Date: 07/14/10 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Again I am loving this story so much. I liked how you put the song in there, it seems to tie in well. I just heard it for the first time today and I love the song. Nick really should tell someone at least. That's what's eating him up, figuring out how to tell them. He's afraid they will treat him differently. I can understand the confusion he must be feeling, Alzheimer's is not easy to go through. My grandma kept insisting nothing was wrong with her even though we could tell she was changing. Awesome job, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Awww thank you! Yes, I had like two pages written, then I heard the song yesterday in full and it just inspired me for the rest of me. And yes, that's exactly what Nick's feeling, he knows they'll see him differently :(. Thanks!
Date: 07/08/10 12:42 am Title: Chapter Eight
Wow this is such an amazing story so far. My grandmother had Alzheimer's disease and Dementia so I can relate a bit. Plus I have ADD myself. Nick is very easy to relate to and I love how he is written. I liked this so far, loved this chapter because angry howie is hilarious. But seriously you are doing an awesome job and I can't wait for the next chapter, you're an amazing writer.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm glad you took the time to check it out, and that you enjoyed it! I try really hard to keep the Alzheimer's stuff as accurate as possible.
Date: 07/07/10 04:44 am Title: Chapter Eight
I read this awhile ago, but realized that I never reviewed! Sorry :( Great chap, yet again. Love the scene between Kevin and Nick. I wonder if he'll wait as long as he plans to tell the other guys...
And the second half of this chap was awesome. LOVE the part about Howie "begging to be woken up deep down inside." LOL. Can't wait for an update :)
Author's Response: It's okay Sel! But thanks for coming back to tell me what you think. As for Nick...who knows? :) LOL Howie is always begging to be woken up deep down, when Nick wants to prank him. Didn't you know that? hehe
Date: 07/03/10 06:56 am Title: Chapter Seven
OMG That was just heartbreaking! I'm glad Nick finally told someone though. I wonder if Kevin will actually keep it secret. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Hmm...will he? Nick definitely needed to tell someone though.
Date: 07/02/10 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Great chapter! I'm glad Nick finally told someone. it'll be good for him later on.
cant' wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 07/02/10 09:37 pm Title: Chapter Eight
I've told you already, but I'll say it again: I love this chapter, from the poignant scene between Kevin and Nick, to the comic relief with Howie and Brian. I wonder how long he'll be able to keep up the act around them, before they start realizing something's wrong again. Have a great time at your show tonight!!! =D
Author's Response: Awww thank you Julie! I'll text you updates during the show lol :)
Date: 07/02/10 07:49 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Aw, what a sweet chapter. Kevin gives great advice and good for Nick to try to make the best of his diagnosis for the moment. LMAO at Howie going Puerto Rican on Nick and Nick crashing into Brian. "I'm magically delicious!" LOL Great job, can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Kevin totally does, it's his thing lol. Nick's gonna try anyway, what else can he do right? LMAO I can so see Brian saying that in my head so I had to put it in. Thanks MA :)
Date: 07/02/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter Eight
I loved that he was able to just put it all behind him and have some fun with the boys. Yeah, that Carter charm would get him anything!
Big daddy Kev is always right *sighs* don't you just love him!
Author's Response: Well he's trying anyway. And yes, Nick's charm would get him nuclear warheads if he tried LMAO. And yes, I love that Kevin is always right hehehe
Date: 07/02/10 11:45 am Title: Chapter Eight
I love Nick's inner thoughts in this chapter. About Kevin being his father figure and how he was afriad to let him know that. You have to wonder if it is kind of just an unspoken thing between them in real life. If they even really feel that. LOL we're all so used to writing them that way that I just kind of think it's how it is, which it probably is. Anyway that was very Nick-ish and babbly. Loved the dialogue between the two of them and then at the end how Nick felt like young Nick again. Poor licked Howie! lmao
Author's Response: I'm like you Mare, I really just think that's how it is LOL. I kind of hope so, just from how you see Nick and Kevin interact, and how Kevin gave Nick that book that basically changed him. Thanks :) lmao, it's always gotta be Howie.
Date: 07/01/10 01:43 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Super chapter. I love that you had him open up to Kevin first and you wrote iot beautifully. And yay! I'm all cuahgt up now! Excellent job Rose. I am loving this story. :O)
Author's Response: Aww thank you. I knew when you started you'd love the Kevin scene. Yay for being caught up...so hopefully I can manage an update soon? lol. Love that you love it.
Date: 06/30/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Six
Aww very adorable chapter with the twins. And it was refreshing seeing what Julie would be like if she ever decided to become a therapist lmao I got a kick out of that! I loved the ending, isn't it funny how little kids can always tell when someone is sad? Excellent job! :O)
Author's Response: lmao glad you got a kick out of that. Totally what I think Julie would be like as a therapist. And it is funny how kids seem to catch things that adults don't see. :) Thanks!
Date: 06/30/10 05:11 am Title: Chapter Seven
I thought I reviewed on DS but I couldn't find it to copy and paste. This chapter was awesome.I'm so glad he opened up to Kevin...I was not expecting that. It was so emotional.I wonder when/how the other guys are gonna find out. And I just wanna say that I LOVE how you have Kev in RENT. When you first mentioned it I was wondering who he was playing...my first thought was maybe Mark. Now as a gay anarchist I'm gonna say...Tom Collins? lol. Just a guess. Love it though! And yeah, it is very AJ. LOL. I can't wait for another update. This is such a tearjerker!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be honest, I wasn't either lmao, that was my muse making a decision for me. Hehe I can so see Kevin doing rent. As for the role, I find Tom a more interesting character, cause yes, it is him LOL. And the fact it's very AJ made me want Kevin to play that role that much more lmao. Thanks Sel!
Date: 06/30/10 02:18 am Title: Chapter Two
I was so excited to get through work today to read the next chapter, and I have to say, I love it! I love the relationship between Nick and Brian, and the slight jump into the future. The imagery is amazing, I love it! Question, have you ever considered writing professionally?
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Um...actually I have, and I want to someday, when I finish a story I feel is...ready? So to speak...so I kind of dream of it. I'm so flattered you asked me that! I second guess myself a lot lol.
Date: 06/29/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter Five
Nick's anger is so real in this chapter, it makes the story even more vivid. You're an excellent writer. I must say this is the first story I've seen in a long time thats drawn me in so quickly. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm just so wow over the compliments LOL. I really appreciate it. So...thank you! lol
Date: 06/29/10 11:05 am Title: Chapter Five
Great job at displaying al of Nick's pent up anger and I did lol when he got his arm stuck in the glass. That would be a very Nick like thing to do. Also loved the forshadowing that the was the best thing to happen to hom that day. That's not usually a good thing. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Author's Response: LOL It's Nick, of course he'd manage to get himself stuck lmao. Thanks Mare!
