Date: 11/20/07 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 23: Noah's Arc
WOw thats was great!! managed to make me cry again!! keep up the good work!! update soon!!
Date: 11/20/07 09:30 am Title: Chapter 23: Noah's Arc
Oh my god, why did they have to lose the baby, this chapter was really sad.
update again soon, I want to see what happens. I hope nick and alyssa can get through this.
Date: 11/20/07 08:20 am Title: Chapter 23: Noah's Arc
omg no he cant die NOOOOOOOOO. that was such a great chapter really well writen. i cant wait for more omg.
Date: 11/20/07 08:10 am Title: Chapter 23: Noah's Arc
NOOOO!! i cant believe it.... i feel SOOOOOO sorry for nick... please have some miracle for him.... i dont want him to lose ali either.... pls update soon...
Date: 11/20/07 08:03 am Title: Chapter 23: Noah's Arc
i am sitting here crying like a little baby...poor Nick and Ali i hope they can over come this and be strong!
Date: 11/20/07 05:25 am Title: Chapter 23: Noah's Arc
Wow... That's all I have to say. I'll write a better review tomorrow.
Date: 11/20/07 05:23 am Title: Chapter 23: Noah's Arc
OHMYGODHOWCOULDYOU?!?!
:) ... I still love you. I actually kinda saw this one coming, though I was still sad reading it. It was a beautiful chapter, and poor Alyssa won't have had the chance to see her son. Then there's Nick who has had to bear it all himself, it's sad. Great job though.
Author's Response: lol I figured YOU would see this one come Julia! Always a smart one! But yes, I'd been planning this from the beginning...and today, it took me forever to write it.
Date: 11/20/07 05:19 am Title: Chapter 23: Noah's Arc
Awww... There were so many heartwrenching images this chapter that I could visualize very clearly like a movie scene playing in my head. The end scene of Nick dropping the teddy bear and crying... Extremely powerful and exactly what I could imagine him doing in that scenario.
I know you had your doubts about taking this chapter where you did, but in the end I'm glad that you stuck to your guns. Sometimes it REALLY is hard to please everybody and its rough when you begin to doubt yourself. I think that you made a good desicion though and I'm very excited to see where you go next with it.
Date: 11/20/07 02:50 am Title: Chapter 22: When It All Falls Down
Oh my God that was a good chapter I just hope Alyssa really doesn't die or the baby either.
Date: 11/20/07 12:32 am Title: Chapter 22: When It All Falls Down
Oh my gosh, wow! I just knew that this chapter was going to end like this. So much was going on. Alyssa was in labor, then they needed to do an emergency C-section and now..Alyssa might be gone. I'm really hoping that she'll put through for Nick and Noah.
Ah, gosh, I hope that the baby will be alright too. From what it looks like, neither of them are doing too well. I'm in tears from this chapter. It was so emotional. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please write more as soon as possible.
Date: 11/19/07 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 22: When It All Falls Down
Wow... Everything seemed to happen so fast once they noticed the tear in her uterus. One minute she seemed okay and next thing you know she's flatlining. Very scary how life can change just like that in one instant.
I REALLY loved the narration in this part. You could definitely sense the fear in Alyssa's voice. I also really liked how you brouht up her past and how important Nick has always been to her. I was going to say more, but I don't remember my thoughts now because of certain interruptions *glares in direction of cell phone* But yea I loved it!
Date: 11/19/07 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 22: When It All Falls Down
OMG OMG NOOOOOOOOOOO shes got to live she cant die. update soon please cant wait.
Date: 11/19/07 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 22: When It All Falls Down
Oh God Please let her be okay and that the baby will be ok to. as always this is a great story. update really soon.
Date: 11/19/07 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 22: When It All Falls Down
The ironic part about Olivia being in the hospital is that Alyssa REALLY needs her during all of this. Like, Ali said in her narration that Ollie's always been the one to make everything better... Always making a joke or making her feel better. And now... Damn, everything's going awry and she doesn't have her big sis there to help her out. Granted, she has Nick and her other family members, but... Urgh... When it rains, it pours. They couldn't have said it better!
I hope that Alyssa's learned her lesson as far as doing too much. (Of course, it might be too late... Which sucks ass.)
Ummm okay, so the whole last scene was giving me chills. It's like nobody had any control over anything. I felt bad for Nick. I mean, obviously Ali was the one bleeding out on the table, but Nick... He's just standing back and unable to help really. And poor baby Noah...
I just... I can't wait to read more. Great job, hun! It's just getting better and better!!
Date: 11/19/07 05:32 am Title: Chapter 21: It's Just Too Little Too Late
Dude, I know, I'm nuts... But I reread this chapter again and I'm just like... HOLY SHIT! Still! lol. I'm such a dork. But, damn, I can't wait for more...
