Date: 02/27/07 02:53 pm Title: Safest Place to Hide
This story is pretty good, but it seems a little dry. There is also no intro to tell people who know nothing about the BSB what's going on. Maybe you should try a prologue? Whatever, I still love them (AJ is my man!!!) and I'm glad that there are others out there who love them just as much.
Date: 01/02/07 08:38 pm Title: Angels and Heroes
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Can you feel the Love?
Marriage License, Bride and Groom?
The moment his lips toucher mine breathless year him; and passion laced the deepest and poured from this heart to mine. It only took one kiss to change my life.
The hope loving parents leave with their children by giving their very best and?
Date: 08/11/06 06:28 am Title: Angels and Heroes
I really love all the mystery of this story, but be careful not to be so mysterious that you leave out too many details. Right now as a reader I'm having lots of questions. What exactly is bothering Brian? Why all the dreams about death? How are all these characters connected? What is Honey's signifigance? How old is she? I'm also a little confused about Nick having tuberculosis. He was in a car accident. How did that develop into tuberculosis and why pick tuberculosis at all? I can't wait to read more to answer my questions.