep up the awesome work! [Alex]
Author's Response: Alex thanks so much like I said above ^ I love reading your comments! Mr. Gold teeth lol
[Report This]Date: 10/25/04 03:02 am Title: 12
awesome job i love it a billion
Author's Response: thanks! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 10/25/04 01:46 am Title: 12
This is a really good story I love it keep updating!!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much and I promise I will right until the end :)
[Report This]Date: 10/25/04 01:37 am Title: 12
oh that was great now i have to wait til wednesday noooooooooo
kept me in supense can't wait great work
Author's Response: lol aww sorry about that. THanks for the feedback Linda! :)
[Report This]Date: 10/24/04 05:32 pm Title: 12
Great chapter Mare! Those flashback scenes are so well written and they are so emotive with brian trying to protect nicky. And I love the scenes with Brian and AJ too, you know those two together have a especial place in my heart. AJ is doing the best he can to be there for Bri, and lol at that line about "Kevin being the boss of everyone", I can so see AJ saying that.
An amazing chapter Mare. You are doing a great job :)
Author's Response: You are so sweet if I ever say you are a meanie again you have permission to bop me lol just kidding but okay you rock! lol but I still rock more! ;) love ya Maria!
