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Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 06:51 am Title: Chapter 74

Oh no...I hope this works. I hate when people kill Kevin off, or any of the guys for that matter. I really hope this works and YAY for hero Nick! lol

Author's Response: LOL Nick makes for a cute hero :)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 04:41 am Title: Chapter 74

Oh noes! I really hope that Kevin will be okay. Sounds like a really nasty infection. I love Nick and Riley together...they're so sweet. I really like that we got to see Riley's vulnerable side. She's so strong that I think we forget that she has a hard time as well. Great chap :)

Author's Response: Kevin's not in a good place right now :(, life's harder in a zombie apocalypse. I'm glad everyone seems to like those two. I felt like Riley's softer side isn't shown as much, because she's not given a chance to, trying to always prove herself. But she does have her own issues, and the fact they were just building up so much finally caused her to crack. Thanks!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 04:19 am Title: Chapter 74

I love Nick and Riley's relationship with one another and I'm glad that Nick was able to help Kevin in some way, I hope he'll be okay. Thanks for the updates!

Author's Response: Thanks, they sort of balance I think. :) Nick is definitely trying to save the day, do you think he will? Mwahaha. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 03:59 am Title: Chapter 73

This story just gets better with every chapter. Can't wait to read about Gretchen and Brian's journey. On to the next chapter...

Author's Response: Thanks!!! Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 03:36 am Title: Chapter 74

awe! more soon!!!



Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 02:48 am Title: Chapter 73

Wow! Poor Gretchen. I can understand how she hates not knowing, but not sure if this is the greatest idea...Love the beginning of Fievel and An American Tale. That song makes me cry everytime I hear it! I sang it at my kindergarten graduation. LOL. The part where she has the nightmare is really sad but really sweet of Brian. Great chap as usual!

Author's Response: LOL probably not the greatest idea. I'm with you; that song makes me cry too! Aww LOL. Thanks, Sel!!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 72

Wow...action packed chap! First off, nice song choice! I love "Hey Jude." Lol at "little levitating fucking deathtraps." That was hilarious...great job getting in his head, as always. I hope that Kevin is ok, I was scared he was dead for a minute. And damn! Was not expecting this...so two camps now? What a twist!!

One more thing! That video is freaking hilarious!!!! *pets Nick*

Author's Response: I am a Beatles fanatic, and so at some point I knew I needed to have a song of theirs in there. I love "Hey Jude" as well. Thanks! Nick's head is an extremely scary place lol. Kevin's okay for now...but no one's safe for long mwahahaha. Yep, two camps now, two plot-lines to be told :). Glad you liked it! And I'm happy y'all loved the video LMAO, that death scene is beyond bad, making it epically hilarious hehe.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 71

Wow! What a twist! Love the idea. Ok, I totally cracked up about zombies on a plane! That was freaking hilarious. I pictured AJ looking really hot in this chap...thanks for those visuals. Lol. It didn't take much...dirty mouth maybe? And maybe you mentioned a wifebeater? If not, I imagined it. Haha!

Poor Nick...he's so scared :( I really hope that nothing else happens. Guess that wouldn't be very dramatic then now would it? The ending made me sad.

Author's Response: Thanks Sel! LOL at the zombies on a plane... we actually discovered a movie like that! It's called "Flight of the Living Dead" LMAO: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0780583/ Looks pretty epic(ally bad)! It doesn't take much for AJ to seem hot; I don't think that was through any descriptive prowess I may have LOL. I'm glad you liked the chapter; thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 08:54 am Title: Chapter 72

Oh god, I knew something bad was going to happen and I really thought Kev had been killed in the blast. I hope he can recover from his injuries. Great couple of chapters :)

Author's Response: LOL see people should listen to Nick right? Horror movie logic, never split up! (Or say "I'll be right back" LOL). Kevin's not dead....yet anyway. :) Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 08:36 am Title: Chapter 71

Loved AJ's Samuel L Jackson impression :) I hope Jo's feeling turns out to be just a feeling.

Author's Response: Thanks Steph! Glad you liked! :)

Reviewer: steffilu84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 04:17 am Title: Chapter 72

Wow, last few chapters have been very exciting. I am always excited to see an update 'cause I really want to know what will happen next. You guys have made a masterpice of a fan fiction and an epic zombie apocalypse story.



Author's Response: Wow, well thank you! That's a huge compliment, so again, thanks! :)

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 72

OMG!!!! I can't believe they got stranded in Colorado! In the spirit of Halloween....I heard Thriller on the radio last night at work and immediately thought of the Nick you portrayed here knocking off zombies one by one while singing the song.



Author's Response: Yep, mwahahaha... will they return to Florida? Dun dun dun... LOL I'm happy to hear Thriller made you think of our Nick. Thanks!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 72

I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! OMG! Wow! :( :( Great update! Oh the suspense! So you'll be writing about the two separate groups now? Is Kevin going to die? MORE!!!!!!!!!! Please? :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, we're gonna now be covering the tales of the groups. As for Kevin....well.... LOL. Thanks MA :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 71

Ooh...I don't like that ending...on to the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 72

I had to laugh at nick's dream....hmmmm I wonder where that came from ;) having seen that video over and over again. Poor Nick and his fear of flying...and poor Kevin :(( it looks like they won't see the others again does it? Hopefully Kevin survives and they figure out something! They should have known zombies would be everywhere, they should have stayed on the base. I also liked how Nick protected Riley, the way he covered her like that reminded me of this episode of smallville. Loving this update, I was excited to see double updates! Double updates....what could it mean???? LOL thanks for giving me some entertainment. Loved every bit!

Author's Response: LOL that was why that one night I kept tweeting about the hilarity of it. I was cracking myself up writing that. Poor Nick though, and Kevin. :( It does look like that doesn't it? Who knows if they will, life has definitely gotten harder for them yet again. As for leaving the base, the problem was that they had no way of knowing, and Kevin did have a point, it was that or sit around to get picked off one by one. Now they know. Thanks for the feedback! :)