Date: 02/03/08 06:26 am Title: Chapter 7: Seatbacks And Tray Tables
hhhmmm i loved the entire chapter on whole i mean how could i not but the line that stood out the most to me was the last, it makes me wonder if you are foreshadowing something for the wedding...... update soon
Date: 02/03/08 02:03 am Title: Chapter 7: Seatbacks And Tray Tables
keep th chapters coming
Date: 02/03/08 02:02 am Title: Chapter 7: Seatbacks And Tray Tables
i hope they can work things out and im sure the wedding will be great whenever they deside to get married which i hoe is soon, update soon
Date: 02/03/08 12:26 am Title: Chapter 7: Seatbacks And Tray Tables
Okay, I liked how the chapter started out! The two of them are like giddy little kids in love with each other! It’s so great. I also liked that Nick came out with the idea of Ali not being comfortable with Nick’s body. I’ve definitely seen that throughout the series. It’s like she’ll stick with the safe things she knows he likes, but she’s too afraid to try anything new. Of course, as you mentioned, it’s largely due to the fact that he was “off limits” to her for so long as friends. She really has to learn how to be completely open with him – emotionally and physically. I’m glad that he shared how he felt and I think it will be interesting to see how that changes in the future. I’m sure the two of them will make excellent progress. They already have made so much!
I liked how they talked about the wedding date. You can tell Nick was a bit nervous about January. I wonder if the anxiety is due to him or Ali or if it’s just because they’re finally getting back on track with their relationship. It’ll be exciting to see them planning their wedding and all that jazz.
I liked Ali’s conversation with Kellie. I really like that she’s not dishing all the details to her about Nick this time around. Personally, I think it’s really important for a couple to have certain secrets that nobody else knows. Friends don’t always need to know every little detail – and that shouldn’t put a strain on Ali’s and Kellie’s friendship because it’s nothing against Kellie. It’s just that Nick and Ali have certain things that are sacred to them.
Great chapter! Keep up the good work and update soon. :D
Date: 02/02/08 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 6: Listening Party
Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you to update soon please lol
Date: 02/02/08 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 6: Listening Party
Aww, I loved this chapter (not that I don't love the others as well lol)! First of all it's awesome to see Nick and Ali doing so well and happy again. They are an awesome couple that we came to love along the way and they deserve all the happiness in the world after all they have been through! The connection they have now is just wow!
Secondly, you analyzed the songs perfectly! I love the new album of the guys and go as far as saying that it's my fave out of all of their albums. But still, I never thought about what the meaning behind some of the lyrics might be and honestly never tried to find out but now that I read this chappie, some of the songs have a whole new meaning to me.
All in all, I still love this series and think it keeps getting better which I thought it couldn't! Awesome job over all and this series was one of the first ff's I ever read and instantly became my fave and probably always will be :)
Date: 01/31/08 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 6: Listening Party
another great updatE!! keep them coming :)
Date: 01/31/08 06:38 am Title: Chapter 6: Listening Party
aww so glad that the girls like the album but who doesnt right lol update soon
Date: 01/31/08 06:01 am Title: Chapter 6: Listening Party
such an awesome job to see what she thought about the cd. i miss kevvie but it is an awesome cd and that would be so cool to be able to hear the cd the way the women did. a wonderful job with the chapter, keep you the fabulous job
Date: 01/31/08 03:02 am Title: Chapter 6: Listening Party
oooohh.... this was a lovely chapter... i cant wait for you to update more soon....
Date: 01/31/08 01:43 am Title: Chapter 6: Listening Party
so fucking good... i so loved it such a great job i so cant wait for more so good. keep it up. :)
Date: 01/31/08 12:11 am Title: Chapter 6: Listening Party
Okay, so I liked this chapter for a few reasons. One! I thought it was hilarious that all of the ladies thought that their men had invited them each to the studio privately, but then they got there and SURPRISE! It's a party. lol. Then I liked how detailed Ali's reactions were to each of the songs. Unbreakable really does fit so well with your characters in certain ways and it worked out well. :D (You totally called the fellas and arranged that, didn't you?) I loved how Nick and Ali kept exchanging little glances with each other while they were listening to the album. It's so cute. I think that they're getting that spark back slowly and they're doing it privately and consciously, which makes it all the better! The end was really cute, too, cause it shows that Ali's changing. She's becoming less uptight than she has been. She'll actually have sex before everything's in order and packed. *shock* lol. Sooo keep up the good work! Update soon. :D
Date: 01/19/08 03:55 am Title: Chapter 5: Morning After Glow
I’m glad that Nick and Ali are falling into a good place. Even now that they’re getting back to work and a routine and they’re getting busier, they’re still going back to each other at the end of the night and they’re thinking about each other constantly. It’s like they’ve gotten back to the giddy beginning part of their relationship where they’re excited about each other and all that. It’s hot and totally awesome that they had sex the night morning. Once again, it’s great that they’re getting back into that routine.
The house plans… SOOO cool! It’s such an awesome thing that Nick and Ali are starting their life together in a new place. New beginning and new outlook on life. It should be awesome to see how it all turns out and how everything is after they get married and try to start another family. It’ll be really cool.
I loved the thing about the Fifth Amendment. lol. That Nick wouldn’t know what it was or whatever was funny. And I like the fact that he DOESN’T share details with the guys. It’s refreshing for a change. But AJ’s too smart and he knows that he just has to hit Carter in the back and he’ll know that Alyssa scratched him – the telltale sign that they did it.
I can’t wait for the next chapter. The girls hearing the album for the first time is gonna be great. :D
Date: 01/17/08 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 5: Morning After Glow
Greatness, as usual. Man, the way the rest of the guys rag on Nick, lol. Still hilarious. Love it:) I bet they're really all like that when they get together, too. Man, I'd like to be a fly on the wall. haha.
Date: 01/17/08 07:11 am Title: Chapter 5: Morning After Glow
hehe soooooo good cant wait for more loved it
