Date: 02/14/08 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 10: Beauty And The Geek
Good stuff! Very cute chapter! Yay for AJ and Kellie:) Can't wait t read more!
Author's Response: Yep I thought it was time for another baby to be on the scene! lol Hopefully Nick and Ali will be getting preggers too (probably not for a while knowing their stubborn butts!) lol Thank you so much for your review! It's very much appreciated and VERY motivating!
Date: 02/14/08 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 10: Beauty And The Geek
Aww Poor Lissa but at least she has Nick and it didn;t ruin her Bday!
Can't wait for more
Author's Response: YAY i'm glad u think it didn't ruin her birthday. That's what I wanted to show that they've really progressed even though they're not fully there yet. Thanks so much hon!
Date: 02/14/08 07:27 am Title: Chapter 10: Beauty And The Geek
aww what a great update i think that she took the news rather good her and nick's time will come soon im sure, update soon
Author's Response: Their time will come all in due time! *evil grin* anyways hon thank you so so much for reviewing!!!
Date: 02/13/08 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 10: Beauty And The Geek
Urghs ... I know, I wanted to leave a more detailed review, but it's getting late here again. So let me get right to it and try to put down as many as possible of my thoughts on this chappie.
Let's start at the beginning, ... damn, I wish I could have been at Ali's b-day party! Nick's gotta look freaking hot in his outfit! ...long sleeve button down shirt, sweater-vest and tie to match and glasses with tape in the middle... you trying to kill me here?! j/k
What's great too is too see everyone getting together again. The closeness of Ali and her siblings is awesome. Anyone can just wish for that. They are there for each other no matter what. And it's good to know that Ali can count on them in case she doesn't want to go to Nick with her problems.
It's good to see Alyssa get out of her "shell" again. She's slowly going back to her old self which I'm sure I'm not the only that's greatful for that. I missed her and Nicks playful banter and her sarcasm at times.
Wow for Kellie being pregnant! Congrats to her and Alex. I'm happy to see Alex having a family of his own soon, but poor Ali and Nick. Especially Ali, that must have been like a slap in the face when she found out. It's normal for her to feel jealous and guilty, I probably would have been too if had been through everything they have, with Noah and all. I hope the wounds aren't still too fresh for her and Nick to cope. And hopefully they will have a family of their own soon as well, like they've always wanted. If any body, it's them that deserve one. Not trying to push for anything here though. I'm sure it'll happen when times right.
Last thing I wanna focus on is the advice Alex gave to Nick. As much as Nick might not like it, he's right. Alyssa needs help from not only Nick but more than that. AJ has been through similar things and knows what he's talking about from experience. Alyssa has been through a lot (of course, Nick did too) and needs to sort out her feelings about everything. It's a blessing for her to have by her side for every step but I think it would be great for her to talk to others as well. Maybe she could start with AJ? I'm sure he could give her some good advice and if not just talking helps as well.
Well, that's all for now I guess. Lovely presents that Ali got from her friend. Update soon please!
On the last note, LOL at Brians costume!!
Author's Response: WOW thank you! I love that you loved that chapter! And yes Brian's costume had me giggling profusely! I hope to hear more from you soon! Thanks so much once again you rock!
Date: 02/13/08 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 10: Beauty And The Geek
Real quick review here ... LOVE IT! Sorry for the shortness and my lack of reviews right now! Schools keeping me pretty busy. Wanted to leave you something though. Keep updating girl! And I might come back and leave a longer review later on.
Author's Response: aw it's okay i have quite a few readers who are busy with school R&R when you can I really look forward to yours and everyone else's thoughts on what I write so really thank you so much!
Date: 02/13/08 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 10: Beauty And The Geek
such a great job really well done i cant wait for more.
Author's Response: thanks hon! more to come soon! stay tuned ;) (thanks for all the reviews since the series started! woo!)
Date: 02/13/08 04:00 am Title: Chapter 10: Beauty And The Geek
awesome job with the chapter. cute costume party idea and wow first of all for kellie being pregnant thats a surprise and then how she let it come out....kinda harsh but poor alyssa. keep up the great work with the chapter.
Author's Response: thank you so much anita! i love hearing what ya think! more to come soon i promise!
Date: 02/13/08 02:30 am Title: Chapter 10: Beauty And The Geek
great keep updatin
Author's Response: i most certainly will! thank you so much for your review!
Date: 02/12/08 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 10: Beauty And The Geek
awww.... they're so in love... loved the chapter pls update soon...
Author's Response: yes they are in love almost sickening huh? LOL jk but anyways thanks hon for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02/12/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 10: Beauty And The Geek
Awesome update, keep up the great work.
update soon.
Author's Response: aww thank you kim! more to come soon! I'm getting ready to post again possibly tomorrow or maybe monday hehe anyways thank you so much!
Date: 02/12/08 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 10: Beauty And The Geek
aw. i knew alex and kellie being preggers was coming. really though. when will it be her chance to be happy. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: yeah they're preggers, Nick and Ali's time will come *cue dramatic music* just have to decide when that is lol. Anyways thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02/12/08 08:06 am Title: Chapter 1: The Turn Of The Tide
okay so i just realized that the whole jane and dog pound thing with layla is a real story. man that woman is horrible. i just saw the story. haha.
Author's Response: yes lol i try to put real things in with the fiction to give it more realism =) Thanks for reading hon!! Keep it up there's definitely more to come!
Date: 02/11/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unmistakable
Okay, so I just realized it cut off some of my review! Thank God I do them in Word, right? I’m SCREAM otherwise. Here you go!
Nick’s narration in the beginning was really cute. He’s just so head over heels in love with Ali again and I love it. I liked how it went right into the interview, too, and to how Nick’s favorite track on the album is “Unmistakable.” First of all, even though I know the REAL Nick loves that song the best on UnB, but I think it means so much for your Nick in relationship to Ali. I just really think that the whole interview showed how much Nick cares about Ali and what Ali thinks about him. It’s so important that even though he has his career, it’s important what SHE thinks even more so than critics or whomever.
“Why? I’ve seen and tasted everything so it’s not like there’s gonna be a huge shock.” He quipped back letting his hands drift over her hips and up her sides.
^I LOVED that part. Seen and tasted… That’s just hot in so many ways and it really describes the intimacy of their relationship. I think that sometimes when they’re not in the actual act of sex, Ali doesn’t think about everything they’ve done on a conscious level. Ya know? But he’s really done it all with her (well, except anal… LOL) and I think it’s great that they’re starting to get to a new level of intimacy where Ali can feel comfortable with herself.
Nick sighed and looked away for a moment, “Yeah because she represented the woman I missed. You the woman I see right here in front of me. I missed you so much. And she was so much like you.”
“Am I blonde?”
“No personality wise. She is gorgeous I’ll grant you that but I’m sorry she doesn’t compare to you. You have my heart.”
^That part showed a lot of how much deeper Nick’s become. At least, for me. Ali takes it literally and is like “am I blonde?” (which annoys me endlessly cause it’s so sarcastic, lol). But Nick really means it like he just wanted that friend and the woman that Ali was for him for so many years… The woman that wasn’t there when she was pregnant and going through everything after the pregnancy ended. I think it’s important that the two of them talk about stuff like that.
I liked how they transitioned to sex so easily in this chapter. It was like so natural and that shows a lot about the progress they’ve been making. The sex was also smokin’ hot, so that’s always good! lol.
The chapter was really great! Keep it up. :D
Date: 02/11/08 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 9: Stern Promotion
Ali’s narration gives so much insight to how much she’s been improving over time. It’s refreshing and positive to see! She’s made such strides in her mood and whatnot since AS ended and it’s really showing here.
I like the fact that Kellie and Ali are remaining really close. I know it’s not a secret that I’ve never liked Lori, but I’ve always ADORED Kellie. I think that, as you had Ali say, throughout time as people grow and change, they either grow apart or they grow together. Kellie and Ali are headed in a similar direction (dating friends, getting their careers really going, etc) and Lori is married and has a baby… So it’s just a difference in the station in life. That’s not to say that when Kellie and Ali have kids and get married, they can’t go back to the friendship they once had or reinstate it in a different way. Lori does come off as really righteous sometimes and I think that’s what gets to me most. Kellie is such a sweetie and she’s not trying to scold Ali all the time. She’s just trying to be her friend. I hope that makes sense?
Yes, to me size doesn’t matter. I know easy to say since I have a man that most women would call “hung” but seriously even without it, he knows how to make me scream his name. And really that’s all that matters when it comes to the physical act of sex. If your partner can please you and you can please them? Then physically you have it made.
^^^That’s hilarious. Size doesn’t matter to the woman that has a guy with a huge dick! lol. I think that’s great. But, no, I’m kidding. I totally get what she means. Nick could be tiny, but still know what he’s doing with women and fuck her nice and hard. He can just touch her anywhere and he knows what the reaction is going to be. That’s really sexy. It says a lot about their level of intimacy and I think it’s great. I was going to say something else, but I totally forget it.
The Howard Stern interview was classic. I think it showed a lot about Ali how she reacted to Howard’s questioning and whatnot. It’s nice to see that instead of her getting all down and dirty in the sex details. You might disagree with me on this (I’m not sure, really), but I think that the old Ali might’ve talked about the threesome or certain things like that just to make it so the fans and the world knew that she was pleasing her man in a lot of ways in the bedroom. I don’t really know, though. I’m glad that Ali has gotten so private with sex details, even with her friends! Same goes for Nick. I know this chapter wasn’t really focused on Nick, but I figured I’d throw it out there.
Another awesome chapter. I really liked it. I’m sorry I’ve been so flaky with reviewing. I’ll try to be better in the future. :D Keep up the awesome work, hun! I can’t wait till you post the chapters you’ve been working on.
Date: 02/11/08 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unmistakable
Nick’s narration in the beginning was really cute. He’s just so head over heels in love with Ali again and I love it. I liked how it went right into the interview, too, and to how Nick’s favorite track on the album is “Unmistakable.” First of all, even though I know the REAL Nick loves that song the best on UnB, but I think it means so much for your Nick in relationship to Ali. I just really think that the whole interview showed how much Nick cares about Ali and what Ali thinks about him. It’s so important that even though he has his career, it’s important what SHE thinks even more so than critics or whomever.
“Why? I’ve seen and tasted everything so it’s not like there’s gonna be a huge shock.” He quipped back letting his hands drift over her hips and up her sides.
