[Report This]Date: 10/24/04 05:26 pm Title: 12
The dude has a freaking knife wound, call the Emergency Departments, search for a dude who came in with a knife wound. Not like somebody is going to care for that wound on his own? Or if he did, maybe he'd die of septicemia. The bastard deserves that much. But, hello, that should have been one of the first thing the boys did. Screw letting Brian go back to sleep, somebody needs to report that at least! But, on a sweeter sentiment, very adorable how AJ came in and took care of Brian. Very life-like to the 'rough around the edges' personality he gives off. I think it gave Brian a little bit of comfort, which the boy needs right now. Definitely. More please.
(Oh, and I think you were telling me about a yahoo group you had? Well, I have one of my own if you would like to check it out: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/fadingpageswritings/)
Author's Response: LOL eh you know how people are in times of crisis the last thing they think of is the wound and perhaps Bian just thought it and didn't say it? Dang now i'm going to have to check lol Anyway as always thanks for your insightful comments! I agree about AJ he's prbably a puppy dog in real life under all those tattoos. I'm going to check out your yahoo group today! Thanks for the link :D
[Report This]Date: 10/22/04 08:35 pm Title: 11
Whoo! Down right trippy, Mare! If that dude wasn't a priest then how did Brian see him in the church...? Shizit...It was definitely worth the wait to read this. We actually arrived in Branson on Wednesday but I didn't drag my butt on line fully to read anything until today. I'm totally digging the suspense you keep pouring into this! Keep up the awesome work and I'll definitely be waiting for the next update! [Alex]
Author's Response: LOL aww I love reading your comments. Hope you had a good time in Branson. I've neevr been but I heard it's a lot like Nashville :D
[Report This]Date: 10/21/04 07:23 am Title: 11
you know with you nobody ever can giss what will hapen next that makes you the best and this chapter gave me hope that maybe Brian didnt carve anything on Nick..
[Report This]Date: 10/21/04 07:22 am Title: 11
you know with you nobody ever can giss what will hapen next that makes you the best and this chapter gave me hope that maybe Brian didnt carve anything on Nick..
Author's Response: Thanks Reemo! I hope you guys enjoy the rest of the story! :D
[Report This]Date: 10/21/04 04:39 am Title: 11
ok i SO remember this chapter! I actually thought he got the right guy! so Brian got it wrong and...ok, i realised you havent update the rest so cant go further than that, lol...
you know it's been awhile since you right an all out suspense and this one is awesome. It kinda reminds me of Lions Den and i know you think LD isnt good but it is to me, so this is a huge compliment wokies! lol...mmmaahh!! :)
Author's Response: mmmaaahhh and thanks. You are the best! Mers!
[Report This]Date: 10/21/04 01:38 am Title: 11
Okay, yeah, that was odd. Lobster-Man was actually working at the hospital... And the emphasis on stabbing at the end. I think I'm drawing up The Secret Window. Making up fictional characters in order to protect yourself from the reality of your crimes. Brian's projecting himself in a false world. Maybe Derek Jones is just a cover, too... Maybe Brian needed revenge on Nick and couldn't face the facts in his own personality, so he created another... Now that would be just a really sick turn that... I would do in one of my fictions! Haha!
Author's Response: ooh sounds good. I'd love to read that! ;) lol
[Report This]Date: 10/21/04 01:24 am Title: 11
Hi, sorry for not reviewing but i have been working alot of hours.. anywho thanks for writing a great story and i can't wait til the next update. I love how bri remembers in bits and pieces, but i sure hope he had nothing to do with all of that cause they are good friends. well keep up the great work and hope to read some more soon bye for now
Author's Response: thanks Linda, i'm grateful for any kind of feedback. I'm so glad you're all getting excited about what may or may have not happened. Makes me happy :D
[Report This]Date: 10/20/04 07:47 pm Title: 11
awesome job you made my day. Im outtie until sunday cuz im going to cali so see you soon
Author's Response: have the best time Anita! Be careful and bring home some gold lol
[Report This]Date: 10/19/04 11:08 am Title: 10
Ooh I love this story. I'm obsessed with a good mystery! You ever think of writing a regular mystery story? You've got lots of good ideas, I can tell!
Author's Response: Aww thanks for saying that and no I never have. Not sure if I would be good with a real mystery minus the boys but how kows maybe one day i'll try it :) lol
[Report This]Date: 10/18/04 03:26 am Title: 10
Brian only hurt Nicky 'cuz he had NO other choice! He'd NEVER do it on his own free will!
UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: You should be a detective too! ;) Thanks for reviwing all the time Lenni!
[Report This]Date: 10/18/04 01:46 am Title: 10
A lot of times I think victims assume the identity of their assaulters, so maybe Brian's picturing himself as Derek Jones caring the 'M.' Hopefully, because I don't think Brian could ever forgive himself if he actually finds out he did it. But finally, pieces are starting to come back together! Thank God for the unrepression of the sub-concious! Freud will not be tempted! I'm really loving this story. And I'm kind of jealous in my own way. Lost my password to Absolute, tried to generate a new one from the 'forgotten password' section, but never got the email telling me what my new password was. So, now, I'm completely blocked from my screen-name. Sent a message to Chaos, haven't heard from him either. *le sigh* There goes the chance of updating my stories, not that I think you'd be interested in mine... Though I just gave you a brief glimpse into my life... And now that I'm completely off topic of your story... Enjoy! Heh, I think I amuse myself far too much... But honestly, loving the story, can't wait for Wednesday.
[Report This]Date: 10/18/04 01:46 am Title: 10
A lot of times I think victims assume the identity of their assaulters, so maybe Brian's picturing himself as Derek Jones caring the 'M.' Hopefully, because I don't think Brian could ever forgive himself if he actually finds out he did it. But finally, pieces are starting to come back together! Thank God for the unrepression of the sub-concious! Freud will not be tempted! I'm really loving this story. And I'm kind of jealous in my own way. Lost my password to Absolute, tried to generate a new one from the 'forgotten password' section, but never got the email telling me what my new password was. So, now, I'm completely blocked from my screen-name. Sent a message to Chaos, haven't heard from him either. *le sigh* There goes the chance of updating my stories, not that I think you'd be interested in mine... Though I just gave you a brief glimpse into my life... And now that I'm completely off topic of your story... Enjoy! Heh, I think I amuse myself far too much... But honestly, loving the story, can't wait for Wednesday.
Author's Response: You should be a detective! lol Seriously you have the mind of one not that i'm a detective or anything but I love to read your analysis on things. And as far as the site. That has happened to me fomr time to time as well. Just stinnks :( and I dind't realize you wrote on here. You know what's sad is that I really haven't had a chance to read many fics on this site which is sad but i'll try to find your and give a read this weekend lol Thanks for the feedback as always! :D if you write you should think about joining my yahoo group fanfic fun. It's for fanfic writer's and every month we review a different story so that author gets a ton of feedback for the month! It might be something you are interested in. :D now i'm all rambly and off topic lol
[Report This]Date: 10/17/04 07:13 pm Title: 10
Brian's flashbacks keep getting creepier and creepier, but that makes them better each time. Very suspenseful I'd say. Dude, Brian carved Nick's arm? Now if that's true, that'd be freakin' messed up. You got my brain going in all directions, dude. Keep up the great work, Mare! This is the last chap I get to read until I get to Branson. I'm leaving tomorrow and my mom and I are driving my car to Branson. We won't get there til around wednesday or Thursday, so I might not get to read the wednesday update til thursday. So hopefully this chap was enough to hold me over til then. I'm lovin this. [Alex]
Author's Response: Aww well have a great time in Branson :) thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10/17/04 04:57 pm Title: 10
excellent chapter i loved it
Author's Response: You are awesome Anita thanks :D
[Report This]Date: 10/17/04 03:48 pm Title: 10
I love the flash backs although they give me the creeps and the ending..God it is a major torture .. I cant wait till wednesday
Author's Response: aww thanks Reemo! Creeps and torture is what i'm going for lol ;)
