oooh so goood! i cant wait for more! im fully up to speed with the NI series! i love them! haha you can so tell you and tri communicate with your references to each others stories!

great update keep up the good work and update soon

I love the playfulness between Nick and the Boys in the beginning. It’s great when they harass him about Ali and sex and whatnot and I love that Nick doesn’t want to talk about stuff. They’re keeping things more private this time around and I think that makes it so much more special! Then I love that Ali walks in in a “:Dcome fuck me now” outfit to tease the hell out of Nick and he just blanks out while he’s talking. I loved that Nick just HAS to follow her outside for a mini-make out session and some teasing for later. It sets it up great for them to come home and fuck each other’s brains out. (If you can’t tell, I’m having a rather interesting morning here…)

When Nick goes back inside, the witty banter between him and the guys is just too funny. I love that as Ali’s improving, everyone’s moods have been lightened a little bit and they’re joking around again. AJ and Nick have some great one-liners in that part – “the state of delusion” and the lipstick makeover thing – hilarious! And Brian is just… So nothing like Brian! It’s SOOO funny. And Nick being like McDonald’s… That whole conversation is just honestly so funny.

As far as Ali’s meeting goes… It’s ridiculous that Carol treated her that way because it’s not like she’s just some schmuck off the street. At the same time, however, it’s somewhat nice to see her have a struggle because it’s always been apparent that everything academically comes easy to Ali. Know what I mean? It’s not that it really does, but whenever you’ve showed her with other professors, they’ve adored her and it’s only her competition that’s given her a hard time. It was interesting to see how it is when someone isn’t too keen on her. And I think we all go through that, no matter WHO we are or how great we are. So it was really good to see. The realism of this story surpasses all of the others in the series like WHOA just because of those little details that add to it. It was also good (a little coincidental, I might add!) that Nick and AJ had a conversation about everything Ali’s been through and how hard she’s worked for everything with school and her career. It shows that Nick really recognizes her need and want to have her own job and he also sees how hard she’s worked through it all. He doesn’t look at his job as more important or anything.

I loved the last scene because it was just SO natural. Ali comes home stressed out, Nick starts giving her a little massage and they talk about their days… It was just really great how it all happened because neither one of them had ulterior motives from the get-go. It wasn’t like Nick was thinking “let me put in this time massaging her so I can bury my dick in her in a few minutes.” It was more innocent and natural. And the emotional connection during the actual act – damn! It’s just like they’re back to the hot sex they had in AIL, but there’s a new amazing emotional connection that makes it that much better. I can’t wait to see more of that!

Keep up the AMAZING work, hun! I’m sorry this review was such a long time coming. :D

Yay I'm so glad that they are getting back to normal and seem to be happy! Then again is something bad going to happen? Cause life isn't all butter cups and daiseys is it?

omg that was soooooo good cant wait for more.

aww what a cute update love the things nick was saying about alyssa so cute update soon

Awesome update, you can see how much they love each other. can't wait for a update.

Yay, finally wedding talk lol ... I love how Ali and Nick are right now, but I just can't wait to see them get married. They've come such a long way and worked hard for all they have as a couple now. I'm sure their wedding is gonna be gorgeous no matter what.

Great chapter, and update asap please:)