Date: 03/28/10 08:06 pm Title: Back to a painful reality
Just....wow! Didn't see that one coming. I can't wait to see Nick's reaction when he finds out what happened. And I can't wait to find out why he changed his mind. Or her reaction to him being there when she really wakes up and realizes that he's there.
Nice twist to the story..no, I'm not gonna kill you..lol. Great job and can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm not getting killed! lol And yeah, I've been dying to get to the part in the story cos it's been clawing the hell out of my brain to be written. And trust me, all the things you're looking forward to seeing are all waiting in line for their turn lol. And just curious, as to which part of him changing his mind were you referring to? I had it happen a couple of times =)
Date: 03/28/10 05:51 pm Title: Flashback dreams Pt. 3
Honestly, I can see Jane doing this shit...even today. Poor Nick. And I can't believe he would believe his MOTHER about all this. After he knows how is own mother is. But, blood is thicker than water.
Still very much enjoying the story. Great chapter and waiting for the next one!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I've noticed that sometimes blood does run thicker than water, enough to clog someone's reasonable thinking. It irritates me at times and yeah, I wrote it and I can't believe he would listen to her. Glad to see you're still liking the story and the next chap is up =)
Date: 03/27/10 10:29 am Title: Flashback dreams Pt. 2
Awe. Loving this so far, his mom is a dumb bitch. UPDATE!!
Author's Response: Finishing up the final touches, but I still have to add it to the other site I'm posting on, but I keep getting caught up in "What's Mine, Stays Mine" lol. I'm trying to read and write at the same time, doesn't work too well lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/26/10 12:10 pm Title: Flashback dreams Pt. 1
Like the flashback! But I'm wondering how he got pregnant, I'm sure all will be told in due course though!
Author's Response: Oh yes, all will be told in it's own time, but you'll just have to wait and see how it pans out =)
Date: 03/26/10 12:01 pm Title: Nerves and herbs
Paying the doctor in weed, lol! Wow, so he really is pregnant!
Author's Response: lol I loved writing that part and yes, yes he is lol. thanks for the review!
Date: 03/26/10 04:52 am Title: Flashback dreams Pt. 1
Ready for the next chapter...
Author's Response: working on it right now =)
Date: 03/25/10 11:14 pm Title: Flashback dreams Pt. 1
Hmmm....I'm really looking forward to what Jane did to cause such painful feelings and thier breakup. I'm so curious now!! I'm figuring she had about the same dream, hence the tears.
Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!
p.s. Yes!! I LOVED the Twilight series! I'm not a obsessed fan but I did get thru all 4 books in 8 days..couldn't put them down. I liked the books better than the movies...
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter right now, and let me just say, Jane is a bitch, even in fic land lol. Keep an eye out for it! =) And in response to your PS, I agree with you on liking the books better than the movies. Ha, I had another dream, I think I'm actually going to post that one real quick so you can read it, if you're into guy on guy, related to Twilight, more specifically the actors. You just reminded me that I had yet to post it.. I'll see if I can lol.
Date: 03/25/10 02:25 pm Title: The day it all began...
Well, I didn't see that one coming! Is he insane or what?
Author's Response: lol keep reading and find out =) trust me, it's not what you expect
Date: 03/25/10 02:05 pm Title: Prologue
I like the sound of this so far :)
Author's Response: keep reading my dear and see what all you have missed so far =)
Date: 03/24/10 10:21 pm Title: Prologue
Flowwwwwwww baby flow! And LMAO @ Pete Wentz getting him preggers!! That's too funny...but dreams are a great source of inspiration and imagination. I'm glad you had that dream because I'm really enjoying this story. I'm having fun getting to know more and more about Pepper. Her siblings names...interesting.
Keep up the great work!! Can't wait for the next installment!!
Author's Response: lol I know, I can't seem to get the flow to stop, not complaining, but I'm liking where this is going. And yes, dreams can bring a good story about, hell look at Twilight, if you like it. Anyway, I got Autumn's name because I LOVE the season, and that's one of the girl names I have picked out, and then I just stretched it out to the others =) I'm working on another chapter right now but I don't know if it'll be posted before I go to work or not, it depends on if I finish it before then or not. Thank you for the reviews! =)
Date: 03/23/10 11:32 pm Title: A little past and a couple of questions answered
OMG... very interesting plot here. can't wait to see what you come up with... hehe Nick pregnant... kinda funny. lol...
Author's Response: Holy ish, YOU'RE reviewing my stuff? Ha, I read your stuff lol. I like it when people I read review my stuff. Anyway, yes, Nick is preggers lol
Date: 03/23/10 12:04 am Title: Prologue
This story is putting me in the mind of the movie Jr. lol. I'm wondering if there is a father or if he got himself pregnant..lol.
Great chapter again...can't wait for the next!! May your muse siiiiiiiiiiing song away!
Author's Response: lol You know, I only saw that once, but it was totally not the inspiration for the story of it... You wanna laugh at where I got the inspiration from? I had a dream that Nick got pregnant by Pete Wentz, and no, this isn't what's going to happen in the story, but all it took was that dream to make all these characters come out of nowhere lol
Date: 03/22/10 06:58 pm Title: Nerves and herbs
sooooo he is pregnant!! now who is the father.. I mean the other father??!! dont tell me he just came out of nowhere !! Kevin should be the father ;)
Author's Response: I'm not even sure where it came from to be honest, y muse hasn't sung me that part of the song yet, but she's got me on the edge of my seat wondering when we'll find out =) I did get a mini laugh out of Kevin being the father, I could imagine that kid *nods* yup.
Date: 03/21/10 10:39 pm Title: Prologue
Great story!
Author's Response: keep reading and you'll see there is more to come! =)
Date: 03/21/10 06:03 pm Title: Trying to sort things out
It's nice to see someone who is a techincal writer. The story is very attention getting also. I'm enjoying reading this! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: =) Ah, reviews like that make me happy, and I actually wrote another chap, I just have to work on typing it up since I literally, wrote it on paper lol. Spare time at work works for me =D. Keep reading! =)
