Date: 11/23/08 04:34 am Title: Chapter 4: Kismet
Nick wasucky she didn't pounce on him with the pepper spray, that would've been painful, yet very funny.
Author's Response: lol!! thanks so much!
Date: 11/23/08 04:17 am Title: Chapter 3: Leaving On A Jet Plane
Nice chapter. Nick is so cute and wonderful as a father.
Author's Response: aww thankeees!!!
Date: 11/23/08 03:59 am Title: Chapter 2: Rash Decisions Don't Itch Do They?
They are both in desperate need of a good date and maybe an even better lay,lol. Hope they meet up soon, can't wait.
Author's Response: yes they need both of the above lol! thanks hon!
Date: 11/23/08 03:38 am Title: Chapter 1: Some Hearts Just Get All The Right Breaks
I'm sad for Nick, but her girls seem like they are total cuties. And now I'm craving for a piece of cake, great, lol. Nice start.
Author's Response: aww don't be too sad for him, he'll find something good soon! thanks hon
Date: 11/22/08 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 12: Revelations
I really like the way she got the news...and how she reacted, how he understood...the dialouge with little Jo...very sweet. Kids are a big thing...can't wait to see where you go! HUGS!
Author's Response: thanks hon seriously...you make my life easier! you were a big help this story so far!
Date: 11/22/08 04:56 am Title: Chapter 12: Revelations
excellent chapter i hope marie doesnt mess things up with herself and nick. i need the next chapter!
Author's Response: i don't think she will too badly...lol glad you enjoy it hon!
Date: 11/21/08 04:18 am Title: Chapter 12: Revelations
I knew they'd all get along! This just HAS to work out!!
Great chapter!! Waiting impatiently for the next one!
Author's Response: aww thanks hon!
Date: 11/21/08 03:56 am Title: Chapter 12: Revelations
amazing I loved. I hope she doesn't take too long. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thanks hon!
Date: 11/21/08 03:49 am Title: Chapter 12: Revelations
Marie needs to take my approach to life: How boring life would be if we always followed the path of least resistance.
Author's Response: awesome! hehe thanks so much hon!
Date: 11/21/08 12:42 am Title: Chapter 12: Revelations
looking forward to the next chapter. if i am marie,it would be hard to think about it too because it really shocked me and it was as if i had to internalize the events that happened.. though a part of me wants Nick... arrggh,, it's confusing. update soon, please? mwah!
Author's Response: good i'm glad you like it so far. it was definitely shocking huh? thanks so much hon!
Date: 11/20/08 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 12: Revelations
LOVED IT!!!!
She was great with the girls and I liked how you added the comment from the little girl about how she likes her too.
I hope she decides to follow her heart and try things with him. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: YAY! good! and yeah jo does like her alot. thanks so much!
Date: 11/20/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 11: Evergreen
DUM DUM DUM...can't wait for more...
Author's Response: lol thanks so much!
Date: 11/20/08 04:18 am Title: Chapter 11: Evergreen
THAT WAS SO NOT FAIR JUST TO LEAVE THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT. REALLY. NOT FAIR! but over all great chapter im really wanting the next one!
Author's Response: lmao! thanks so much hon for reading!
Date: 11/20/08 04:08 am Title: Chapter 10: Flashbulb Glare
ok great chapter and so close. frustratingly close! i wanna slap marie for not letting nick talk to her but MAYBE i can understand why lol
Date: 11/20/08 04:08 am Title: Chapter 10: Flashbulb Glare
ok great chapter and so close. frustratingly close! i wanna slap marie for not letting nick talk to her but MAYBE i can understand why lol
