Date: 04/22/10 01:21 am Title: Bad feelings
Love the update!! Great story, you're a great writer!
Author's Response: Yay I love reviews! lol And thank you so much for the compliment! Things like that spark creativity!
Date: 04/18/10 05:29 pm Title: Plans set in motion
Nice to see Kevin is listening to Nick for once. I'm with Nick tho, he woulda tricked him to go back with him...which woulda turned out bad. I can't wait to see the Boys reactions when he tells them..specially AJ..lmao!!! That should be pretty priceless in itself.
Winter Jack...hmmm..my guess, would be Jack Frost, Old Man Winter.
And for the pregnancy cravings...how bout a peanut butter and sardine sammich? hehe....
Author's Response: Oh yeah, Kevin would have totally tricked him lol I had to put myself in Nick's mind for that one. If Kevin has always been the "Father" figure for the group then he would have done what he thinks is best, even if it is the worst he could have done. And yes, I can't wait until the guys get there and Nick breaks out the news lol. I already have a reaction for Howie planned, but I haven't got AJ down yet. I'll be thinking of that while I'm at work tonight. --- And yes, you had it with Jack Frost =) To me Jack Frost equals Winter, and vise versa, so I used the name Winter Jack =) --- Thank you for the preggo craving, email me at rydonjoncer@aol.com so we can discuss your gift lol.
Date: 04/18/10 05:24 pm Title: This...is my confession.
I know!! I was like "where the hell is the chapter" after you told me to go read it in the last review! I kept going back looking for it..lmao!!
WOW!! I didn't expect her to tell him this early! Or while he was prenant. Tearjerker city!! OMG! I had a damn lump in my throat reading that chapter! I still can't believe she is so forgiving..but that was a long time ago. I really do hope they can work things out and get back together...
Great, GREAT job on this chapter!! It's my fav one yet!!
Author's Response: lol I'm so sorry about that mishap! I was kicking myself the whole time I was uploading it, like "WTF is wrong with me?" lol. Anyway, I always intended on her telling him while he was pregnant, because of where this story is going to end up going, I'm just working on getting it there. And you aren't the only one with a lump. I actually had a couple come out. I'm glad you liked the update =)
Date: 04/15/10 10:44 pm Title: Prologue
Ohhh Ok..Now it makes more sense with the italics gone!
YAY!! You used my "creation" idea!! I'm so happy!! Ok..warning..don't take a drink...I, again, printed it out at work and read it on a smoke break! lmao!!
I can't wait to see how she's gonna talk Nick into going with Kevin while her sibs are there. Should be an interesting talk. Again, great chapter and can't wait for the next, as always!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the warning, I was actually about to lol Okay, now that I have, yes, I used your creation lol but I also put a new chapter up right after that. So, chapter 20 is waiting for you to read it =) Grab some tissues that's all I'm saying. I cried when I wrote it. Not much, but I still needed tissues lol. Anyway, I told you I would use it, I just didn't know when, and then this part gave me the chance to use it. Haha, poor Kevin though lol. Now go read chapter 20
Date: 04/14/10 09:59 pm Title: Prologue
Poor Nick. That panic attack sounds aweful! And I never really thought about them not talking about him not believing his mother about what happened. That should be an interesting chapter. I've been wondering when he stopped believing his mom and then he was at her side when she lost the baby (but didn't know) what happened AFTER that happened. hmmm.....waiting to find out!
And how is Nick gonna cope with being seperated from her when her sibs visit? Poor guy is gonna have a meltdown.
Once again, great chapter and can't wait for the next!! I was so excited to see a new chapter when I checked at work, I couldn't wait, printed it out and read it on a smoke break..lmao!!!
Author's Response: Panic attack speaking from personal experience. I hate panic attacks, yet I end up having them because I have a severely bad case of Social Anxiety Disorder. I have trouble going to concerts unless I have certain people with me, but when the music starts I can forget about the others there to see the show. My panic attacks are horrible so I toned it down some for Nick. Trust me, he got it easy lol. Anywho, I do have the chap coming up soon, but dunno when, that will explain the question of his mom, and I so totally didn't realize it until now but I forgot to kill the italics after her dream in "Back to a pained reality" so it looked like that was part of the dream and oops lol I fixed it though. But anyway, I'm still working out how to have her tell him about the miscarriage, if she does. The coping thing is definitely going to be a field day to write, I tell you that, I just have one question, how are the guys going to keep him calm without Pepper and her mystery tea? And will her siblings notice there's been company? How will she cover it if they do notice? And you can't say things like "read it on a smoke break" it makes me laugh and almost laugh my Coke Zero all over the computer screen lol. Seriously, I read that bit and my computer almost got a shower lol. But I feel special that you read it at work, things like that make me happy =) Seriously, you made my day with that one lol. Keep an eye out for that next chap, coming soon!
Date: 04/12/10 01:40 am Title: And behind door #1 is!...crap.
GRRRRRRRR!! I know you're not gonna believe me...but I did have Kevin's name typed out before I changed my mind and put Winter!! I tell everyone to go with their first instinct..I shoulda went with mine!! Dammit!!! lol
And awwww...thanks for using my quote as a chapter title!! I'm honored!! Can't wait for the next chapter to see more of Kevin's reaction. Once again, nicely written and can't wait for the next!!!
Author's Response: You know, this review made me smile, cos of the fact a reader was honored for something, and the fact that you said "nicely written". I LOVE reviews that have that in them, though I don't know why lol. Maybe it stems back to my horribly written stories back in 97-whenever I got better lol. I found some of them and ho-ly shit, can we say *cringe*? They were burned lol. Put it that way. Anywho lol, you should have gone for your first instinct, I would have changed it and used Winter instead lol. Totally different chapter reaction haha. If someone guesses what's about to happen, unless I ask what's about to, and they get it right, I'm likely to change it to prove them wrong lol. But it was never planned to be Winter, so don't worry you didn't change anything lol.
Date: 04/11/10 03:48 pm Title: Pointless hope
Hmmmm....I'm gonna say its Winter.
I can't wait for the chapter when she finally tells him about loosing the baby. I have a feeling I'm gonna need a box of tissues for that one.
He's so cute how he just wants to help her with everything and is basically up her ass 24/7. Also waiting for the chapter when she gives in and just gives herself to him.
Great chapter once again!! Please don't keep us hanging out too long before you disclose who was behind door #1!!
Author's Response: lol I haven't written it yet, but with what I have planned, yes you will lol. I'll give you that warning now. Hmm, Winter? Maybe lol. Not yes, not no, but maybe lol. I gotta admit, I may never have met Nick, but I love the version of him I have in my head lol. It's nothing fantastical mind you, no one is perfect, but the Nick in my head is just right lol. And you shouldn't have to wait too long, I'm working on a chap right now =) Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/09/10 09:07 pm Title: Prologue
Yep...she's falling for him all over again...and I love it!! And horray for Nick for telling his mother off!! I loved it!! Nicely written!
As for my present (thanks, btw)...hmmm..pregnancy cravings...and Nick... How bout two big cookies with ice cream, bananas, and sliced pickes samwiched in between the cookies?? Sounds yummy right? lmao!!!
Great chapter once again! Keep em comin!!
Author's Response: lol to be honest with you (due to my hate of pickles) it sounds horrible lol. Take out the pickles and I'm sure the ice cream, bananas, and cookies are amazing lol. And I don't know what chapter I'll use it in, but it is so getting used. Even if it wasn't for you that sounds like an awesome craving to write lol. And ever since I wrote the chaps of him being tricked by Jane I've been wanting to write that bit sooooo bad lol. There is another bit coming up, dunno when, that'll make everyone smile lol. I'll let you all know when it has arrived. And, one more chap is on the way lol, finishing touches are being made.
Date: 04/09/10 03:47 am Title: The day it all began...
WHAT?! Lol.
Author's Response: yup lol he's preggers lol but keep reading so you can see the rest =)
Date: 04/09/10 03:41 am Title: Prologue
Yay, a new fan-fic to read!
Author's Response: lol I love when new people find this!
Date: 04/08/10 04:24 am Title: It begins...
Awww...I'm so sorry to hear that...I'll keep your friend in my prayers tonight...
Pregnancy cravings are the WORST!! My daughter was Skittles...my son, Doritos..lol!! Nick would make such a cute....pregnant person. All his little quirks he has being all intensified. Cute chapter!! Again, can't wait for the next!!
Author's Response: Lol if you have any other cravings you would love to see him have you have to tell me lol. Since you seem to be the number one person commenting on this I want to give you a gift of having help in the fic, even if it's something as small as pregnancy cravings =) Thanks for the review! ps- he can have my baby XD
Date: 04/03/10 05:47 pm Title: A hot shower and a phone call
I actually went "AWWWW!" when Bri and Nick said I love you at the end of the call..lmao!!! Honestly, I say Eff calling his mother..let her worry or whatever she's feeling. He owes her no explaination. Glad he did call Brian tho.
So happy to see another chapter so soon! Hope your visit was good. And you can never bombardus with chapters! Honestly, I love that you update so often. There isn't much good FF out there to read and I'm enjoying the constant updates emensely!! Great job once again and can't wait for the next!!
Author's Response: You aren't the only one who said aw lol I did to, and I'm the one that wrote the chapter lol. Trust me, as an outside view, I say let the bitch worry too, he doesn't owe her anything. I, as a Nick fan, dislike his Mother. And it was a good visit, I just wish I had posted on Friday like I had planned, but I was so sick/tired I couldn't even leave my bed except to go in to work on my night off because my manager is a dick and had me do the job he was supposed to do and I'm not even in management. I try to update constantly, trust me, I love seeing reviews lol. And I too, when I'm reading something, like to see semi-constant to constant updates. I'd be writing a chapter now except I paused Iron Man to respond to this and I'm going to my friend's again when my other friend gets offline lol I'll be writing in the AM though =) Thanks for another review!
Date: 04/01/10 01:42 am Title: Gas station conversation
Hmmmm...very interesting. If only he knew all about what caused the depression. I love learning new bits of Pepper's life. She leads an interesting one.
Poor Nickypoo...getting all restless. Great chapter! And boo that I have to wait for another..hehe.. Have fun visiting your friend, have a great weekend and I can't wait for the next installment! Have a safe trip!
Author's Response: Yeah, she does lead an interesting life =) I love this character, I really do. And the story to be honest =) I hate having to wait to post, but I don't like overloading people with chaps lol. And thank you, luckily this is only 3 towns (if you can call the two between towns lol) away so it'll be a quick drive. I'll still be out there for a little while though. In all honestly, I haven't smiled all that much in almost 2 weeks, and hanging out with her yesterday helped ease the pain of the stuff I'm going through, so I think it's something I NEED right now, you know? Well, have a good day! And thanks for the review!
Date: 03/30/10 02:10 am Title: Prologue
Ohhhhhh!! So he didn't know about the miscarriage! Can't wait to see how that plays out. And she's fallin for him again...but who wouldn't!? Specially with him in this delicate condition.
Once again, great chapter! And can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: Yep, he knows nothing about the miscarriage and thanks for the review! =) Something to make me smile before I go to work =) More updates tomorrow, I promise!! =) And ps, I know I would fall for him ;)
Date: 03/29/10 09:22 pm Title: Prologue
I was refering to why he decided to belive her and not his mother and seek her out.
You've deff got me hooked on this story. Can't wait for the upcoming chapters!!!
Author's Response: Ah, got it and I'm glad I got ya hooked =) Upcoming chapter in a hot minute! =)
