Reviewer: jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/18/07 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 21: It's Just Too Little Too Late

i love the story keep it coming ok .

Reviewer: Moppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/18/07 10:38 am Title: Chapter 21: It's Just Too Little Too Late

Holy Shite! She's not that far into the pregnancy yet, is she?

Great chapter, dying for more soon Please

Reviewer: Jamanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/18/07 03:05 am Title: Chapter 21: It's Just Too Little Too Late

Oh my gosh, Teri! Jane is a freaking insane woman to say the least. How can she say those harsh things about Alyssa and her family? She shouldn't start bashing Alyssa for walking out and getting her all startled up. That's not healthy at all, not for Alyssa or the baby.

Jane needs to just leave..I was glad to see Nick stand up for Alyssa though. That really meant a lot to her, I'm sure. Awe, I'm so glad that Olivia is going to be okay. I'm sure that she's going to need immense therapy, but hopefully one day she'll be able to be back to somewhat normal.

Oh my, Alyssa's water broke! Oh gosh, that's not good. She's only like 6 months pregnant. That means she could have a premature baby. They can't stop the baby from coming if you're water has broken. I think that means that you've started dilating. Eh, this was a very intense chapter to say the least.

I hope that you'll write more as soon as possible, Teri. This is wonderful, but so sad and tragic. I love it though. Please write more really soon. :]

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/07 02:03 am Title: Chapter 21: It's Just Too Little Too Late

Also, I forgot to mention about Nick's reaction to the whole thing.  It shows what a GREAT guy he is.  Like, when he was cringing about the rape and all that.  Even though he'd used girls in the past (especially when he was convinced that he couldn't have Ali), he would NEVER hurt one.  And even with a dreadful mother like Jane, he turned out to be a really great man with a good heart.  He really is like a brother to both Olivia and Angela.  He cares about them not only because they're related to Alyssa, but because he's just a good guy and he loves them for them. 

When he says that he can't imagine anything happening to Alyssa, it brought tears to my eyes...  Partly because, well, yeah...  And partly because even though all of this shit has been going on between the two of them, they're still ultimately in love and SO there for each other, especially when they need it the most.  Look at how it went with Jane.  Even though Nick had been trying to restore the peace with Jane (or at least try to capture something between the two of them), when Nick realized that she was a huge bitch to Alyssa, he took her side.  As the title shows, though, it's too little too late.  Now she's gone into labor and who knows what's going to happen next.  It's like I want to just scream at them and try to fix things.

LOL Sorry for the randomness.  Every time I click on "submit," I forget something and need to add it! 

Reviewer: Tri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/07 01:50 am Title: Chapter 21: It's Just Too Little Too Late

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESH!!!!

Okay, awesomely amazing chapter even though I'm like FREAKING out over here.  I loved when Ali went off on Superbitch, aka Jane.   Ali's water broke...  Eesh.  I'm like freaking out about that, too.  I totally will be until all of this passes...  :-

Soooo great job overall on this chapter, hun!!  I feel like I've gotten to know Olivia a lot more.  When all of that was going on with Ali feeling sick due to the rape, I was actually feeling sick in the pit of my stomach.  You have an amazing way of writing stuff so realistically.   Like, seriously, I'm all in a sad mood because I'm like "say it isn't so!!"  I just want everyone to be happy and safe.

Sooo...  $250,000 change your mind at all...?  tee hee.

Reviewer: Jamanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/17/07 12:44 am Title: Chapter 20: Salvation

Jane is so insulting. It really is disgusting at some points. That comment that she made insulted Olivia and Angela's sexuality was uncalled for to me. Olivia did have a nice comeback though, so that was great.

Gosh, this chapter involved a lot of drama and situations. Hm, looks like Nick got off by Alyssa, eh? Haha, at least Ali considered how he was feeling and gave him something. That was sweet of her.

Oh my gosh, that freaking phone call at night was scary. They got trampled on when they were coming outside of a club. Olivia was raped, but Angie was able to fight back. That's freaking scary. Olivia is in unconscience to? Eh, I hope that she'll be okay.

I'm glad that Nick and Alyssa went there. I can't believe that they wouldn't let Angela see Olivia. Like Nick said, they are married...just not by the governmnet. And Jane..she went with them to the hospital, psh.

This was a great chapter, Teri. I loved it to bits and pieces. You've got me wanting to know what else is coming up. I feel as if Alyssa has a lot of stress on her shoulders and that really isn't good for her or the baby. Please write more as soon as possible, my dear. :]

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/07 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 16: Country-Ville

You must have been on a role, I'm WAY behind! lol I'm liking the mix of real life events aswell!