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Reviewer: Lynzer4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/08 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 24: You Gotta Know When To Hold 'Em

Oh please let the card be a ace or a jack.... so he has a pair of high cards

cannot wait for more



Author's Response: well he MAY have high cards however...he may not and may have a sleeper hand hehe evil i know. i haven't heard from you in a long time glad to have you back! thanks so much for reading sweets!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/08 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 24: You Gotta Know When To Hold 'Em

Oooh...will they get married?  Can't wait to read more!

Awww...AJ and Kellie are having a boy :o)



Author's Response: possibly *snarky grin!* thanks hon!

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/04/08 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 24: You Gotta Know When To Hold 'Em

Ok, I totally agree with blueleeryan.... OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!
Awesome, awesome chapter. I soo hope they get married in Vegas.
Thanks for updating again so quickly. I CANNOT WAIT to read the rest!!! :-)

Author's Response: they might get married, haven't really fully decided yet. but whatever happens it'll be awesome

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/08 11:01 am Title: Chapter 24: You Gotta Know When To Hold 'Em

omg omg omg omg omg omg OH MY GOD... he better win. i think it would be cute if they got married in vages. awsome job i so cant wait for the next chapter.... update soon...

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/04/08 07:17 am Title: Chapter 24: You Gotta Know When To Hold 'Em

oh wow. wasnt expecting that at all. dun dun dun. a part of me would love it if they did it and didnt tell anyone till after the real wedding. yay cant wait for more. your rockin with the long updates!

Author's Response: thanks hon! yes i wanted it to come out of left field cuz crazy stuff happens in vegas, things you never expect to happen. but that doesn't mean for certain that anything will happen

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/03/08 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 23: City Of Sin

I wonder if they'll elope in Vegas. ;]

Author's Response: they might...hehe! thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/03/08 11:30 am Title: Chapter 1: The Turn Of The Tide

Oeh the're in Vegas, Nice!
Great update!

Author's Response: yep VEGAS BABY WOO! lol

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/08 10:34 am Title: Chapter 23: City Of Sin

omg i loved the last few chapters. awsome job. so cant wait for see what else is going to happen in vages. loved it, really an amazing job.

Author's Response: i'm so glad you love it sweets. you've stuck with this series from the beginning and i LOVE you for that!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/08 03:18 am Title: Chapter 23: City Of Sin

Loved the opening...and that they were able to refrain from the action.  I can't wait to see what else happens in Vegas!  Great job hun! 

Author's Response: hehe yay thank you! i'm trying to focus on the connections between everyone lately considering so much is going on from now on!

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/01/08 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 22: Christmas Time

Awesome update, can't wait for the wedding. update soon.

Author's Response: well it maybe sooner than you think *evil grin* thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/28/08 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Turn Of The Tide

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/08 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 22: Christmas Time

I am really proud of how Alyssa handled the news of her mom selling the house, her brother reacted more like I thought she would have.  Loved the end scene and the interaction between her and her mom.  Great as always, update soon!



Author's Response:

yeah i definitely wanted to show the change between them all. How alyssa's definitely grown up and how Clark and Olivia are both still rather sore about losing their dad. Thanks for reading! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/08 03:11 am Title: Chapter 21: Silent Night

Guess who is finally caught up?  I love the bliss...the opennesss...the emotion...can't wait for more more more!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/20/08 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Turn Of The Tide

Great chapter!

Reviewer: mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/20/08 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 21: Silent Night

ahhhhh i love the nightmare before christmas! and this was a great chapter. haha they found the goods. and I love how open they all are about sex even the parents.