[Report This]Date: 10/14/04 04:01 am Title: 9
God my eyes all teary now.. I love this chapter thanx Mare
Author's Response: *hands Reemo a tissue* thanks always :D
[Report This]Date: 10/14/04 02:46 am Title: 9
That was a fantastic chapter. Keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks Beth! :D
[Report This]Date: 10/14/04 12:54 am Title: 9
hi mare, just wanted to say that i hate having to wait til sunday boo hoo way! any who can't wait for sunday now and keep up the great work
Author's Response: aww thanks so much Linda. Yup sorry about the wait, but it does add to the suspense at least right? lol
[Report This]Date: 10/14/04 12:35 am Title: 9
What, no smart ass comment from Nick? Poor fella... The flash back dreams that Brian keeps having are really intense. It would be enough to make my head spin if it were me having them. Slowly but surely you are letting us witness what happened that night instead of all at once. I like the way you are spreading this out. And damn straight Brian got his butt to the hospital. Though I'm sure it would have been tough enough as it was just to go, emotionally that is. Great job though. Keep up the good work! [Alex]
Author's Response: yup I felt it best to let you guys in slowly otherwise the story would have been 5 chapters long lol I'm drawing it out. LOL
[Report This]Date: 10/13/04 11:25 pm Title: 9
Sunday!??!?! We HAVE to wait 'till Sunday!?!?!?! lol.
Great chapter! LOVED when Brian went 2 visit Nicky n it made him all happy! Yay! *happy dance*
UPDATE!!!!!
~Lenni`
Author's Response: YAY you're doing the happy dance! :D lol
[Report This]Date: 10/13/04 10:36 pm Title: 9
Awe, Brian's remembering bits and pieces. Scary bites and pieces, but bits and pieces none the less. And I think I'd be a little apprehensive going to see Nick for the first time, too. And damn, that's about the only free hit you'll ever get on AJ without him flipping a bird. Haha... Kevin calling Nick 'bab'y was just a tiny bit unnerving in the beginning. But then you think they almost lost him and then it's alright. Just knocks you off the seat for a minute. So, I expect you to pay for that medical bill.
Author's Response: lol sorry about the whole baby thing. It's funny that the suspense didn't scare you but Kevin's use of the word baby did LMAO i'll make sure to send you over a seatbekt if I ever do that again. :)
Seriously lol I had him say baby because I have heard him call the boys that in real life. :D I promise not to go all slashy on you! hehehe
[Report This]Date: 10/13/04 08:35 pm Title: 9
excellent job with this chapter mare
Author's Response: :D
[Report This]Date: 10/11/04 10:48 am Title: 8
I'm loving this story. It's awesome! I love how you're putting when you update. That helps me alot! Thanks for the great update!
Author's Response: aww thanks Roxy :D yeah I hate when a story is never updated this way if I tell you a day I HAVE to do it lol I work much better with deadlines lol thanks for reading! :D
[Report This]Date: 10/11/04 02:04 am Title: 8
Gosh darnit, Mare! WHY?! Leave us hanging at a most terrible part! You're writing is like watching a not-made-for-tv movie on regular tv and stupid commercials cutting in at exactly the WRONG times! I do have to admit it was a good cliffhanger. You have me really wondering about Brian though and the things going through his mind. The church scene was rather trippy. Good update. Keep up the great work and update soon! [Alex]
Author's Response: phew I had to read that twice. The forst time I thought you said it was like a made for TV movie lol Sorry about the cliffies but sometimes I can't help myself. It's part of the whole suspense thing :D
The church scene was kind of creepy wasn't it? lol
[Report This]Date: 10/11/04 01:59 am Title: 8
Hi, just a note to say yeah. i loved chapter 8 and i can't wait til chapter 9 is up. please keep up the great work
Author's Response: THanks Linda :D
[Report This]Date: 10/11/04 01:30 am Title: 8
I'll bet you FIFTY bucks Brian talked to an Angel! It just HAD to be an Angel! Even if it's not, I'll just believe that it was. Lol.
N Yay1 Nicky's up! *happy dance*
UPDATE!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: fifty bucks? LOL aww seems like an unfair bet since I know what is happeneing :D Happy dances rule! Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/04 12:29 am Title: 8
Where to start... First off, damn, sucks to think you're crazy. Hard to tell if Brian is imagining things or not. The mind is such a miraculous thing... To believe or not to believe... Seems like a question that haunts everyone at times. And the priest - that was extremely interesting. Also, I'd like to say I really enjoy your metaphors, gives a reader such a strong sense of what's happening. Metaphors and similies - can't live without'em! And hopefully Brian goes to visit Nick now that he's awake. He was so apprehensive the last time... Can't wait for the update. And, on a side note, the reply to one of my replies was really sweet. I'm glad you enjoy my reviews, makes me feel good! *beams*
Author's Response: YAY i'm glad you are liking the metaphors. I enjoy using them lol
and you're very welcome about my note. I meant it :D and still do!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/04 12:01 am Title: 8
One word: creepy.
But then, the whole story can give people shivers. Good thing that Brian realized the name thing because I can see me yelling at the computer "he knew your name!" lol. You know what I think already, right? You are an amazing suspense writer, Mare.
Author's Response: LOL at your creepy comment Maria! I know it;'s a compliment so thank you! :D you rock!
[Report This]Date: 10/10/04 05:25 pm Title: 8
awesome job keep up the great work
Author's Response: thanks again Anita :D
[Report This]Date: 10/10/04 12:23 pm Title: 8
ahhhhhhh Nick is awake...I cant wait till wednesday yay...
Author's Response: aww lol :D yay!
