Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/06 11:00 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: The Demon Priest

oooh she DOES know... I'm interested in her side, what's going on. (is it bad when you form a fanfic idea off a fanfic? a fanfic of a fanfic... LOL)

NEXT

Author's Response: Well.... She gets her own chunks of chapters along the way... Granted, her chapter chunks aren't as big as Minako's, but she does get them. ^_^ As to a fan fic of a fan fic, I have never heard of such a creature. But if anyone loved my work enough to write a fan fic about it, I would be most honored... As long as they paid the proper respects of course. ^_^ Thanks again. ^_^

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/06 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Shattered

Hrm THAT was more the reception I imagined! :-D I don't understand what made her think she was a traitor though... but like I've told you countless times, I'm confused easily when reading this genre.

Author's Response: Was it really so predictable? ^_~ Well... That gets answered later.... Had to make everyone guess first you know, which in part made them hate her, unfortunately. Thanks again for the review! ^_^ And, as far as I can tell, you seem to be hitting everything on the nose, so no worries! ^_^ And as to your other question, I haven't explained it yet, but it will come up soon (for me, unless you read fast and catch up with me). ^_^

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/06 06:38 pm Title: Chapter Twelve: Disappear

whoohoo Brian! wow a chapter mentioning light. heehee. You must always give a story at least 100 pages before you decide if you can stop reading or not... a slow start but it is picking up pace.. I'm liking (*looks in fear towards long paragraphs*)

Author's Response: I knew you'd be happy. ^_^ *gasp* You're not supposed to know it's Brian!!!! It's clearly the nameless Brian look-a-like! I don't think you're 100 pages in... Probably only about forty... If I remember correctly... If I get bored... Maybe I'll count and let you know... Well, most expositions aren't sooo exciting... Gotta set up everything, you know? ^_^ I'm glad you like it. ^_^ Thanks again for the review, and they're not soooo scary. ^_^

Reviewer: Hilda Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/06 05:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five: Vine Wielder

The intro to life and death was looong. Of course, it had a lot to do with the phylosophical point, but it really distracts from the action. It might make an impression that the whole chapter will go on that way. Mayeb you could split the intro into a few paragraphs?

What I really liked was the power you gave Kevin. He appeared to be really mighty...and even scary because of the endless power. And aww, his commitment to his friends IS heartbreaking. Can't believe he's a demon!

And oh, one bad guy less now!


Author's Response: I'm trying to make a story that's good to enjoy in all its bloody glory and also makes you think. I tend to drone on, and I've been trying to split up up, of course. That's something to go into when I edit the final cut. ^_^ I did have some help with that one. ^_^ This chapter gave me a lot of grief and writers blocks trying to decide what "attack powers" to give someone who's demonic powers were defensive. I wanty to present each demon as having their own strength that made each of them mighty in their own way, to prove why they desrved to be a cardinal demon. And, in a way, each one is also very frightening. I do hope you noticed though, that he had yet to drag out the attack power until this chapter, and then sealed it, in the manner of Howie in the previous chapter. Thanks. I'm also hoping their growing love for each other is becoming apparent. ^_^ I also hope all of them come off as more human than demonic, a word battle you've probably often noticed Minako struggle with (in comparison to Renee). Hmmmm... Are they truly the bad guys though? ^_^ Thanks for the lovely comment-filled review, Rose! ^_^

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Date: 11/06/06 04:08 am Title: Chapter Nine: The Oracle of Safaiananpou

britney huh? *laughs*

Author's Response: Oh yes. You'll see quite a few references like this. ^_^ Thanks again.

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Date: 11/06/06 03:47 am Title: Chapter Seven: The Demon King

LOL HOWIE!!!!!!!! ... interesting way to do that I admit.

Author's Response: Hey! At least Howie is in the story a lot... Relatively speaking... ^_^ Hey, I had to make him important somehow. ^_^ Thanks again.

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Date: 11/06/06 03:32 am Title: Chapter Five: Sorceress

oooh hidden powers and now a dungeon... oooooh

Author's Response: Haha. Yup... That's what it is... There's a lot more dungeons, so get used to them. ^_~ Thanks for reviewing. ^_^